This is my second story here, and I've tried to be subtle and artistic in my tone. I welcome constructive feedback and hope you enjoy it.
All characters as 18 years and above.
Prologue: The Ask
It was a quiet afternoon, the kind that felt suspended in amber--sunlight catching dust in the air, time moving slower than it should. She stood in the doorway, camera in hand, gaze unreadable. Chloe had always chased the edge of truth, her lens peeling back what others hid, a hunger she couldn't name.
Chloe only asked once.
"
I need the two of you for something,
" she said.
Not a question. Not quite a command. Just a statement, like the idea had already settled into place and all that remained was their agreement.
Eleanor, Chloe's mom, looked up from her book, brows lifting. "
For what
?"
Chloe shrugged, but the movement was too precise to be careless. "
A project. Something personal. Visual. I don't want to explain it--it won't work if I do.
"
Liam, Chloe's brother, didn't speak. He just glanced between them, his gaze hollowed by Sarah's absence, finding an anchor in Mom's steady presence. He gave the faintest nod like he already understood more than he should.
Eleanor hesitated.
Her hands, those hands that had once flinched under her ex-husband's raised fist--tightened on the book, memories of fear flickering. She'd left him years ago, when the kids were teens, after the bruises faded but the fear didn't. Since then, Chloe and Liam had been her world, her tether. Yet Chloe's voice pulled her forward. She closed the book slowly, thumb resting between the pages.
"
Alright
," she said, softly. "
If it's for you.
"
The conservatory was chosen without discussion. Chloe moved through the space like a conductor before a symphony, arranging light and shadow. She brought Eleanor a dress. Told Liam what to wear. She didn't say why. She didn't need to.
There was a hush to the air--something taut, breathless. Chloe felt it settle in her chest, a quiet hunger. She thrived on this--pulling the best and worst from those around her. Whatever they began here, she knew, would spiral beyond her frame.
She raised the camera.
And the lens opened like an eye that would never close again.
Scene 1: Veiled Allure
Eleanor stood poised, her silhouette ghostlike beneath the lavender linen dress, the high collar brushing her jawline--a reminder of the restraint she'd worn like armor since the separation.
Liam's sweater clung to his shoulders, cords tracing his legs with reverent simplicity. He'd always looked up to her, his mother, steady and strong--never in a way that crossed lines.
But Sarah's leaving had left him raw, untethered, her absence carving a space only Mom's presence filled.
"
For 'Veiled Allure
'," Chloe said softly, adjusting her lens, "
I want the tension of what's hidden. The closeness that isn't yet touched. Let the air between you speak.
" Her fingers twitched on the camera, a flicker of doubt she ignored.
Eleanor's breath caught at Chloe's words. Tension of what's hidden? The phrase landed like a stone in still water, rippling through her. Did Chloe mean the quiet strength she'd rebuilt after years of fear, or something deeper--something she hadn't dared name?
She glanced at Liam, his familiar profile softened by the conservatory's light, and felt a tug of unease. Closeness that isn't touch. It sounded safe, and abstract, like a pose for a painting.
But Chloe's voice carried an edge, as if she saw through the armor Eleanor wore, urging her to shed it. Her hands flexed, uncertain. I can do this for her. Just move. Don't think too hard.
She let the words drift, vague as mist. She moved, a slow turn, feeling the space sharpen into something alive. Her hands brushed the air, hesitant but deliberate, as if testing the boundary Chloe had drawn. Let the air speak.
She imagined the space between her and Liam humming, alive with unspoken trust--the kind they'd built over years of mending each other's wounds. But as she turned, her pulse quickened, betraying her calm. This is just a pose, she told herself, even as the air felt heavier, and charged.
Liam shifted nearer, testing the invisible line. He'd always been her protector--fixing trellises, carrying groceries--his hands strong and quiet. Now they hovered, uncertain. He drifted closer. Their arms almost touched.
Eleanor's fingers brushed his sleeve, wool meeting skin beneath. A jolt ran through her, sharp and unexpected, like brushing a live wire. This isn't right, is it? The thought flickered, quick and sharp, but her hand lingered, caught in the warmth of his arm.
She'd touched him a thousand times--bandaging scrapes, ruffling his hair--but this felt different, heavier. It's Chloe's project. It's art. She clung to the excuse, letting her fingers stay, testing the edge of what Chloe's words might allow.
Liam turned his face slightly, jaw tight. His gaze slid from her throat to the flare of her collarbone beneath the translucent linen. Their eyes locked. Neither looked away.
Chloe's hand tightened around her camera. "
That's it... just... hold there."
Her throat dried, heart thumping. She hadn't planned this pull, but she fed it--her psychological hunger gnawing, pushing them toward the edge.
Scene 2: Temptation restrained (Eleanor's Perspective)
The shadows crept closer as Chloe adjusted the lighting. "
Temptation restrained
," she said. "
The suggestion of touch without permission.
" Her voice was steady, but her fingers trembled slightly, a crack in her resolve.
I watched Liam peel his sweater off, slow and deliberate. His torso was lean, dusted with hair--my boy, grown into a man. My hands curled into fists. I'd spent years shielding him and Chloe from their father's rage, building a life where touch meant safety.
Now, my fingers grazed his chest, the warmth echoing that summer day in the garden when his hand brushed mine over the trowel--a flicker I'd buried. This wasn't the touch I'd taught him--safe, distant. Why couldn't I stop?
"
Let your curiosity guide you,
" Chloe murmured.
My hand lingered, tracing the muscle above his ribs. His skin was warm, alive. Liam inhaled sharply, and I felt it: a tremor I hadn't known I could cause. This wasn't right, but my fingers stayed, drawn to the pulse beneath his skin. His hand ghosted near my shoulder--just fabric, just suggestion--but my breath hitched, a sound escaping me. I wanted to feel something unnamed, something mine.
The neckline of my dress slipped slightly, lace peeking through. Liam's gaze dropped, steady and unyielding. I should've pulled back. But Chloe's lens held me there, and I didn't want to stop.
Flashback: Eleanor's Memory
Years ago, late summer. Liam was sixteen, lanky and quiet, hands stained with soil as he knelt beside me in the garden. I'd been pulling weeds, still tender from the separation, when he reached over, his fingers brushing mine to take the trowel.
"
Let me,
" he'd said, voice soft but firm. His touch lingered--a tender, innocent weight--but there was a strength that made me feel seen. I'd smiled, grateful, and pushed the thought away, burying it deep where it couldn't grow.
Scene 3: Soft Unravelling (Liam's Perspective)
Chloe's voice was a murmur. "
Vulnerability. Not just of the body, but intention. Let it feel inevitable.