I want to thank My dejah for editing this for Me. While I am good at writing I am not so good at punctuation. she keeps Me straight and helps Me make My stories as perfect as W/we can. To My co-author lo who did most of the work here thank you hon, I think W/we done good. (Yes I know that is not grammatically correct I meant it to be that way)
Raven and sunny moved through the house on their way to the room that Raven would use for her stay. Raven's natural curiosity was killing her. she'd give anything to be with the rest of the women instead of following sunny. Her mind was rolling a mile a minute, each possibility flashing as a vivid visual image in her minds eye. The words of a story beginning to coalesce in her photographic memory, until the moment she might have a chance to commit them to paper. Raven slowly began to notice a difference as they traveled upstairs and into a different wing of the mansion. The furnishings and decor were decidedly more feminine. Just like a perfect setting for a rare pearl, so this wing was the perfect setting for all the women here. Quick glimpses into different rooms showed the uniqueness each woman here. "These are our quarters," sunny told Raven. "Master seldom comes here."
"Why is that?" Raven asked.
"This is our haven, our private world, He respects that." said sunny "He knows we need a space of our own to keep us happy and content."
"I see," said Raven. "So you are allowed to do what you want here?"
"To a degree," sunny said. "Master still has rules that we must follow even here, but most are common sense and all are very easy to understand and follow. Mostly respect others and keep one’s personal area and one’s self clean and neat."
"I understand," said Raven. "How many women are here?" Raven asked.
"15"
"And He sleeps with all of you?"
"You misunderstand, we are all here willingly to serve him. The Master doesn't collect women like trophies. He treasures each one of us individually for our own special gifts," said sunny, as she stopped at a door. "This will be your room while you stay here."
sunny opened the door to a modest room. she walked over to the bed, pulled down the sheets, climbed in and looked back at Raven. Raven could read sunny's silent invitation clearly. She became acutely aware again of the fact that she was nude and about to climb into a bed with another nude woman. Yesterday she would have scoffed at anyone had they even brought up the idea that this might happen and here she was deciding whether or not she could do it. The shock of awareness passed quickly and Raven soon found herself lying on her side facing sunny.
"How did you come to be here?" Raven asked.
"my previous Dom was a pretender, a Dom wannabe. He took my submission to him as permission to be abusive - mentally and physically. Whatever he commanded, no matter how demeaning, i did. If i didn't follow his orders quick enough to suit him, he had a rattan cane he was wicked fast with, that he used for punishment. i never knew how wrong the whole situation was -- until i met Master.
"Master had come to dinner one evening, bringing two of his submissives with him. All night long i watched them as they took care of his every need. i'd never seen such looks of adoration and devotion as i saw on their faces as they served Him.
"After dinner the evening’s entertainment began. The pretender's favorite game was to have me act like a dog. He would talk to me as if i was one, and give me commands in the same manner. He ordered me to crawl to Master and pleasure Him in whatever way Master deemed fit. i could not move. For the first time in my life as a submissive, i thought about saying no. i did not want Master to see me act in this manner, and i knew i would have done anything to please Him, except to act in this manner, to act like an animal incapable of human thought. This game had become shameful to me all because Master was watching.