So this chapter is either over-the-top fun, or complete garbage. I can't decide. So I'm throwing it over the wall for readers to make that judgement. If I get enough negative comments, preferably constructive, I'll rewrite it. Actually, I'll go back to what it was. Marilyn is a character I just dreamed up this week and ran with.
I appreciate criticism, as long as it's actionable.
"What shit!" doesn't really help me, accurate though it may be:)
One More Family Vacation
Chapter 2
Taking his left hand and wrapping it around his erection, I wrap my hands around his and guide them up and down his shaft, helping him jack himself off. After just a few strokes, I can feel his hand taking over as he begins to wake up, at least a little bit. That's my cue to leave. I quickly step back into my room, but continue to watch from the door. After several more strokes, his hand clenched around his shaft, it starts to spurt high in the air, his spunk landing on his abdomen, legs, and the bed. It also fully awakens him.
Dave:
"What the fuck?" I murmur, opening my eyes and looking down the length of my body, finding my hand wrapped around my now dribbling cock. "I've never done THAT before."
Sarah suppresses a giggle and quietly climbs into bed, or at least tries. The bed springs squeak loudly.
"Sarah? Is that you Honey?"
Frozen for a second, Sarah quickly realizes this could be more fun with Daddy.
"Uh, yea Daddy. Do you need something?"
"Oh, no. Just didn't hear you come in. You can stay in bed.... When did you get back?" I ask as I quickly walk to the bathroom to get a rag for cleaning myself, and the bed, off.
"Maybe ten minutes ago."
"OH...really...I'm surprised I didn't hear you come in," I say hesitantly.
"I'm pretty sure you were dreaming, and it must have been a pretty good dream."
"Oh, why do you say that?"
Hopping out of bed and walking right into the room, Sara crosses her arms below her tits and replies, "Because you were stroking your cock like a madman!" she says matter-of-factly with a smirk on her face.
I look up, my hand with a washcloth wrapped around my dick, cleaning it off.
"Christ, Sarah! Don't you ever knock?"
"I've already seen everything you've got Daddy, including your masturbation form...I watched for several minutes...VERY nice form!" laughing hysterically.
I'm mortified.
"Please go to bed so I can clean myself up, leaving me what little dignity I've got left!"
"Sure, Daddy," she giggles. "But I don't think you've really got any left after tonight!
Then, after a quick kiss on my cheek and a slap on my ass, she turns around and disappears into her room. What a wild child I've ended up raising! I finish cleaning up and, after a fair amount of tossing and turning, fall asleep, not waking up until the sunlight begins to stream in through the small opening between the shades.
Getting up and emptying my bladder, I then put on a pair of sweats before going to check on Sara. Wandering into her room, I see her curtains already open, the tank top she was wearing last evening lying crumpled on the floor, and a thin strip of light coming out from her partially opened bathroom door. Walking over, I knock to let her know I'm there.
"Good morning, Daddy! You can come in if you want!"
Pushing open the door, she's sitting in the same kind of tub I have in my room. It's full of bubbles, and the jets are whirring as they continuously stir up the hot water she's soaking in. Smiling, she grabs up a hand full of bubbles and throws them towards me, hitting me right on the front of my sweatpants.
"Ha-ha! It looks like you had a little accident, Pops!"
"I'll show you a little accident!" reaching down through the bubbles and into the water to splash some up at her face, but in doing so my hand grazes over her chest. I can feel my fingers lightly run over her breast and flick across her stiff nipple. Immediately realizing my mistake, I jump back, completely embarrassed. "Sorry, Honey. I didn't mean to do that."
"It's O.K. Daddy. No biggy, really. I promise I won't tell Mom that you felt me up!" she laughs as she starts to rise from the tub, the bubbles running off her body, exposing her hard, wet nipples. "So, are we still going shopping today?"
"I guess I should say something to her about you lack of modesty; but I saw it all last night, you obviously don't care, so what's the point?"
"Besides, her dripping nips and pussy look delicious," I comment to myself, guilt washing over me immediately at such an inappropriate thought. "So she's an exhibitionist. There's not much I can do to about that. But I can still act like her father, and not like any other guy ogling her assets."
"Yes, just as soon as you are ready, so probably sometime this afternoon!? I think I'll go downstairs and grab some muffins and juice while you finish in here, since I can be ready and out the door in a matter of minutes."
She gives me a mocking thumbs-up and I excuse myself, leaving the door cracked open just like I found it. I stop to look in the vanity mirror that's just outside the bathroom, watching her reflection. Turning on the shower-head, she rinses the bubbles from her body.
"Damn, my daughter's got one tight body!" I muse. "Guy doesn't stand a chance of ignoring that, even a father. What a menu. Too bad I can't order off of it."
I decide to leave her room before my cock starts to join the conversation in my head.
Returning from the hotel lobby with a disappointing assortment of muffins and juice boxes, I set them on the small corner table by the window before alerting Sara that I'm back.
"Honey! Breakfast! Get it while it's..., well, come and get it!"
Sarah immediately walks through the partition doorway to see what I've brought for us to eat. Her hair is already dry and her makeup complete, but other than a pair of slip-on sandals, she's still naked, apparently still struggling with deciding what to wear. It's cool in the room, and her nipples stand out like thick, pink erasers.
"Thanks Daddy! I promise I'll be ready by the time you are! I'm just trying to find something to wear that'll be easy to change in and out of."
"Well your current ensemble, or lack thereof, is certainly one way to go; but mall security might stop us before we make it into any of the stores. I thought I might dress to match your mood for the day, casual or beach bum; but this....this I'm not touching."
"You just keep cracking yourself up Daddy... But seriously, I am thinking I might not wear a bra because I really don't want to keep bothering with it all day. I'm hoping to find a swim suit and some new underwear."