This is the first part of a story I have been working on for a while now, if people like it I will have several more parts to upload soon afterwards.
If anyone spots any inconsistencies with the RPG system, or have any suggestions about how I could make it more clear or things I could add please let me know. but This is my first attempt at writing this kind of story and I am sure there will be some quirks to work out. I appreciate any constructive criticism or interesting suggestions about making the system work.
Also thanks so much to EvalineDoll for editing it was very helpful.
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Part 1
Gasping for air with cramping lungs, I ran down a dark and smelly alleyway. I cursed as I tripped over a bump and nearly pitched headfirst into a pile of trash. I didn't want to look too closely at it. Gritting my teeth, I muffled my curses and rubbed at my aching ankle. I must have hit some kind of metal bar. I checked over my shoulder to make sure nobody was following me. Thankfully, all I could see was the faint glow of mysterious puddles reflecting the bright pink neon lights.
The only sounds I could hear was the normal heartbeat of New Hope City. The constant rumble and growling of vehicles nearby and the screeching of metal on metal from the tram systems. The sounds of sirens and distant shouting. Nothing close enough to be anyone following me thankfully. I had managed to evade the last guy who had been tailing me by running through a crowded casino and slipping out a back window and falling into a dumpster. It didn't seem like he had caught on to where I had gone yet.
I looked up at the large glowing neon sign overhead that spelled out the name of the place: The Violet Palace.
I was in deep shit. I was hoping to find the last place anyone would have looked for me. The club was my last hope for salvation.
I didn't have a single credit to my name and had a mountain of debts to some very serious people. There were a few who if I didn't pay them back, I would end up as a corpse in an alley without most of my organs.
Nobody would really care if I ended up that way. I was nobody, useless and faceless in the megacity that had over three billion people. I was one of the tens of millions of unclassed kids who hadn't turned twenty yet. I lived in unclassed shelters. I managed to work as a runner for the gangs on occasion. I had no living family, no real friends, and no allies that I didn't owe tons of money to.
So in spite of knowing it was a terrible idea, and knowing that going to the palace would likely end poorly for me, there was no other way to get some quick money that didn't involve killing someone or robbing some place. The boss was expecting me, I had already sent word about my offer, and had been told to get there as soon as possible.
A short time later, with my ankle still aching, I limped down the steps to a basement entrance and knocked on the door. I waited nervously looking, around praying to the system that nobody would see me. I hoped that I didn't look as desperate as I felt.
When the door finally swung open,I hurried in past the massive bouncer who towered over me. He looked at my skinny frame with obvious disdain. I entered an office at the end of the hall after knocking and hearing the deep voice inside say enter.
Behind the desk, was a large and unreal looking man and the one I had come here to see: Silas Gold.
When standing, he was around 6'5" and built like a god. His hair looked like actual spun gold and his eyes sparkled with golden flecks in the silvery irises. His power was palpable even when I was just standing there several feet away.
Looking at him, I couldn't help but tremble and think about the legends I had heard of him. How he had reached tier three and had some kind of metal mastery class. The proof was a video I had seen of him summoning a spike of solid gold and spearing a guy through the head in less time than it took for the guy to reach for a gun.
In the gang known as the Violet Fangs, he was untouchable. In the wider city, he was one of an elite few who had managed to reach that level of power.
He stood up from his chair and stretched his arms before stepping around the desk and towering over me. "So Remi is it? You said your birthday is tomorrow, correct?"
"Yes it is. Um... I know you do experiments and stuff with classes and the selection. I was hoping that I could get paid to be a part of that," I said with as much courage as I could muster, repeating what I had sent to him earlier.
It was difficult to not show how nervous I was, standing in front of this man was terrifying. I kept replaying the memory of that video I had seen. The golden spike dripping blood and brains on the ground was vivid in my mind. It would have normally kept me away from him and any kind of offer he had.
But I had the choice to either try and become a killer, or work for one. It was just the way things worked in our fucked up world. The people with the power to kill controlled everything.
"Well as I am sure you know already, I am always looking for more people to test the system with. But you understand what that means right? I will get full control over your system selections and you won't get any kind of say in how it goes."
I hesitated but nodded at him, grimacing as I did.
"I asked some of the guys about you. You work part time as a runner you don't normally steal too much or step on people's toes. Smart kids like you wouldn't be here if you had any other choice. So you must have fucked up pretty bad."
He let the words hang and I couldn't help but look at the ground and just nod my head.
"Well in that case. As payment for your participation in my experiment, I will put word out that you are here and I will pay off anyone who shows up looking for payment from you while you remain here. Once we are all finished with the experiment, I will give you a payout of two thousand credits. How does that sound?"
That was not what I had been hoping for at all. Some others had said Silas had paid some people over five thousand credits for letting him do this. But he obviously knew I had no choice and was taking advantage of it.
That being said, it would mean that anyone really invested in finding me would come here eventually and get dealt with. If not, the two thousand credits would pay off some of my debts, and it would be enough to get me out of this part of town. Hopefully whatever class I ended up with would let me make a living somewhere else far away from this shitty neighborhood.
"Yeah alright," I said, my voice catching as I felt the inevitability of my situation land on my shoulders.
"Great, we will get started immediately. Put on this bracelet and link with it. It will allow me to see your status and make selections. You also might want to sit down. The sensation for an unclassed can be unsettling."
He gestured to the chair in front of his desk after handing me a thin silver bracelet.
I took a shuddering breath and sat down in the chair in front of him and slipped the bracelet over my wrist.
Looking at the bracelet, I focused my thoughts on it and pushed on the strange internal sense. I had gotten it when the basic system interface was unlocked on my sixteenth birthday, nearly four years ago. I had nothing like any of the mana abilities someone with a class would have access to, but like everyone who accepted the system, I gained an ability to sense my internal mana. That mana could be mentally pushed on and manipulated slightly.
Using this reserve is how most enchanted items worked. A person would touch or get within the area of an enchantment and would push out their mana, allowing it to touch the lattice or enchantment of whatever it was. That would allow them to interact with it in some way, or potentially power it, using the person's internal mana to do so.
Once I pushed my power to the bracelet, it shrunk becoming uncomfortably tight on my wrist. I let out a small gasp which made Silas chuckle.
"Little nervous? Now let's take a look at your status."
I felt a tingle of mana as my system screen was pulled up.
STATUS
Name: Remi Henshin
Age: 19
Class: LOCKED
General Skills (4/4)
Cleaning - level 4 (Maximum level reached)
Running - level 4 (Maximum level reached)
Sneaking - level (Maximum level reached)
Lying - level 4 (Maximum level reached)
Bonded Items
System Control Cuff - Requires command word to remove
System Credits: 0
"Well now, quite the runner it would seem. Very useful skills, I bet you put a lot of work into those," Silas said while staring into the air, clearly looking at a status screen.
I watched Silas as a tingle of mana ran through me from the bracelet. I saw screen after screen pop up in front of me.
Confirm remove general skill: Cleaning - YES - Skill removed *
Confirm remove general skill: Running - YES - Skill removed *