Like Guardian of The Sacred Fire, this is incomplete. I am file 13 a lot of stuff. As with GotSF, I am giving permission to use this story as you see fit. If you finish it and get it published, please at least put me in the dedication (Krystal Henry) I don't want royalties or anything. This is Jade's story. It is the ENTIRE story that I have written. It never received an actual title, so naming it is up to you. It is seriously named ShortStory.doc on my laptop...This is filled with a lot of clichΓ©s too. Honestly i think my writing days are over. So i am sharing what i have and giving you, the readers, permission to add on, or change whatever you wish. In this story, the point of view does change from character to character. i hope it doesn't get too confusing.
-JadeStormborn
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I felt the engine jerk and my car sputtered. I pressed on the gas but it did nothing.
"Son of a bitch!" I yelled at it. I pulled over as far as I could before it came to a stop on its own. "Really? Three miles outside of town you decide to crap out now? Why not in the driveway? Or a block from home?" I said to the damn car as I popped the hood and waited for a car to speed by before I got out. I opened the hood and stared down at the thing I never understood. Don't get me wrong, I can change the oil, make sure coolant, oil, and wiper fluid were all at the perfect level and even change a tire, but for the life of me the rest of the motor was alien.
"You piece of shit!" I screamed at it and kicked it. Something hissed at me.
"Do you think that will really help it?" A man's voice asked. He had appeared behind me in a truck I didn't even hear thanks to the semi that went by.
"I've had the damn thing for a couple of years now, paid more fixing it than I bought it for."
"You sure you went to the right mechanic?" He asked. "May I?"
I nodded. I had a 1969 black Firebird. It was my first and only vehicle and I paid a whopping $800 for it. But it was me. It was my baby. I couldn't have pictured me in anything else.
"Looks like you have a hole in your radiator and you need a new hose to it too. If you could get the parts I'd gladly fix it for you."
"I appreciate that, I truly do, but I don't even know who you are." I said.
"Oh, sorry. I'm Derek Tillman, new to town. My family and I just moved to Lone Wolf last week." He said.
"Jade Woods. I live over on Walker Street." I said.
"The HUD housing?" He asked.
"Next door really. The grey brick house."
"Cool. I live right outside of town."
"The house with the propane tank out in front?" I asked.
"That's the one." He answered with a smile.
He leaned over once more to look at the engine and I couldn't help but look at his ass. Don't blame me. It's a human thing.
"So how old are you Derek?" I asked.
"24." He answered. "You?"
"23." I told him.
He turned and looked at me. "Would you like a tow?" he asked.
"Sure but I've never done that before." I told him.
"No worries. My brother has." He said and I looked over at his truck. I didn't even realize he had a passenger.
"Would he mind?"
"Not at all. Would you Solomon?" He called out.
His brother got out of the truck and greeted me. He was quiet and looked at his feet after the greeting.
"He's shy but he's a good kid. He doesn't do too great in the sun."
"Then you came to the wrong town. Hell the wrong state." I said. "He got a license?"
"Yes ma'am." Solomon said and pulled out a brand new Oklahoma State driver's license.
"You mind riding with me? He gets nervous around new people." Derek said.
"Um." I wanted to say no. The piece of shit was my baby. No one has ever been behind the wheel but me...well the mechanic too...but no one other than him.
"Don't worry; we'll be ten feet away if something happens." He said and grabbed a large hooked chain from the bed of his truck.
"Okay." I said and Derek got on the ground and hooked my car to his truck.
I watched as Solomon got into my car and I nearly cried. I worked my ass off at my first job when I was 16 to get it. Kids now days get their vehicles bought by mommy and daddy. My dad told me I wouldn't appreciate it if I didn't buy it myself. He was right. The cheap bastard. Don't get me wrong. I love my father very much. In fact I still lived with him. Not because I wanted to stay with him forever but because I couldn't bear the thought of him being alone. Since mom died five years ago he's never been the same. Kind of hard to continue life without the person you've been with for 20 years. I've gotten off topic haven't I?
I got into Derek's truck and was relieved by the air conditioning. A convenience my car never had since I got it. The heater worked excellent, but in southwest Oklahoma you'd only use it for a month...if that.
We pulled out onto the highway with the flashers on and I watched in the side mirror at my car being towed along.
"If I can ask, what brought you to the wonderful town of Lone Wolf?" I asked.
"It's different. We come from Seattle. I'm starting to miss the rain." He answered.
"Yeah, say goodbye to it. We see rain in March, and April, mostly May, sometimes June, but usually not again until late September. El Nino years are the best. We get rain twice a month on those years."
"Why mostly May?" he asked.
"Tornado season." I answered.
"Are there a lot around here?"