This is my first foray into erotic fiction and I do enjoy constructive feedback on my stories. The Visitor is an old character of mine and I'm sure he'll keep on popping up. As for some of the other characters, I know the classic fantasy grouping of a fighter, mage, thief and cleric is somewhat cliché, but it works for this story and I still like the combo. Anyhow I hope you enjoy the first part of my tale.
PROLOGUE - The Visitor
In the middle of a clearing in the primeval forest, the moonlight rained down—illuminating it with an eerie light. The sounds of the night creatures quickly cut off as a charge built up in the air. In the silence, the very air seem to twist and bend—protesting at this unnatural disturbance. A figure formed slowly in the distorted space. After which, the charge in the air faded and the forest sounds slowly returned. The man who appeared looked around to see where he materialized. He appeared to be somewhere in his twenties—young, strong, and handsome. The stranger was not overly muscled, but he looked well-toned with very little to no fat on his frame. His head was topped with short blond hair and a matching goatee. His eyes could not be seen since he wore a pair of dark sunglasses—strangely these did not seem to hinder him in the least even though it was in the middle of the night.
The Visitor took a moment to take in the forest around him. He had no idea of when or where he could be. He had wandered time and space often seeing alternate Earths and other more exotic locales. While he didn't look for trouble, it always seemed to find him. With a sigh he started for the forest. He had no idea where he was, but he knew that if he started walking, he would eventually find some civilization. If he didn't, he would just wait for one to form or for the strange agency behind his exile to send him to yet another world. After many hours of walking, he came upon a forest path. He carefully looked up and down the trail before deciding to flip a coin to determine what direction to go. With his direction chosen, he continued on his way.
ONE
Gavin and his party was not having a good time. First, their rogue Alan had "found" a map with a journal that promised untold riches and powerful artifacts. Priest Smythe was interested since some of the entries suggested that there were valuable religious artifacts in this trove. Zenn, their wizard was drooling over some of the listed arcane artifacts. Even Gavin was itching to discover some of the rumored magical arms and armor. Unfortunately, it was all a trap set by the Dark One's followers in retaliation for the destruction and looting of several temples by the adventurers. All of Gavin's group nearly died as hordes of monsters poured out of the ruins the map had taken them to. If Zenn had not been hording the last remaining charges of his teleport ring, they would have been lost. As it was, Gavin and his friends needed a place to rest, heal, and plan their next move.