Welcome everyone. I apologize if these notes are longer than the usual author's pre-amble, but given that this is my first submission and those reading this have no idea what to expect or what my preferences are, I figured I'd prewarn you.
This is a dark work. A lot of stories I find have some feel good elements where everyone winds up more or less happy -- this is not the case with this work. Main characters may be killed off and all might not end well. There is going to be some very dark and violent moments, which may involve sex. This is not meant as a point of arousal -- this is meant as plot and character development. There are some truly evil characters in this work and I want to do them justice. Regarding sex -> it obviously is in this story, but the main point of this work is the story itself, so it will not be sex packed and there may be various lengths of time when no such happens. If you're looking for quick gratification, this is not it. It is the also the first time I've incorporated such into my work, so please provide feedback and please keep it constructive.
This is a dark world -- you may recognize various works such as movies and games and books that this has borrowed from. It is meant strictly as creative license and a homage to the creative genius of the authors of the works used for inspiration -- this plot is all me. If you love the universe and want to collaborate, please get in touch.
I will continue writing so long as people are enjoying this. I do have a very good idea of where this all is going so you need not worry but I am busy so updated may be sparse. That's about it. Hope you all enjoy.
Chapter 1 -- End of the Line
** Prologue **
The fire burned slowly as Ali watched the children assembled in front of him, their faces lit up with anticipation of the story they all knew was coming from the elder. It had begun as part of their schooling and was met with resistance until it came to them that the history of their people was nowhere near as boring as they imaged it would be. The short stories at the end of their lessons were a refreshment compared to the boring things they were asked to do most of the day. Ali didn't shield the children from the truth -- he wanted them to identify with their people, to be proud of their accomplishments and to be wary of the dangers that lurked in the dark of the tunnels. And so he told them the truth, hoping that even in their young age they would take the morals of his tales to heart and not repeat history's mistakes, perhaps to one day live a better and truly free life.
"Father Ali, we're waiting for our story!" Ali looked up and saw Istvan, the son of his closest friend beaming at him, eyes full of anticipation. The little one was a treasure -- curious and full of zest for life despite having never known anything more than the tunnels. Perhaps it was time to tell the children about them, so that perhaps one day they would be motivated to find their way to the surface and survive the trek to the life sustaining lands in the far beyond. "Patience little one -- you will need it because today's lesson will be long and full of darkness and dark deeds. Unless you're scared and want to hear about the Free Man again?" Ali loved teasing little Istvan -- he knew they had to be told eventually, lest they become complacent in their current life, living in the cold and darkness and never knowing the rest of the world that was. Or was it still? He didn't know -- it had been ages since he had been to the surface, and his many years had made him doubt he would be able to make any significant trek out of their compound. He doubted himself for a second -- perhaps ignorance was indeed bliss, and if they learned to live happily as were, their lives would be kinder to them. "The Free Man is boring! We've heard about him before, and we can walk just as well as he can!", little Istvan's impatience with the older man starting to show. Istvan didn't care too much for stories of the Free Man. What was such a big deal about being able to walk around where you wanted to? He could walk anywhere just as well and no one was telling stories about him.
"You will respect the Free Man little one -- as you grow into a man yourself you will come to understand the significance of walking where you wish!" Ali's quiet tone betraying his slight irritation at the child's lack of understanding, but quickly softening as he understood that the children were too young to truly grasp the significance of their legend of hope. Little Istvan looked at him with mock apology and quipped: "can we still have a new story Father Ali?" "Indeed you can, little one. Now sit and listen. Many, many years ago, man didn't live in the tunnels. The earth about was full of his greatest creations and they were many. They had created many beautiful things, and were powerful and all wise..." "Can we go see them?!" little Istvan budded in yet again. He was very much like his father -- always on the go to get to the next exciting thing in his young life. "Silence and attention! I demand both, or you will be cleaning the kitchens for a week!" Ali raised his voice slightly to bring the little ones in line. So eager. So impatient.
"As I said, this was many years ago. Man created a glorious civilization -- they reveled in their magnificence as they harnessed untold power. However, man's pride and ambition turned on them. Unable to agree how to govern themselves, they waged war in a blind quest for power and the world burned to ash under their feet. The few who survived fled underground where the air didn't choke them and the water didn't burn. By the time they saw the error of their ways, it was too late and many died. The few who lived had fled underground and stayed hidden from the poisons of the surface."
"Is that why we live in the tunnels Father Ali?" Ali turned to the doorway of the small room to see Kara, his sole daughter smiling from the doorway. He smiled at her, thanking her silently for moving the story in the direction he wanted it to go with a small nod. He loved her -- she was his most precious thing in the world, and seeing her grown into the beautiful woman before him was a blessing and a comfort -- he often doubted himself, and she reminded him that his guidance of his people may yet be a good thing.
"It indeed is. Our ancestors fled below ground to escape the devastation of the surface, learning that pride and ambition can not only lead you far but also astray. Remember that children: the greatest gift you can give yourself is learning when you've got enough. That is how we survived when others didn't -- dedication, honour, courage, and humility. But that's enough for one day. Run along and play!" He remained sitting as the little ones bolted from the room in search of a fun way to pass the rest of the day before the fires were dimmed and it was time to go sleep.
"Have you ever considered letting them make their own conclusions father?" Ali thought for a second and smiled wearily. "Kara, if all of us were as curious and free-willed as you, we would not have lasted this long. Consistency and caution of our ability to maintain ourselves within the boundaries of this compound instead of running off on foolish quests is what keeps us from being hunted to extinction by the Sabbat. Do you think I have these wrinkles and grey hair because I ran around foolishly like a blinded fool?" "Of course not daddy! But we can't stay here forever. One day we will be too many and we will need to find new living space or we'll starve ourselves as we hide." "We've had this discussion before Kara -- the current ways are best. The savagery of the Sabbat cannot be fought." Kara sighed loudly and lowered her head. "Yes father. I meant no disrespect to your wisdom." Ali rose and gave his daughter a hug as he walked out of the room, glad the ritual argument had not followed their discussion this time. He worried for his daughter -- worried that she would do something reckless and get hurt, something he couldn't bear thinking about. She was his precious jewel -- and he would keep her safe. Her thirst for freedom made him proud but worried him; the Free Man may have been a legend meant to inspire and motivate his people, but that beacon had to glow dimly lest it become a siren calling his people to their doom.