Thank you for providing constructive feedback on the first part of this story; I appreciate your efforts.
The story "My Destiny" was not originally intended to be as long as it finally became. Still, when I applied the storyline to the character development, it took on a life of its own. This chapter is slightly longer than the last, as I struggled to find a suitable spot to cut in for a new section.
When writing, I remained conscious of feedback from my friends, who helped proofread and find all the Google corrections. I broke the story into several self-contained chapters that flow into the next. I would love your feedback on this approach.
I set this story in Australia, and I have minimised the language and different measurements to make sure everything is clear while keeping it Australian at its core.
This story is a work of fiction. I have not knowingly written about any person or event. If the characters' actions are similar to a real person or event, I apologise and will edit the story should this be brought to my attention.
All those who participate in sexual activities are above the legal age of consent. While there are references to Bi Sexual activities along with Incest activities, the story remains centred on the female same-sex activities of the main characters.
I have introduced several topics to add to the story and to give me additional topics to expand on the activities of my characters.
With your help and feedback, I have revised this chapter so it flows better as the story develops. I am also more confident that my punctuation and spelling are of a more professional standard than my first draft.
Version 02, Please enjoy
Working with such willing and happy models is a joy and makes any photographic study all the more enjoyable. My friends Annie, Bella and Hannah had supported my current project from the outset. Despite some reservations as their clothes started to come off, they followed my unending directions without argument. The final section of my work involved capturing images with the models naked. Of course, my girlfriend Bella was the first to strip, happy to strut her stuff for me, while her mum Hannah and our friend Annie followed without the need for too much encouragement.
I spent half an hour capturing various tasteful poses before calling it a night. Hannah and Annie grabbed their clothes and headed off to the changerooms while Bella gave me a hand to pack up and put away our used equipment. It was a fantastic night, and we all had fun. When we walked into the changeroom, we stopped in our tracks. There in the shower was Annie with Hannah on her knees, pushing her tongue between the folds of her entrance. Annie was in the throes of erotic pleasure, begging Hannah for more. Annie came to an earth-shattering climax, her knees buckling until she was level with Hannah, taking her into an embrace and passionate kiss. Bella was beside me, holding my arm while slipping a finger into her tunnel; I could feel her getting close to her climax, and all I could do was watch in amazement at the sight before me. At that moment, Bella let out a scream as she fell over her orgasmic cliff, which made both Hannah and Annie look up in shock.
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Hannah
Holy shit, what a night, it had been nearly twenty years since I had enjoyed erotic fun with another woman, but seeing the girls, in particular Annie, naked just got me so excited and wet. It made my primal desires resurface, and it was a scratch that needed to be scratched. When I saw Annie under the shower, I couldn't help but join her. She smiled in surprise when I stepped up to her before leaning in to kiss her. At first, I was tentative, unsure how she would react, but when she returned the gesture, I continued with a passion I had long forgotten. We didn't say a word, and we both became oblivious that we were not alone in the facility.
Annie explored my body with her hands quickly resting on my labia before slipping a finger between the lips into my wet tunnel. I broke the kiss first and took her erect nipples into my mouth, suckling and flicking them until she bucked with a mini orgasm. I kissed her again before I lowered myself to my knees, in the process pressing her against the wall of the shower for stability. I wanted to taste her juices and make her beg for mercy. She tasted divine as my tongue found her erect clit. I pushed a couple of fingers inside her while my tongue went to work, savouring her essence like it was the last drink on earth. I felt her beginning to tense simultaneously, and her breathing became ragged. She let out a deep moan as her climax hit before her knees buckled, and she knelt in front of me. She kissed me deeply, tasting her juices on my tongue. My passion and desires were building before we heard a scream, and I looked towards the door in horror. Bella was naked with a finger deep into her cunt, while Beth, also nude, just stared at us in both shock and awe.