As any of my regular readers know, I like to experiment with my storytelling. This is supposed to be a 'quick wank.' I'm trying to improve and diversify as a storyteller. This is a major departure from my normal 'slow burn' style. I couldn't think of a good name for the story. I just went with the working title. Sorry.
As always, this is just fiction. And, constructive criticism is welcome.
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Evan sits on the couch quietly watching the movie with his parents. His father is in his customary chair. Next to an end table holding nine empty beer bottles. His mother on the opposite end of the couch from Evan.
The spy thriller is boring the shit out of both Evan and Marie. He's seen it over twenty times, and she just can't get into all of the fighting. Evan knows that this is one of his father's demands that they have a family night. Which unfortunately, for the past few years since he started college, has been watching his father get loaded and yell at the television.
"Hey, get me another drink, Marie," he instructs her as he belches.
Sarcastically, she replies, "Of course, O, sexy beast love of my life." She gets up to go to the kitchen. Evan watches her leave. He feels a naughty thrill watching her hips sway as she walks. Especially since she's lost over 150 pounds in the past couple of years. She has been working her ass of on the gag gift of a stationary bike that his father got her as a birthday gift the year he left for college. Miraculously, she hasn't lost much weight in her bust.
Thinking to himself, "It's probably that weird as diet she on." He adjusts his basketball shorts to relieve some of the growing pressure.
Evan hears her curse that the beer is gone. He knows that means his father will be switching to whiskey. Tonight could get interesting. In a bad way. Cops knocking on the door kind of way. She comes back in with one of those fancy insulated tumblers. "You're out of beer. Here's your whiskey and coke, beloved." Evan hears dark tones in her voice. He's betting that one of them is sleeping on the couch tonight. His hopes of watching a porn are dashed. His father has blocked all internet access to anything considered fun.
He remembers his father lecturing him, "The internet is for intelligent things like research and academics and the news. Not yanking on your meat." Even though his father watches copious amounts of conspiracy theory videos on the internet.
Marie sits back down on the couch, but laying down this time with her feet in Evan's lap. "Rub my feet will you, baby?" she asks her son.
"Mom, I just..." Evan starts to complain. After all, he finished his sixth consecutive ten hour shift at a construction job that his father required him to get.
"Don't tawk bact to yer mother, boy," his father snaps without turning to look at them. The slurring speech is not a good sign. In order to keep the peace and not have a violent episode from his father, Evan pulls his mother's feet into his lap. "She works hawd down at da mill all day. She consta... always walking around."
Evan adjusts himself to keep her feet from touching his semi-erection. She coos, "Oh. That's so nice," as he presses his fingers into the soles and pinch at the arches of her left foot. Evan's consultation prize is getting to watch her luscious thicc thighs squirm in delight from the foot message. Her heavy chest jiggles as she starts to pant. Evan wonders if he's smelling what he thinks he's smelling.
Ten / fifteen minutes later, Evan has finished with both feet and is about to push her feet off when his father calls for another drink. Marie sighs, "Of course Richard." She swings her feet off of Evan's lap and plops them onto the floor. She called him Richard.
She actually called him Richard. Evan knows that there'll be a fight soon.
"I told to you to not call me that. That name that I, uh, hate."
She takes the tumbler from him, and heads into the kitchen. Calling out from the kitchen, "Robert do you remember what today is?"
"Not a clue. Did you get a premonition at work?" Robert replies. Evan groans. His father's response tells him how drunk he is. He's getting his words confused.
As she's handing him the refilled tumbler, she reminds him, "It's my birthday, Bob."
"Oh shit, really?" Evans eyes pop open at his father's response. He moves quickly off of the couch.
"I'll be right back," he says over his shoulder. He had originally planned to prank his mother by pretending to forget about her birthday, and giving it to her at breakfast. He finds it easily and hustles back into the living room. His mother is sitting in her same spot with her legs gathered up to her chest. She is glaring hostilely at her husband of 19 years.
Evan lightly deposits the box, balancing it on her kneecaps. She gasps as she realizes that he just gave her a gift. Evan re-assumes his spot. Robert does not notice the exchange since he is chugging his drink.
Just after unraveling the ribbon on the small box containing her gift, Marie hears her husband rattling his tumbler, demanding a refill.
"I'll be back," she whispers as she drops the box into Evan's lap. She grabs the tumbler from her husband's hand. She returns quickly. After pressing the tumbler into Robert's hand, Marie drops her ass down next to Evan. She opens the box. Listening to Robert's tumbler make gurgling noises, Marie gasps. "This is too expensive!" Marie keeps her voice low.
Evan shrugs, "So? I only have one more payment left."
Marie shoves it back into his hands, whispering, "Put it on me, baby. PUT IT ON ME!"
As Evan pulls the silver chain with the sparkling red heart shaped pendant out of the box, Robert grumbles, "What are you two going on about?"
"Evan is trying to convince me that I shouldn't hate this movie," Marie snaps at her husband. Her mood instantly improves as Evan finishes clasping the silver chain around her neck. The pendant catches the light to gather attention to her cleavage.
Marie pulls the blanket off of the back of the couch and lofts it over them both. "Thank you, baby. This deserves a snuggle and my focused attention."
Robert chokes momentarily after the first sip, "The hell, woman! Who taught you how to pour a drink?!
Marie can't disguise her anger and irritation at the interruption when she responds, "You did! I'm still pouring your drinks the way that you showed me 14 years ago when I finally turned 21. And, I'm sure that you'll show Evan how to pour your drinks next year when he's turns 21."
Looking at Evan, she grumbles, "At least you're aren't an abusive drunk."
Robert doesn't hear the comment. "You're God damn right that I'll teach the boy how to pour a proper drink. Since you've forgotten how to." His attention never leaves the television screen.
Mere seconds later, Evan feels a soft and warm hand rubbing the inside of his thigh, pushing his shorts up his leg. He tries to ignore it and his growing erection.
Evan cannot ignore the soft touches on his nuts. He doesn't say anything. He starts to control his breathing.
Evan's breath escapes forcefully as he feels delicate fingers wrap around his thickening dick. Fortunately for him, this is at the same instance that the protagonist of the movie kills one of the main antagonist's allies on the screen. Robert comments, "Yeah, I know. That was a good kill."
Evan slowly turns his head to look at his mother. She is focused on screen. He can feel her acrylic nails playing across his blood fueled flesh. Marie plays around with Evan's dick as she releases it and lightly drags her fingers up and down his shaft.
Evan whispers, "What are you doing?"
She throws him a quick glance before refocusing on the television. She answers with a husky voice, "Expensive gifts deserve some thanks. And don't think for a minute that I haven't noticed you watching me." Evan's heart skips a beat. "You have no idea how much I want attention. This kind of attention." Her hand grips his cock, and squeezes hard. She pumps his dick several times.
"Oh! Shit! So close!" Evan blurts out. He immediately fears his father's reaction.
Without looking away from the screen, Robert replies, "I know. The director knows how to build a screen."
Marie dives under the blanket. Her hand is furiously pumping Evan's dick. The breaking point for Evan is feeling her lips form a vacuum seal around the tip of his dick. Her hand, that was previously stroking his dick slaps onto his mouth. He groans as he blows a wad of sperm into his mother's mouth.
"Yeah, that was a sloppy kill." his father comments about the movie.
Marie swirls her tongue around cock. Absolutely lavishing it with her full attention. She feels a painful pinch on the back of her neck causing her to stop and let his dick drop from her mouth. She notices it rapidly softening.
"I'm gone ta bed. Son. Tell you mother at she ish not welcome to john me. Whenever you find out where she went ta pout. I'm tire of 'er shit fo tonigh. She can seep on da couch," Robert tells him. "Hell, she can seep in you bed for as mush as I care. Ah know that yer a weak ass bish when it comes to bean a man. She's train you. You ta be. Be a pussy." Robert meanders off with a lot of stutter steps and fumbling after finishing is drunken tirade.
Evan keeps her head pressed to his leg. Every time that he hears her about to say something, Evan pushes the blanket into her mouth.
Once the master bedroom door audibly closes, Marie yanks the blanket off of her head. She growls, "What the fuck, Evan?!"
"What? Did you want to provoke him?"
"What?" she demands.
"What happened the last time that I stood up for you?"
Without realizing that the words were slipping out of her mouth, "He beat you into a bloody pulp and sent you to the hospital." She clamps her hands onto her mouth. Now she realizes what he just did. "Go to your room, baby."