Author's Note:
If you have gotten this far with the story, then you have come to realize that the characters in "The Cabin" and "The Boat" series are intertwined. The same will hold true for the third part of the saga "The Truck" which will eventually cover Jared and Kristi. I have no idea when I will start on it, but I can say that it will be after I finish When Thunder Rolls.
In other news, I have an editor now.
Ya gotta love Southern women, because she jumped right up and purred, "Bless your heart Sweetie; you're trying so hard to look like you know what you are doing. Now sit there like a good boy and let Momma show you how to do it."
Who was I to argue? So, if you've noticed an improvement in the punctuation and spelling, along with a complete lack of dangling participles, you can thank ReadyMadeMILF for it.
Yes, I used the word dangling in the introduction of my editor and got away with it; and against her wishes, I also started a story out in Literotica with:
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It was a dark and stormy night.
I was on my way home from an out of town meeting to plan for an upcoming project and the storm hit while I was still about thirty minutes away from the house. It was the Monday before Thanksgiving and Debbie and Kristi had gotten there about three hours ago on their break from school. I had gotten hung up in traffic coming out of Atlanta and I had been playing hell trying to beat the storm. I knew that Debbie would be terrified because I could see the lightning flashes silhouetting the boiling thunderheads against the night sky as I drove further north.
Pulling into the garage, I shut the car off and walked into the house as quickly as I could. I was happy that the storm was moving fast and according to the last forecast I heard, it shouldn't take it that long to move out of the area. Debbie and Kristi were setting on the couch curled up beside each other. Kristi was holding her hand and gently stroking Debbie's long blonde hair. As I entered the room Kristi looked up at me and said softly, "I'm glad you're here Mike, she's not doing well tonight."
"I'm sorry it took me so long, I got stuck in traffic." I said lamely as I bent down to give Debbie a quick kiss. "You okay Sis?"
"I am now." She mumbled as she looked up at me. I could see the fear start draining from her eyes as she realized that I was home and that the storm seemed to be lessening as time went on.
Settling in beside Debbie I placed my left arm around her and kissed the top of her head. Looking across at Kristi I winked and then said "Hi there beautiful! Nice to see you again."
She winked back. "Nice to see you again too handsome!" she said with a smile.
"Can you two stop flirting with each other long enough for one of you to get me a blanket? I'm freezing." Debbie whined as she sat there between us.
Debbie was wearing jeans and a black tank top with a simple strand of pearls adorning her neck and I could tell that true to her nature, she wasn't wearing a bra because her nipples were poking through the material of her top. It was kind of chilly in the room but not unusually so. I didn't know if it was from the chill in the air or because of fear, or that she was aroused, but she was shaking quite a bit.
"She's back!" Kristi said laughing as she got up and walked toward the settee across the room to grab the fleece throw that was laying across the back of it. She crossed the room again and sitting down, she draped it across the two of them and then took Debbie's hand to hold. A part of me was happy that my sister had a friend that was willing to take care of her in this situation and then there was the part of me that got just a more than a little turned on watching them cuddle and thinking about the description Debbie had given me about Kristi's abilities in bed last month.
It was the middle of October and Debbie had driven down for a weekend at home. We were laying side by side in bed after a long slow session of making love and Debbie was talking about the previous fall when a storm had blown through and Kristi had found out that storms not only terrified Debbie, they made her incredibly horny as well.
"Honestly Mike, to this day I still don't know how it happened. One minute Kristi was holding me, and we were curled up on the bed. I was shaking like a terrified three year-old then the next thing I knew; I was flat on my back, completely nude and Kristi had three fingers inside me. She was sucking on my right breast like a hungry puppy and making me cum like I'd never cum with any man. Once her tongue got ahold of my clit, it was over. I was so turned on that when my first orgasm hit, I couldn't make a sound. I was just arching my back and praying to God above that she never stopped. We spent two hours going at one another like the world was ending. By the time we finished with each other we had to change the sheets because there were too many wet spots on it to find a dry one to go to sleep on."
"She's that good huh?" I said smiling and feeling my dick start to harden.
"She really is." Debbie said sighing.
"It's a damn shame you didn't get a video or something." I said laughing.
"MIKE!" she squealed, laughing and slapping my chest so hard that it stung a little. "What kind of thing is that to say to your baby sister?"
"A damned hot one."
"So, you want to watch me get it on with another chick?" she asked quietly.
"Not really," I replied honestly. "It's hot thinking about it, but I don't share my toys with anybody."
"So that's what I am to you?" she said slapping me again; "Your private tiny fuck-toy?"
"More like my private walking, talking wet-dream. Besides, would you really like to watch me screw your best friend? Even if you could join in?" I said nuzzling her neck and stealing a quick nibble just to hear her sigh.
"Perfect answer." she replied, moaning as I continued to nibble my way down her body.
"So, when is Jared supposed to be here?" I asked, snapping back to reality.
"Tomorrow around noon." Kristi responded with a smile on her face. "I can't wait to see him." She added excitedly.
"I bet." I responded.
"I'll be glad when he gets here too." Debbie added. "That way I don't have to worry about you jumping my brother's bones for the next six days."
"That's not gonna happen Debbie and you know it." I said.
"Aww!" Kristi responded with mock disappointment in her voice. "I guess I have to settle for Plan B."
"What's Plan B?" I asked with a hint of a laugh in my voice.
"Getting through the next six days without an orgy taking place."
"Slut!" Debbie said laughing as she slapped at Kristi's leg.
"Alright kids, play nice with each other." I said as I got up to light a fire in the fireplace.
"Yes Mike." they chorused together sweetly and then started giggling.