This is my first story that I decided to post. Looking for feedback good or ugly just so long as it is honest. Not a lot of sex yet, more of plot then anything. I have the first 13 chapters done but am editing them one by one because each time I read them I find flaws. Anyways, enjoy and be honest.
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A loud knocking echoed throughout the room. The young Prince rolled over as it sounded again. "Enter" he yelled. A young squire entered and bowed his head low.
"Breakfast is ready prince Maek. King Ademes has requested your presence this morning." While his head was still bowed not wanting to look up, his face starting to turn red from what he was hearing coming from the bed.
"Is that all?" The prince asked. His voice sounding annoyed with his breath becoming heavy.
"Yes, your Highness." The servant said while bowing his head.
"Leave then." Was mumbled as the prince pulled the covers over his head.
The sound of the door closing with a thud followed by giggles from under the covers. "So you think that is funny." The prince's voice said in a cheerful voice.
"Yes." A females voice continued to giggle from under the covers "Should I stop then your Highness, so you can eat?"
"Do continue" as he pushed the covers down revealing his naked body. He stared down at and took a deep breath as he saw blue eyes staring back up at him. He smiled at her as she lowered her head back down on his throbbing cock. She drew her tongue up in long licks on the underside of his cock a few times. She noticed the shiny drop of precum. He closed his eyes as the warmth of her mouth began to spread over the swollen red head of his cock. The sounds of her sucking filled the room as her head bobbed up and down with an increasing pace. He felt her hand cup his balls and gently pull on them, a moan escaping his mouth. He laid there with his breath becoming more heavy until he threaded his hands through her blonde hair and suddenly pushed her head down, pushing himself into her throat while he thrust upward. Her eyes shot open as she felt the warmth from his seed in her throat and she began to swallow, not able to breathe. He finally released her head and she gasped for air.
"I assume that was more to your liking?" She asked as she squeezed his cock from the base up, pushing the remaining cum from his cock. She took him in her mouth again and sucked what she had milked from him removing her mouth with a pop from his cock.
"Yes, yes it is. I wish I could wake up to that every morning" he said as she began to crawl besides him. She nestled in beside him and felt his fingers cup her left breast. He began to massage it and her nipple hardened. He pinched the nipple and it hardened even more.
Looking to their right she asked" Better then what she gave you?" As her eyes locked in at the dark skinned elf snoring besides them. Her lips turning upwards and face scrunching at what she saw. She knew the elf was attractive except for the long ears but didn't like the thought of another woman bringing pleasure to the Prince
"Some day you two will have to compete and then we will know once and for all, perhaps a tournament when we joust" He said smiling at her. "I think that everyone will enjoy that tournament especially myself" He added when she smiled back at him.
"When is the princess returning" her smile leaving her face again.
"Today before lunch.". He mumbled with his eyes closed.
She let out a long sigh. "I wish she was postponed so we could spend more time together." Her hands began to roam on his chest. She felt the powerful muscles under his skin as her hands slid down his stomach and found his flaccid cock. "Or delayed forever."
"She was not delayed and will not ever be spoken about as you just have." He stated his hand grabbing her wrists. "Do not let your jealousy get in the way of your thinking."
"I kno..."
He put his hand up stopping her "I will have you taken to the dungeon if you do not remember your place. She is to be my wife and one day the Queen." He said quickly while pushing himself up out of the bed.
He began to dress as she watched him. His body much larger then her's. His muscles could be seen moving under his tanned skin. His wide masculine chest narrowing to his torso. Not a bit of fat on his body but none of his muscles to huge. As he turned she saw his strong legs which ended in his cute butt. His back rippled with muscles. She felt herself become moist and her hand reached down between her legs as she rubbed herself.
"Never forget that you are a peasant and that is all you ever will be" he said while she jumped from being startled and stopping what she was doing.
"After being humbled with your presence all night I forgot my place my lord." She meekly said bowing her head.
He turned and left through the door, almost having to duck as he was over 6 foot 2 inches in height. "Clean up before you leave and use the rear tunnel." He said pulling the door as he left.
She slammed her tiny fist into the soft pillows as a tear began to form in her eye. She continued to beat her fist into the pillow bouncing the bed and waking the elf.
"Girl, you are so stupid." Another females voice said in a firm voice. "He is of royal blood and not even most of the Nobel's are fit to be wedded to him."
She looked over as the elf as her fists clenched in rage. "Shut it Nadith before I..I..I." Her voice trailing off to a sob. She threw herself down into the pillow and inhaled deeply. His scent still strong and fresh on the pillow which only brought more tears to her eyes.
"We are serfs, that is all we are and all we ever will be." Nadith said rising from the bed and stretching. Her long black hair braided behind her hair almost so long that it touched the crack in her butt. She stretched her legs one at a time the firmness of them showing.
"It just feels so right when he holds me." She sobbed raising her head from the pillow. She laid the side of her face down and took several more deep breaths.
"We are not the only females he has held before and will not be the last." The elf said softly as she tossed a brown dress to Rachel. "And I do know what you mean. "A smile appearing on her face." He is so handsome and excels at everything especially when it comes to a females needs."
Both giggled at this. "Besides you know as does everyone else that he is a dragon rider and once married the dragons and riders bind their souls together and the dragons souls bound as well."
Rachel watched the elf, her 5'10" slender body taller then her own. She wished her breasts were as small as the elfs as they were always hurting her back. Although hers not huge they did seem to get in the way while working and she often wondered what having very small breasts would be like. She then ran a finger over her nipple which was still sensitive.
"I am a dragon rider as well so we could be wedded." Rachel said in a whisper. "Although I am a brown dragon rider and he is a blue dragon rider so what would his dragon see in mine."
She let out a very long sigh before pulling the dress over her soft body. She stood up and slipped her feet into her sandals adding another half inch to her small 5'5" height. She pinched her nipples through the rough fabric and let out another sigh. She then straightened her dress and began to mess with her hair getting the knots out.
"I guess we should go back to the forge and fields and" her voice was cut off as a loud boom sounded followed by her body being pelted by rubble. She fell backwards from the force of a few large pieces that had hit her.
Picking herself up she heard several other loud booms. She glanced at the wall and saw a rather large hole. She quickly looked around and finally found Nadith's broken twisted body. She heard another boom, loud as the first one as she let out a loud shriek before collapsing on the floor her left leg feeling like it was on fire. She looked down and saw blood flowing from where her knee used to be. Darkness closed in as she heard the alarm bells sound in the distance sounding an attack and everyone to arms.
She had awoken once when she had felt someone pick her up. She saw the Prince's face and wrapped her arms around his neck. He kissed her on the cheek before she blacked out again.
"Kellenn" the prince screamed out. "Help!"
A Paladin came running to the Prince. "Sir it is not safe to be in the Palace right now."
"Then take her to the infirmy at once Kellenn." He yelled back. "Protect her the same as you would protect me."
"My place is beside you." Kellenn shouted back to overcome the sounds of yelling and people running as he took her lifeless body from the Prince's arms.
"You there, guard." Kellenn said nodding at a large brawny male. "Carry the royal concubine to the infirmy at once. Do not leave her side!" While shoving her body into the hands of the guard. The guard looked surprised and confused.
"NOW!" He yelled. The guard started to run down the hall and disappeared.
Turning on his heels Kallenn ran after the prince he had sworn to protect 20 years ago when Prince Maek had entered the world. Himself a young paladin at the time at 18 years old.
He caught up to the prince and led him to some stairs and opened the door. "Down, now." He said forgetting the formality that the prince was due.
He closed the door behind him and ascended behind the prince. "Go left when we are out of the tower, the armory was destroyed so we have to go around it."
Once in the great lawn both the Paladin and Prince ran from the palace to the middle of the castle. They stopped when they heard the bells ring announcing the attack was over.
"Let's go to the outer wall." The Prince said in a commanding voice.
"As you wish."
The Paladin lead them to the outer wall and up 4 flights of stairs. Reaching the top he saw many of the archers still having their arrows held in their bow.