Author's note:
This is my first attempt, so constructive feedback welcome. I do have ideas for other stories incorporating some of the characters in this story.
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Craig's phone pinged with a message. Reaching forward he picked it off the coffee table and read the message.
"Everything ok?" asked Jim.
"Sure, it's just from Tina, apparently Karen's in danger of getting wasted so she's taking her back to their room".
"Ah, ok, is Karen the Hen, they're in York didn't you say?"
"Yeah, Karen's the hen, yes, I think Teen's just trying to keep Karen in a fit state for this evening, she's been landed with the job of making all the arrangements".
"Including a stripper?" asked Jim.
"Ha, I don't think so, she certainly didn't mention it. No she booked all the accommodation, travel, a meal out tonight - you know all that stuff."
"Yeah, more work than you think."
"True, but the bit that peeved Teen was that no-one else wanted to share a room with Karen."
"Why's that?" asked Jim.
"Well" Craig chuckled, "No-one wanted to be 'cock blocker' if Karen decided to have one last night of fun"
"Oh, I see" laughed Jim, "and what do you reckon are the chances Karen will want to make use of her last night of freedom?"
"Well I don't really know Karen, but from what Teen tells me, she's a very in control kind of person, guess that's why she's a Team Leader in the call centre"
"Only hint of anything different that I know of was at the Christmas Party. She got a bit flirtatious after a few drinks, had a row with her fiancée"
"That doesn't sound too good" Jim responded.
"Well it didn't go down too well with Roger - he's Karen's fiancée. He stormed off from what Teen told me. He works in Accounts, classic nerdy geek with oversize glasses. The type of guy that considers Accounting books as suitable bedtime reading."
They both laughed. "No one knows what Karen sees in Roger. Karen's quite attractive, not as attractive as my Teen. Karen's a brunette, nice hair, long, straight and glossy, hangs well below her shoulder when it's not tied back. She's a bit heavier than Teen and with big tits that she usually does her best to disguise - you know thick jumpers, high necked tops. "
"Such a waste when women don't show off their assets" sighed Jim.
"True, Teen's not like that, well not when she's at home with me."
"How do you mean?" asked Jim curious to know more.
"Well Teen's always liked to tease me, she says it turns her on, knowing that she's getting me hard"
"That sounds like my kinda girl" said Jim.
"Sorry mate, she's mine" laughed Craig. "But when you're wandering round the supermarket and Teen leans up and whispers in your ear that she's not wearing any knickers, well that just gets me going. We're usually out of there pretty quick after that."
"I bet"
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Fortunately it was just a short walk back to the hotel from the pub, and just as well given the heels that Karen was wearing, they were clearly designed for appearance rather than comfort.
Tina and a slightly tipsy Karen tottered through the revolving door into the airy hotel atrium. The friendly female receptionist who'd checked them in a few hours earlier looked up from her desk as their heels echoed against the tiles.
"Everything ok ladies?" she asked.
"We're fine thanks" Tina replied.
As the lift doors closed the receptionist could hear giggles, and a long "Nooo". The doors closed as Tina spoke "Come on Karen, there's no way she thought we were lesbians" and once again they giggled.
Back in the room Tina set out about the practicalities. She needed to ensure that Karen would be sober enough to enjoy the planned itinerary for tonight. Tina went to the mini bar and retrieved a bottle of chilled water.
"Here Karen, best if you take a break from the booze til this evening"
"God it's like having my mum here" she laughed, but she didn't protest, and took the glass and drank from it. For the next half an hour or so Tina was sommelier, or whatever a server of chilled water might be called, attentively keeping Karen's glass of water topped up.
"Blimey Tina, how much water have you been giving me?"
"Well we've,", then pausing, "actually you've, nearly finished the second half litre bottle."
"No wonder I need to go" said Karen, and with that she disappeared into the en suite, only half-closing the door. Seconds later Tina could hear the familiar splashing sound as Karen emptied her bladder. "Don't mind me" Tina thought as she considered Karen's uncharacteristically uninhibited behaviour.
"Ah that feels a lot better" Karen announced as she came back into the bedroom. I think I'll have a lie down before we get ready for tonight", and having announced that, she slipped off her heels and got onto her generous queen size bed.
"Aren't you going to rest your eyes too Tina? We need to be at full strength for this evening."
Tina glanced at her watch, "Ok I think we can allow half an hour, an hour max, then we'll need to get ready before the others join us for prosecco. I've booked the restaurant - Marco's for 8:30, and also a minibus so we can all travel together, it should be here at about 8pm."
"Very organised, and have you booked me a stripper too?" asked Karen.
"Bloody hell Karen! Is that what you wanted?"
Unknown to Karen this subject had been discussed amongst the rest of the hen party during the preceding weeks, and there had been some hesitancy about whether it would be appropriate. Some in Karen's work team liked the idea of seeing Karen with a stripper, but there was an edge of uncertainty, in particular that she might not be able to shake off her Team Leader role. There was a risk that it might all get a bit awkward and embarrassing, not to mention that each of the hen party would have to chip in extra to cover the cost.
"Well I've done a bit of research Karen and found some good bars and also a couple of clubs that seem to have a good vibe."
"Ok, well I just want a chance to shake it one last time", and then gave Tina an unmistakably mischievous grin.
Tina smiled, and wondered just how much Karen wanted to shake.
Tina laid back on her bed and idly played with her phone pinging WhatsApp messages back and forth with the other hens. It seemed like they had stopped drinking for now and had wandered around doing a bit of retail therapy and were on their way back to the hotel, allowing time to get ready for the evening. Tina sent Craig an update, telling him how Karen seemed to be back on track for this evening. Being the co-ordinator was hard work, and it meant that Tina could never fully relax.
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"Do you want to shower first Karen, or would you prefer me to go first?"
"Oh you go first, I need to sort out my outfit."
Tina popped into the en suite, and enjoyed a nice warm soapy shower, emerging a few minutes later wrapped in a towel, while drying her bobbed hair with a smaller towel. She sat at the dressing table and began drying her hair. Karen disappeared into the en suite as Tina selected her underwear, applied some subtle perfume, and slipped into her chosen dress - a classic little black number, silky fabric, cut to a little above the knee, and with a classic neckline showing off a bit of cleavage, but not too much. Tina finished the look with some classic dangling earrings, she just had her makeup left to do.
"Phew, that shower's good" said Karen as she came back into the room, a haze of condensation visible through the doorway behind her. "Wow, Tina you made quick work of getting ready, it's going to take me ages to get my hair dried".
"Hey, sit here and use the drier, I'll go finish my makeup in the bathroom."
Tina mopped the mirror in the bathroom and did her mascara and lipstick, adding just a hint of blusher to her cheeks. She wasn't into heavy makeup, believing in the less is more rule where makeup is concerned.
Returning to the bedroom Karen was still wrapped in a towel busy drying her hair and also getting a little stressed at the time it was taking to achieve.
"Would you like me to brush out your hair while you dry it?" Tina offered.
"Yes, that would be great, should get the job done quicker."
Steadily they worked as a team as Tina used the brush in long smooth strokes allowing the drier to work more effectively. It felt like a surprisingly personal and intimate act, "Oh Thanks Tina, that saved quite a bit of time; that is soo helpful."