This is pure fantasy I don't know how it really works with transsexuals. Again feedback is appreciated. Please tell me how I might improve my writing, not just telling me you hate my writing.
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"There's Paul, gotta go."
"Have fun." Nina struggled to maintain her smile until her roommate Keri left. Nina was happy that Keri had found someone who made her happy, but she just wished that someone could be
her
. Nina had been in love with her roommate for months, not quite since they had moved in together a year ago. Nina had tried to broach the idea to Keri, but she had made it clear she was only interested in men. Nina had decided it best to give up, because she had a secret, she was a shemale, a woman in every respect, but one she had a cock instead of a pussy between her legs. It had been difficult growing up, because of her genitals she had been raised a boy, but at the age of ten her chest changed, at first it was just two small lumps, however it was soon apparent that she was growing breasts.
A trip to the doctor soon revealed the truth. Nina had always felt strange when she was told she was a boy, although she never wore dresses and only wore skirts when she absolutely had to. The only thing that changed was that she could grow her hair longer and wear makeup, not that she ever wore that much. Her parents had been confused but decided the best thing would be for her to changes schools, rather than have her deal with the reactions of her peers when she left one day as a boy and returned the next day a girl. Nina wasn't happy about being separated from her friends, but she wasn't sure she could face them anyway.
Nina had had a few date, all with men, but her roommate had little modesty and she had seen her naked a few times. The result was that Nina found herself fantasizing about Keri. Nina realized that it was seven, which meant that she needed to leave for her class, she was finished with school, for over a year now, but this was a hypnosis class that she was taking for fun. Nina arrived at the class, but she was not really paying attention, she was far too distracted by thoughts of Keri. Finally the class ended and Nina was gathering her things, when she realized that someone was standing by the table. Nina looked up to see Miss Collier, the teacher looking down at her with obvious concern.
"Nina normally you're very vocal in class and tonight you weren't even paying attention, what happened?" Nina's mouth fell open and her eyes went wide. "Nina, your mind was on someone else, your roommate probably." If anything Nina's eyes went wider as she nodded. "Don't worry, I just figured it out from the way you talk about her. I'm guessing she's pursuing some boy and shows you no interest. Have you thought about hypnotizing her, that way you can cut through all of the issues to sort this out and you won't have to worry about what she thinks." Nina brightened up and Miss Collier smiled.
"Thank you Miss Collier." Miss Collier shook her head.
"Nina, when class is over you call me Kalani and have fun." Miss Collier returned to her desk to gather her own stuff to leave and Nina also left. Once home Nina sat in the living room considering how she would convince Keri to allow her to hypnotize her. Then she remembered that Keri had been stressing over work, she was up for promotion and wasn't sleeping, because she was uncertain if she'd get it or not. Satisfied that she had a reason for Keri, she considered what she would do once she was hypnotized. At last Keri arrived although she had clearly been drinking she was only a little unsteady as she came in and sat heavily on the couch. Nina looked her over, Keri was all contrasts, green eyes, black hair pale skin and an overall dainty body, whereas Nina was almost six feet tall with dark skin. Nina wasn't huge, but she wasn't as fragile as her roommate looked.
"Keri, what happened?" Keri turned to her.
"Paul thought I would be interested in trying something new if I was drunk enough, but there's no way that I would be
that
drunk." Keri was fuming, even if her words were occasionally slurred.
"What was it?" Keri was hesitant.