Hi!
Thank you for reading my story. A couple of points to know:
I don't like writing wank porn. I want to write full-fleshed stories with plot, character, drama and tension. Events in this chapter pick up the morning after the events at the end of chapter 6.
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There is one comment I've received that I wanted to respond to quickly: the dialogue. Yes, I know that I don't write the way people talk. That's intentional. The purpose of dialogue in the real world is to communicate, the purpose of dialogue in a story is to advance the plot of the story, and to provide insight into characters.
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Note on edit: I have fixed tiny issues with spelling, grammar, and usage. Plot remains exactly the same.
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Chapter 7
Scott got to work on Wednesday morning at 5 minutes to 6 AM. He sat down, and busied himself with the day's labor. At 7 AM, breakfast was served, and ten minutes after breakfast arrived, Dr. Karlov strolled in for the first time that day.
"Good morning!" Dr. Karlov said, as he sat down and helped himself to some toast and tea.
Scott cast his mind back to the conversation he had with Steve on their way home from the house party on Saturday night. Scott was sure that one tip from Dr. Karlov would be all he would need to get past his current difficulties with the LAVCM data. Dr. Karlov might have only offered the piece of advice that had helped Scott crack the case on the previous Friday because he knew Scott was getting frustrated. Truth be told, Scott preferred to get the answer on his own, and he wanted to keep trying before he asked for help.
"How are you doing today?" Scott asked.
"I am well," Dr. Karlov said. "However, you know how it is, a pile of administrative tasks to take care of will dominate my day. Tomorrow is my teaching day, and I regret to inform you I am unlikely to be available. However, I will make every effort to come by and see how you're progressing before the end of the day today. Scott, to be honest, if it was anyone else but you, I'd make much more of an effort to find the time for this project, but you are doing so well that you have freed up time in my schedule that I sorely need. I feel I don't need to be here all the time to baby-sit you. However, if you are ever struggling with anything, please, just let me know and I will make the time to devote to this project."
"You always kept a more careful eye on previous assistants?" Scott asked.
"Let's take young Trevor, your immediate predecessor, for example," Dr. Karlov said. "I had trouble getting away to take care of my teaching duties when he was here. He required constant supervision, and, after only one week, I knew it wasn't going to work. I began to look around to find another job for him almost immediately, to ensure he had a soft landing. I could never convince him to take this job seriously. That's a problem I run into with most assistants. With you, it's the opposite problem, I want to be sure you're enjoying yourself enough so that you don't burn out."
"Thank you," Scott said. "I appreciate the vote of confidence."
"I mean it, Scott," Dr. Karlov said. "If you need to skip work, or go home early, to do something fun, please, feel free to do that once in a while. It's good for you, and will make you more effective at this job, not less."
Scott thanked Dr. Karlov again, and Dr. Karlov re-iterated that he would make an effort to come by and look in on Scott again in the afternoon, and left.
Scott spent the next six hours engrossed in his work, before lunch was delivered. As he sat down to eat, he felt his cell phone vibrate. He checked his messages, and saw a text from Adol, his host from the party on Saturday night.
'Hey, big brain boy, what's shaking?' the text from Adol said.
'Not much, how are you?' Scott texted back, as he started to munch on his sandwich.
'You up for something fun later today?' a text came back from Adol.
'Sure, what are the details?' Scott texted back.
'A friend of mine and I are going to check out the fabled treasure of Monte Zoom today,' Adol texted.
'Don't you mean the fabled treasure of Montezuma?' Scott texted back.
'No, I mean the treasure of Monte Zoom. It's one of the most fantastic race cars ever built, and it's one of a kind. A nerd like you will find a hundred fascinating things to drool over. You up for it?' Adol texted.
'Sure am, what time?' Scott asked.
'Can you meet me at 4 PM?' Adol texted.
Scott remembered Dr. Karlov's words to him that morning, if you need to skip work, to do something fun, feel free to do that once in a while.
'Okay, that's fine, where do I meet you?' Scott texted.
'I'll come by in a car and pick you up at 4 PM. I'll text you when I arrive, and we'll meet in the parking lot of Water Buffalo Hall, where you are,' the text came back from Adol.
'Great, see you then!' Scott texted back.
Scott finished his sandwich and soda, and went back to work for the next few hours. 4 o'clock came, and Scott received a text message from Adol to meet in the parking lot of Water Buffalo Hall. When Scott walked out to the parking lot, he saw Adol behind the wheel of a very nice looking red sports car. Adol opened the passenger's side door, and Scott climbed in.
"My friend, Richard Little, will meet us at our destination," Adol informed Scott.