Of the words spoken in verse by the shrewish woman in this part of the story; these words hold a mystery at the heart of this story, there meaning is revealed by the end.
Any criticism is very welcome as I am relatively new to writing, this being the second story I've written.
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Blithering Hayseed
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Guthredd Sleeve-heart's tale (or The Circle of Three Hearts): Part 1
There was a man called Antler, the son of Eyvind and of Hallbera. Antler was honest and meek, hard working and loyal to his friends.
He settled a farmstead with stone and turf on the middle islet of the Sound and yielded many successful crops. Antler ploughed the home-field for crops and tended livestock on the heath. One autumn Antler was working the haystacks and would often see the daughter of the farmer next door hanging out the washing by the log outhouse.
The neighbouring farmer was called Sigurd and his daughter was called Thorarna and as Antler tended to the sheep or worked the home field in the morning dew he would say to himself;
"She is the most beautiful of women and a great lady."
It soon became Antler's favourite past time to rest his peepers on the sight of Thorarna hanging out the washing surrounded by the barren scrubland and singing linnets.
Antler thought he had seen nothing more beautiful than Thorarna's graceful silhouette against the red autumn sky as she tied her long hair back.
He would rise early from his bed-closet, don his work tunic and boots and be in the home field each morning where his peepers could best rest upon the beautiful Thorarna.
Each morning Antler was amazed to discover a new aspect of Thorarna's beauty: One day; the curve of her ear, another; the wisps of delicate hairs at the nape of her neck, again another day; the way she seemed to smile upon all things.
Mingled amidst Antler's view of Thorarna's beauty were moments of stolen intimacy: The white flesh of the side of a breast, exposed for a spell from out the side of her grey woollen tunic where it flapped open at the sides, tied only at the middle with twine. Or glimpse of naked thigh when the wind took the hem of Thorarna's tunic.
Sitting by the hearth each evening Antler would treasure his horde of memories of Thorarna and it was a great joy to Antler to ponder the softness of her breast suddenly exposed to a chill autumn wind or the secret of her left nipple made visible to the whole brackish moor-land for just a moment.
He wandered if the thrush, the pheasant or perhaps the vole were as enchanted by Thorarna's beauty as he.
By Winter's Eve Antler had caught the eagers for Thorarna and dearly set his heart upon her.
At the Winter's Eve feast, amid much drinking, Antler asked his host for his daughter in marriage. Sigrid saw that Antler was hardworking and loyal and agreed the bride-price and dowry.
Antler paid the bride-price with a hundred of silver and two milking cows.
The dowry was set at twenty four ells of homespun.
The wedding of Antler and Thorarna was held the following spring and people said that never had there been a more beautiful bride married on the middle islet of the Sound.
At the leaving of the feast there was a great giving of gifts but Thorarna prised amongst all the gifts the golden arm band from her father, Sigrid.
Antler and Thorarna lived happily at the farm, working the home field for crops and putting the livestock to graze on the heath. It was said that Antler took good care of his household and Thorarna of the housekeeping, and although they had little they were content.
For the turn of three full seasons Antler and Thorarna shared the sunrises and the sunsets, the dew upon the heath and the nest eggs in the spring and throughout those three years Antler saw these things were but made to frame Thorarna's beauty.
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At the same time that Antler and Thorarna dwelt happily together amongst the heath-land of the middle islet of the Sound, King Onund imposed royal ownership on all land and sent his fee-takers to collect the new taxes.
Of the mainland did the fee-takers amass great fee in the name of King Onund but of the islets of the Sound no visit had been made.
When the fee-takers had loaded the King's boats with the collected wares they looked past where their boats were laid up in the harbour and seeing the islets across the Sound said to one another;
"We must put to sea across the Sound for are not the islets supplicants of the king too."
The fee-takers put to sea and have to in a haven on the shore of the middle islet of the Sound.
Thorarna was collecting crabs amongst the rock pools of the shoreline as the boats of the fee-takers laid up in the haven. Crouching in the cleft of a rock, Thorarna watched the fee-takers step onto the sandy banks of the islet.
Now of the fee-takers was there one of hideous aspect, of chitty face and one swollen eye; the other ruined and patched. Of sagging lower lip and licentious movement; his name was Fox.
Gathering on the white sand with the fee-takers were the King's soldiers, bulky and broad shouldered with glittering helms and axes tucked in their belts. They carried spears and coffers, one to two men, along the shore and up the winding path of the cliffs.
Thorarna sought the underground passage from the cleft by the sea up to the hatch in the farmsteads kitchen.
When Antler saw his wife back so soon and using the hidden route he asked her what was amiss.
"There are men arrived at the haven in great boats and carrying spears and coffers up the winding path of the cliffs."
"It would be better had they never landed. This will be only the beginning of the ill-fortune that will befall our kinsmen because of it."
It was known that many things Antler said would be, did come to pass and Thorarna told Antler that she hoped this time he might be wrong.
"I do not think so, my love for it is the dream-woman that tells me of ill things and prophesies ill that I have seen these past two nights. Of the one that is kind to me and gives good advice I have not seen a trace.
I dreamt these past two nights of two chicks in a nest disturbed by a weirding egg. The egg hatched a thing most foul, with one eye, and that one eye swollen and greedy, and this thing most foul pecked and squawked until the two chicks spent their days cowering in the shadows and the foul creature grew fat upon the food that the chicks dared not eat. Stringy and bloody with wounds did the chicks become, and bald from relentless pecking, until the chicks did not wish to live and so died."
"Someone has to voice the will of fate." Thorarna said, and they waited at their table in silence for the men to arrive.
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