This is the fifth chapter of seven in Book 1 of the
Charlie and Mindy
tetralogy—which is a story of forbidden love between a brother and a sister. I am rewriting and reposting a series I removed over two years ago.
It takes time for the chaste love between a brother and a sister to become erotic love between a man and a woman, and the first few chapters of this book chronicle that transformation, so the early chapters of this series may not be what you're looking for. While there is sexual activity in every chapter, the "good parts" of the story don't appear until later chapters.
You can follow Charlie and Mindy's hike on USGS topographical maps or on on-line versions of them. (There are a number of good ones on the Web.) This chapter begins at their campsite above Island Lake, and they return to their old campsite at the upper Pole Creek crossing.
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Friday
It was a cold night, even in the tent. I remember waking up, not too long after falling asleep, to pull the sleeping bag's top zipper up all the way—after which I rolled toward Mindy and pulled her close. She sighed and snuggled in close without waking. I vaguely recall a few more episodes of waking briefly when one of us, feeling too cold, or just too lonely, pulled the other close. Her little body felt like a toasty warm furnace in the doubled sleeping bag with me.
We woke together, I think, early that morning, trying to find each other. We lay there in each other's arms, trying to come to grips with consciousness. Her naked boobs pressed against my own bare chest. She wiggled her hips as she snuggled against me, showing me that she had trapped my morning wood, which projected from my boxers as usual, between her thighs. She rubbed her cleft against it, through the thin cotton of her boxers. I approved; rubbed back.
"Mmmm," she murmured, "that feels good. Do you dirty old men ever not have boners?"
"Oh, once or twice a month we don't. But I always do when a naughty little babe rubs her tits and her pussy against me."
She grinned, continued to rub. And she wiggled her shoulders so that her tits would rub against me, too.
"I am
not
little."
"I thought we settled that last night when I magmanimous… manganomous… magnimamous…"
"Is 'magnanimously' what you're trying for? It means 'with great generosity.'"
"Yes…when I, with great generosity, didn't drop you into the pond over there."
"'Magnanimously' my ass! You weren't man enough! And speaking of asses, who was it that wound up flat on his, Mr. Great Generosity?"
"That was the biggest, dirtiest
cheat
I've ever seen. It wasn't a fair fight. You used your feminine wiles."
"Yes, I'm feminine whiles you're not. And it isn't my fault that girls are just naturally smarter than boys."
I kissed her. We squeezed each other. But our bladders were too full for us to keep up the rubbing, however good it felt, and we were soon out of the tent. There was frost on the ground here and there, and on some of the boulders nearby; we hadn't just imagined that it'd been a cold night.
The sun wasn't up yet, but the sky was a clear dark blue, so sunrise was about a half an hour off. But even when the sun had risen above the horizon, making it officially day, we would still be in the shadow of ridges to the northeast. So we were an hour or two from getting any warmth from that source.
We scurried off to empty our bladders, and then, shivering in the cold, we scurried back to our packs. We dug out our woolies and got dressed as quickly as we could. There wasn't much breeze, so we warmed up pretty quickly once we had some layers on. It was time to think about breakfast. I started heating the water for the coffee.
"Oatmeal and pancakes?" I asked.
"Can I make the pancakes?" she asked.
"Sure. What about the oatmeal?"
"Too easy for an expert chef like me. Any dope can fix oatmeal. Even you can do it."
"You're just asking for it this morning, aren't you?"
She looked at me. Gave me her most evil grin. "I just might ask for something this evening."
"I call a foul! Illegal use of feminine wiles! Again!"
"Poor boy."
"Man!"
"Poor, poor little man."
I gave up and started getting the food out. Our verbal exchanges almost always wound up with me flat on my figurative ass and her standing over me. That wasn't ever going to change, I was beginning to understand. But it hadn't really sunk in yet.
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We had another long hike that day. I wanted to camp that night where we'd camped Tuesday evening—right below the uppermost Pole Creek Crossing. So today's hike would be a rerun, in reverse, of Wednesday's. It was still pretty early when, camp chores completed, we got on the march. We were still wearing a layer of wool against the morning chill.
We headed back down to Island Lake. When we topped the rim of our little basin, the lower three-quarters of the lake came into view. As before, there were campsites along the lakeshore—though they seemed to be in different places than earlier. People had left, others had arrived.
At the bottom of our ramp, the Indian Pass Trail awaited us. We climbed up toward the unnamed pass that led to Little Seneca Lake. Again, we were lucky; we saw no one on the trail near Island Lake. As we topped the pass, we did encounter a party of five hikers traveling in a close group. But they were my kind of folks—respectful of other peoples' wishes to avoid unnecessary human interaction in the wilderness. We exchanged no words. They simply nodded politely at us as we passed; we nodded politely back.
Then we were back on the short ramp that leads past cliffs down through a notch to the trail junction where we'd lunched on Wednesday. We reached that junction a little past mid-morning, and took a break. The sun had warmed us, and we stripped down to our hiking shorts and shirts. We were feeling pretty good; after four full days at high elevation, three of them involving a substantial amount of hard labor, our bodies had hardened a little, and we'd acclimated some to the altitude. The view, though familiar, was no less awe-inspiring than it had been two days before. After ten minutes or so, we followed the Highline Trail across the basin toward Lester Pass.
It was nearly an hour later, and I was ahead of Mindy, rounding one of the switchback turns about halfway up the northwest shoulder of Lester Pass, when a rock rolled backwards and out from under my left foot. I'd just lifted my right foot and started to swing it through to step forward. I heard Mindy yell "Charlie!" as the mountain jumped up and body-slammed me with all the force of my 60-pound pack added to my own 190 pounds. Pain transfixed me. I didn't lose consciousness, but the impact dazed me. I don't have a very clear memory of the next minute or so.
When my mind started functioning again, my first thought was to take inventory of what hurt and what didn't. Most of the pain had localized to my right upper arm and my upper right shin. I lay on my right side on the trail. Most of the weight of my pack was on the ground—indeed, the pack supported me more than I supported it.
Mindy had managed, somehow, to shed her pack; she knelt beside me, looking very worried. She implored me to speak to her as she unbuckled my waist belt and loosened my shoulder straps. I looked back at her and somehow contrived a weak smile; I couldn't remember ever being so glad to see her.
When she saw that I'd responded (I have no idea if, or how long, I'd been unresponsive), some of the worry left her face, and she asked, "Are you okay, Charlie?" She smiled back at me—also weakly.
"I think so," I replied. "But I'm not sure. I'm pretty shook up. Give me a minute."
She continued to help me unstrap my pack, so I could move more easily. By the time we got me free, I knew that I hadn't broken any bones. I got to my feet. I could walk, and I could use my arm—both without additional pain. She steered me to a nearby boulder that I could sit on.
The pain in my arm was already diminishing; it felt like Mindy had learned how to deliver an effective punch and given me one there. (I was a little befuddled, but even so, I knew better than to tell her that.) My shin felt like a different story.
"I'm okay, I think," I told Mindy. "My shin hurts pretty bad, but everything else seems to be fine."
She smiled, but I could see that she was still worried. She ran her hands over my head, applying light pressure to see if I yelped. I didn't; I hadn't hit my head. She made me move all of my joints and muscles. They all worked without complaining. She began running her hands over me, gently squeezing or pressing parts of me to see if I'd hurt something and not noticed.
Under other circumstances, that would've been pretty enjoyable. In fact, even under those circumstances, I liked it—and not just because she was doing exactly the right thing. I almost said something about having a cute babe feel me up. But she was, correctly, treating this as serious business, and I figured out in time that making a smart-assed remark like that wouldn't be wise.
Eventually we decided that the pain in my shin, where a rock had scraped off a two-inch square of skin, was from the worst of the injuries I'd sustained. It was only an abrasion—though it was a nasty-looking one.
We had a stuff-sack full of first-aid equipment with us, and she dug it out of my pack. She poured some of her iodized drinking water onto the wound, and cleaned it as best she could with a sterile gauze pad. Then she spread some antibiotic ointment on the bleeding area.
As she taped another gauze pad over it, I realized that she, too, had sustained a shock, and that taking care of me had helped her recover from it. But I also knew that that wasn't why she'd taken care of me.