This is my first story written, constructive feedback would be appreciated please.
A big thank you to Ruwild to doing the edits.
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My name is Matt and I have a story to teach guys who cheat you always get caught.
Matt:25 stocky build about 5 ft 6 short dark brown hair and 7 inches of thick meat.
Kate:23 long dark brown hair, blue eyes and a body that a Victoria Secret model dies for.
I won't lie, I had it all. The hot girlfriend, my father's estate paid out and to top it off I had my own house. It was 6:00 am and I was dreaming about my girlfriend Kate. We were having the wildest sex in history and she was riding my hard cock like a professional rodeo girl.
I wake up to the sounds of slurping and look down to find Kate sucking away on my wet cock like it was a lollipop. Long, slow licks, letting it pop out of her mouth as she looked into my eyes.
"Good morning handsome." she whispers still stroking my cock with hands that are slick with my pre-cum and it feels fucking amazing!
"Morning my little minx" I whisper back.
I sit up looking at her as she carries on playing with my member. She resumes her sucking, her lips envelope my hard cock all the way down to the base. The feeling her hot silken mouth swallowing my shaft makes me sigh. Grabbing her head I try to force more inside, my first mistake. I scream with pain as she bites down and I let go immediately. She slowly pulls my member out looking at me as she asks plainly,
"What have I told you about rushing me?" She grips my balls with her white manicured nails, I can feel the squishy feeling inside my balls. Aaa, ahh, I try talk but the pain is intense. "This is
my
fucking cock! You don't ever try rush me!" With every word she grips harder and harder. Whimpering like a dog I plead,
"Pleeeeaaase, I'm so sooorrry..." She let's go, looking disappointed.
"Hmmm..." she muses "I really felt like a good fuck and now you've spoiled my mood, but it doesn't mean I have to go without." her tone softening "Babe please eat me out?" She asks kindly.
I get confused sometimes with our relationship. We're both dominant, but in an instant she switches to a submissive spirit, which I love because every guy gets off acting like an alpha. Without hesitation and not wanting to piss her off again I grin hungrily she slides her thighs over my body grinding her sweet pussy up my chest, leaving a wet trail. Her pussy inching closer and closer, my mouth watering. Her scent fills my nostrils and I become really hungry for her. I grip her ass cheeks pulling her hot snatch against my mouth I begin to devour her soaked cunt. She gasps and leans back, arching her back her right hand grips 'her cock' and begins stroking.
"Someone is eager she whispers"