This is my first attempt at writing erotica so any feedback would be greatly appreciated.
Thanks,
Zev
He was sat in a shadowy corner of the bar, nursing a pint of ale when he saw her across the room. She was an imposing figure, nearly six foot with a strong yet stunning face and flame red hair cascading down her back. A tight cerise dress clung to her curves, showing off her near perfect voluptuous figure. Her most striking feature though was her skin. She was a mottled mass of color all over and from where Scott sat the colors seemed to shimmer and dance. Blues, purples, yellows, reds, greens, pinks, all swirled almost rhythmically across her flesh.
She'd come to the cantina alone but had quickly integrated herself into a diverse group of creatures and was laughing and talking along with them. As Scott watched one of the -he couldn't quite tell, but he looked human- cracked a joke and the woman threw back her head and her deep throaty laugh filled the air. That laugh had a magical seductive quality that drew him further under her spell. He found himself transfixed by this amazing creature, mesmerized by the magical movement of her skin. She must have sensed him, for at that moment she turned and her eyes caught his. She flashed him a ravishing smile then turned away and seductively walked towards the bar.
Scott saw his chance and leapt out of his seat, nearly overturning the table his glass rested on. He reached her just as the barman, a strange mousey creature with patchy blue fur and whiskers, handed her a drink. She clasped a delicate, long fingered hand around the tall glass of blood red liquid and lifted it to her lips.
"Here, let me get that," Scott said, offering the barman a note.
"Thanks." She smiled at him. "May I join you?"
Scott couldn't believe his luck. He nodded speechless, and gestured towards his seat with his abandoned pint.
She sat herself down opposite him, crossing her long legs. The split in her dress fell open revealing an expanse of thigh swirling hypnotically with color, tapering into a well formed calf and delicate ankle. Her feet were encased in a pair of elaborate strappy sandals with killer heels.
Scott was snapped out of the trance her skin had almost put him in when she said softly, "I'm Kaia."
She had a slight accent that he couldn't place, and not having seen anyone like her before couldn't be sure if it was typical of her race or not.
"Scott," he stammered, unable to take his eyes off her shapely legs.
He did his best to engage her in conversation, but his inability to shift his gaze from the magical woman in front of him left him stuttering and barely able to form sentences. He was completely captivated by this most unusual creature. She sensed this and did everything in her power to entrance him further, crossing and uncrossing her legs and letting the slit of her dress fall open more exposing yet more of her bizarre skin. She subtly pulled down the already plunging neckline of the dress to show a little more of her colorful cleavage.
By this time Scott was a wreck and when Kaia leaned in close, running her foot up his thigh and whispered in his ear asking if he'd like to come up to her room, it was all he could do to nod weakly.
Scott knew that he shouldn't follow - he was a member of the Space Corp. after all and this kind of liaison was most definitely against regulations - and a little voice in the back of his mind told him to stop before this went any further, but he couldn't help but take her proffered hand. He allowed himself to be led to the teleporter platform where she keyed in their destination.
"I'm checked into one of the port hotels," she told him. "I hate staying on my ship when there's better accommodation available."
Together they stepped onto the platform and faded from view. They rematerilized in an old fashioned looking hotel lobby.
"I just love old style architecture," Kaia said. "I spotted this place over the information channel and just had to stay here."
With a cursory nod to the man - well, probably a man, but Scott couldn't be sure - Kaia half dragged him down the corridor to her room. At the door she scanned her palm and it opened. She pulled him inside and roughly pushed him up against the door which closed under his weight. Leaning up against him, she kissed him firmly, her hands cupping his face. Feeling the length of her body against his, he pulled her closer to him, his hands exploring the curves of her waist and back.
Finally Kaia pulled herself away from his hungry lips. She placed a long tapered finger on his lips to silence the objections she sensed would come. Scott reassured, she slipped off his uniform jacket, dumping it carelessly on a nearby chair and began to slowly unbutton his shirt. As each button was released by her expert fingers she planted a soft kiss on his chest before dropping to the next. As his shirt fell to the floor, Kaia stood again and took Scott's hand.