This is my first story that I decided to post. Looking for feedback good or ugly just so long as it is honest. Not a lot of sex yet, more of plot then anything. I have the first 13 chapters done but am editing them one by one because each time I read them I find flaws. Anyways, enjoy and be honest.
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A loud knocking echoed throughout the room. The young Prince rolled over as it sounded again. "Enter" he yelled. A young squire entered and bowed his head low.
"Breakfast is ready prince Maek. King Ademes has requested your presence this morning." While his head was still bowed not wanting to look up, his face starting to turn red from what he was hearing coming from the bed.
"Is that all?" The prince asked. His voice sounding annoyed with his breath becoming heavy.
"Yes, your Highness." The servant said while bowing his head.
"Leave then." Was mumbled as the prince pulled the covers over his head.
The sound of the door closing with a thud followed by giggles from under the covers. "So you think that is funny." The prince's voice said in a cheerful voice.
"Yes." A females voice continued to giggle from under the covers "Should I stop then your Highness, so you can eat?"
"Do continue" as he pushed the covers down revealing his naked body. He stared down at and took a deep breath as he saw blue eyes staring back up at him. He smiled at her as she lowered her head back down on his throbbing cock. She drew her tongue up in long licks on the underside of his cock a few times. She noticed the shiny drop of precum. He closed his eyes as the warmth of her mouth began to spread over the swollen red head of his cock. The sounds of her sucking filled the room as her head bobbed up and down with an increasing pace. He felt her hand cup his balls and gently pull on them, a moan escaping his mouth. He laid there with his breath becoming more heavy until he threaded his hands through her blonde hair and suddenly pushed her head down, pushing himself into her throat while he thrust upward. Her eyes shot open as she felt the warmth from his seed in her throat and she began to swallow, not able to breathe. He finally released her head and she gasped for air.
"I assume that was more to your liking?" She asked as she squeezed his cock from the base up, pushing the remaining cum from his cock. She took him in her mouth again and sucked what she had milked from him removing her mouth with a pop from his cock.
"Yes, yes it is. I wish I could wake up to that every morning" he said as she began to crawl besides him. She nestled in beside him and felt his fingers cup her left breast. He began to massage it and her nipple hardened. He pinched the nipple and it hardened even more.
Looking to their right she asked" Better then what she gave you?" As her eyes locked in at the dark skinned elf snoring besides them. Her lips turning upwards and face scrunching at what she saw. She knew the elf was attractive except for the long ears but didn't like the thought of another woman bringing pleasure to the Prince
"Some day you two will have to compete and then we will know once and for all, perhaps a tournament when we joust" He said smiling at her. "I think that everyone will enjoy that tournament especially myself" He added when she smiled back at him.
"When is the princess returning" her smile leaving her face again.
"Today before lunch.". He mumbled with his eyes closed.
She let out a long sigh. "I wish she was postponed so we could spend more time together." Her hands began to roam on his chest. She felt the powerful muscles under his skin as her hands slid down his stomach and found his flaccid cock. "Or delayed forever."
"She was not delayed and will not ever be spoken about as you just have." He stated his hand grabbing her wrists. "Do not let your jealousy get in the way of your thinking."
"I kno..."
He put his hand up stopping her "I will have you taken to the dungeon if you do not remember your place. She is to be my wife and one day the Queen." He said quickly while pushing himself up out of the bed.
He began to dress as she watched him. His body much larger then her's. His muscles could be seen moving under his tanned skin. His wide masculine chest narrowing to his torso. Not a bit of fat on his body but none of his muscles to huge. As he turned she saw his strong legs which ended in his cute butt. His back rippled with muscles. She felt herself become moist and her hand reached down between her legs as she rubbed herself.
"Never forget that you are a peasant and that is all you ever will be" he said while she jumped from being startled and stopping what she was doing.
"After being humbled with your presence all night I forgot my place my lord." She meekly said bowing her head.
He turned and left through the door, almost having to duck as he was over 6 foot 2 inches in height. "Clean up before you leave and use the rear tunnel." He said pulling the door as he left.
She slammed her tiny fist into the soft pillows as a tear began to form in her eye. She continued to beat her fist into the pillow bouncing the bed and waking the elf.
"Girl, you are so stupid." Another females voice said in a firm voice. "He is of royal blood and not even most of the Nobel's are fit to be wedded to him."
She looked over as the elf as her fists clenched in rage. "Shut it Nadith before I..I..I." Her voice trailing off to a sob. She threw herself down into the pillow and inhaled deeply. His scent still strong and fresh on the pillow which only brought more tears to her eyes.
"We are serfs, that is all we are and all we ever will be." Nadith said rising from the bed and stretching. Her long black hair braided behind her hair almost so long that it touched the crack in her butt. She stretched her legs one at a time the firmness of them showing.
"It just feels so right when he holds me." She sobbed raising her head from the pillow. She laid the side of her face down and took several more deep breaths.
"We are not the only females he has held before and will not be the last." The elf said softly as she tossed a brown dress to Rachel. "And I do know what you mean. "A smile appearing on her face." He is so handsome and excels at everything especially when it comes to a females needs."
Both giggled at this. "Besides you know as does everyone else that he is a dragon rider and once married the dragons and riders bind their souls together and the dragons souls bound as well."
Rachel watched the elf, her 5'10" slender body taller then her own. She wished her breasts were as small as the elfs as they were always hurting her back. Although hers not huge they did seem to get in the way while working and she often wondered what having very small breasts would be like. She then ran a finger over her nipple which was still sensitive.
"I am a dragon rider as well so we could be wedded." Rachel said in a whisper. "Although I am a brown dragon rider and he is a blue dragon rider so what would his dragon see in mine."