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Prologue: The Meeting
The captain stepped onto land timidly. It had been at least 3 months since his ship had docked. He always hated it. There were so many things to worry about; the authority, rivals, angry woman, the husbands of angry women. It was always a gamble, but here, he was excited. He had never docked here before, and he was looking forward to the chance to wench and drink.
He walked down the dirty streets, still half expecting to get shot at any moment. As such, he kept his hand on the hilt of his sword, right next to his pistol. A seedy little spot caught his eye while he walked, just a few yards down the road. The sign read, "The Submissive Succubus." He was intrigued, he liked places like this, they always gave him the chance to grab a girl, fuck her, and then be on his way.
He walked in, immediately being accosted with the powerful aroma of alcohol and vomit. He smiled slightly. He knew he would like it here. As he went to find a seat, he noticed a particularly clean looking wench trying to weave her way through a maze of groping and invasive hands. Her blonde hair swung from side to side in a tight ponytail, he tits bounced slightly, and her hips moved entrancingly the way she was forced to bend, avoiding the hands of the drunkards around her.
He didnt even take one step towards her before a particularly ugly drunk got up from his seat as she walked by and grabbed her by the throat. He threw her down on the table and lifted up her skirt. She wasnt wearing anything under it, and he giggled stupidly as he shoved three fingers inside her. She yelped but then stayed quiet. It was the policy of most of these places that these things happen, the less the wench fights, the better it is for her. The captain had never liked stupid drunks taking advantage of women because they were stronger. If they liked it, that was one thing, but this...he couldn't stand for. However, he wanted to see where the drunk would take the situation; perhaps he would gain a reason to kill the man, instead of just beating him.
He pulled his fingers out of her and started fumbling with the buttons on his pants. Once he finally got his cock out, the captain almost laughed out loud. The man was as hard as a rock, and maybe a full 3 and a half inches in length, along with being the skinniest cock he had ever seen. His hand reached down to the handle of his pistol and almost at the exact moment the man was fully inside her, there was also a bullet fully inside his skull. He fell to the ground and the pub grew quiet instantly. They all looked over at the captain, who just stood there, grinning like a fool, as happy as could be. His canines were longer than normal, ground down to sharp points, his long black beard reached down to his sternum, and his moustache, almost equally as long, braided and beaded. Every one who might have thought that they would be angry at the intrusion immediately thought better of dealing with a man who took so much joy in death.
The captain, now straight faced, walked over to the wench and pulled her up off the table. He sat down on the chair the dead man had once sat in and pulled out his cock. He took the girl and set her down on top of him. She moaned slightly as he entered her. She rocked back and forth for a few minutes before she shook with her orgasm. The captain picked her up and sat her down on top of the nearest table. He started stroking his cock over her face and then shot his cum all down her body. She looked up at him innocently and said, "My clothes are ruined." He tore all the clothes off her body in one clean motion, slapped her ass slightly and then said, "Now get me a fucking whiskey before I stick this all the way down your throat."
She hesitated, almost as though she was considering taking him up on that offer. The captain was really beginning to like this girl. She got up to get him his drink and as she walked away, the captain watched her beautiful shapely ass sway back and forth. A thought suddenly occurred to him and he asked, "What's your name, whore?"
"Betsy, sir."
"Forget the whiskey and meet me at the docks tonight, Betsy." This woman would be the perfect addition to his crew.
Chapter 1: The First Night
The captain sauntered back to the docks. His night had been full of drinking and fighting. As he got closer to his ship, he saw that whore, Betsy, near the walkway onto his ship. She was on her knees with a man's hand on the back of her head, pushing her head onto his cock with some force. As he got even closer, he saw that the man was Eldric, one of his crew members. He took his pistol out and shot at the man, knocking his wide brimmed hat off his bald skull. He was one of the black men he and his crew had picked up off a remote island that he was pretty sure no one knew existed. The two men that came from that island had strange cocks, the same average length of his or any of his other crews, but thicker and bent in a zigzag pattern. The man stopped what he was doing, pulled his cock out of her mouth just in time to piss all over his pants. The captain shouted at him, "Eld, don't you dare fucking ruin my new cabin wench before I get my night with her, you dumb bastard." When Eld realized who it was, he relaxed a little, but he stayed stationary, knowing that the captain had no qualms about shooting a crew member if they stepped over the line.
He walked over and picked Betsy up by her hair. He straightened out her clothing and then walked up the walk way, intending for her to follow him. She did, and looked back at the big man, Eldric, wondering what it would feel like to have that strange cock pulsing inside her. She was more interested, however, in all the things the captain could and most likely would do to her as soon as they were alone. She was scared, but she could feel her juices dripping down her legs.
They walked into the cabin. The captain took his dirty black coat and hung it on a hook drilled into the wall. He began to unbutton his shirt, she timidly began to pull her shirt off, but the captain smiled and shook his head. Once his shirt was off, he walked over to her. He looked into her eyes and smirked. His right eyebrow raised and his hand reached up and grabbed the collar of her shirt. He gripped hard and pulled, and almost instantly there was a small tear at the top of the shirt. He pulled his hand away, smiled a tooth filled grin and then grabbed one side of the torn shirt with each hand and pulled. Her breasts showed free, naturally hanging, but not too much, with perfectly sized nipples. He stared at them until she was uncomfortable, but she knew his stare meant that he was enjoying it. He reached up tentatively and grabbed one, at first gentle, but getting more and more confident with his groping. They were a good handful, and he could feel her nipples hardening in his palms. Once he seemed bored of this, his facial expression changed. Suddenly he was nothing but lustful, there was still bemusement in his eyes, but more so, there was just passion. He wanted her, and he was going to take her.
He slapped her left tit and she moaned. He picked her up by her waist and threw her on the bed. She screamed while she was in the air, just for a second, and it only heightened the captains want for her. Hopefully, he thought, She will scream like that with a thick cock inside her. He tore off her pants, revealing what can only be described as a thin strip of fabric that was intended to cover her, but was failing miserably. He pushed it aside as he knelt down in front of her, grabbing onto her right tit, while pushing his hand under her ass to lift her cunt closer to his mouth.
His tongue slowly came out of his mouth, just slightly touching her clit hood. Nothing too exciting, but she could feel it, and she knew that she was going to like whatever came next. His tongue kept snaking down her cunt, deliberately missing her clit, and spending time pushing her lips around. She moaned, begging him for more. He stuck his tongue out more, travelling barely an inch inside her, but then it began to move quickly up and down, back and forth, vibrating inside her. After a minute of this, he took her nether lips into his mouth and sucked on them slightly. Then, before she realized what was happening, his tongue was on her clit, furiously moving from side to side. She moaned loudly, and he worked faster. For what seemed like hours this went on, until he put a finger inside her cunt. Almost immediately, he felt her pussy walls starting to contract and so he stopped. She whimpered, wishing only that he would have kept going for just a second longer.
He stood up and stepped away. She sat up and brought her face to his crotch. She opened her mouth and lightly bit his hard on through his pants. He grinned, and she reached up and pulled his pants down. She grabbed his cock in her right hand and began to stroke up and down. Amazingly, his cock got even harder as she did this. She took it and lightly slapped it against her face a few times, smiling wickedly. Then, she kissed the tip, opening her mouth just a little bit. She stroked it for a few minutes with just the tip on her lips before she took it all in her mouth, bobbing her head back and forth, trying as hard as she could do get him off. He wouldn't let her, though. The night was not over.