This is my very first submitted story as myself, I've been here for a while and seen some great authors and I want to try my hand at being exposed. While I love good criticism, bad criticism is what helps people grow with their works, now there is a difference between bad and jus fucking with me, please leave healthy criticism. Thank you. Even though it is not stated, all characters that interact sexually are 18 or older. I hope you enjoy this story and by the way, the erotic scene in this story was written by a good friend of mine Susan Cookie, though I tweaked the original slightly, she was the one that had originally written it.
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The winds howled and echoed through the desolate and barren land, the strength of each breath kicking up plumes of dust, forming small funnel clouds. The rust colored earth was streaked and splattered with blood and large chunks of steel and stone. Furrows scored the ground and craters, great and small, dotted the land, overlapping and interlocking forming numerous shapes and designs.
Atop a hill, a lone figure appeared to gaze over the broken and thoroughly battered land. His mid-length black hair hung in messy bangs and tangles that shadowed a bruised and scared, deep caramel face. His helmet dropped carelessly next to his feet, the eye shield broken, areas of the scrap of metal seemed cracked and pieces seemed to be popping off as well, one of the pair of gold horns was completely snapped off. Through the disarrayed tangles of his black hair sat eyes, frozen in an immortal crimson glare as they soaked up the last visages of the landscape. His armor creaked and groaned as it started to make its final movements to kneel, but the warrior would have none of that and righted himself again, if he was gonna die he would do it on his feet. A soft whisper caressed his ears and he felt his armor start to disintegrate into a fine powder in the wind, he closed his eyes and everything went quiet...then dark.
~7 Month Earlier~
Shade hacked at the wood and cloth practice dummy, his onyx and gold keyblade slicing quickly in the air with a soft whistle. It wasn't long, only about 3 feet in length, intricate vines crawled up from a gothic rose fashioned into the shaped like a heart on the handle and hand guard, they crept higher up the twin pillared key-shaft as they stopped they bloomed into seven double edged blades that resembled blooming rose with "petals" extending out, the sharpened edges glinting and flashes of gold could be seen off the sun's light as Shade swung his blade down on the well worn practice figure. The keychain also soared through the air, a short black chain with crimson rose petal intertwined with the chain. The charm was a half bloomed rose covered by two white wings around the stem.
His dark brown skin glistened with sweat as he continued to circle the dummy, gauging its imaginary movements. His dark brown (almost black) calculated every angle the fictional foe could step and jump to. In the blink of an eye his body's muscles tightened and his mind went blank of everything but his task. One step. One leap. One swing. The near silent sound of his blade making contact with the cloth and wood abdomen of the dummy, and next his body was crouched low, his blade extended from his right hand in front of him and his eye-lids gently folded down, his body still tight in the stance. The dummy had fallen to the side, perfectly cut in half and lands with a soft thud to the grassy plain.
"Well if it ain't that sexy piece of man chocolate!" The voice was deep in tone but light in expression, the breath left Shade's lungs as his muscles suddenly loosened and his body landed with a thud to the ground.
"Goddammit! Has anyone ever told you that you need to announce your presence?!" Shade's deep voice spoke out to the figure behind him. He rises from his stance to turn and look at the annoyance that deemed it worthy to grace him with its presence.
Fatalis sat crouched on a large rock watching shade, his tuff of shaggy, sandy blond bangs being blown by the wind as his clear blue eyes watched, from beneath his glasses, Shade from afar. His usual well worn blue jeans were once again ripped at the knees as his equally well --worn black tank, displaying his near pale arms with its multiple cuts and battle scars as the shirt stretched tightly over his chest displaying hard earned muscles and abs his golden shoulder guard with its pale sapphire glinting in the sun. Shade cursed at the natural good looks and sex appeal he had but, hey that was the luck of the draw.
Fatalis rose from the rock and began to walk towards Shade, metal interlocks plates clinking in his shoes as he crossed the grassy plains to him. Shad met him half-way and the two pounded their gloved fist in their traditional greeting before pulling the other into a tight man-hug. Upon their release Fatalis backs up a bit and his eyes drift to the make-shift splint on his left arm and wrist, then to the left side of his abdomen to where the slight bulge of bandages and gauze was noticeable in the dark material of his shirt. He shakes his head disapprovingly before speaking...
"You're never gonna get fully healed if you don't let your body rest dumbass, Master Shundo said that you can't rush results or all you'll do is wait longer." Said Fatalis, speaking in the same deep and cryptic tone their master used every so often. Shade rolled his eyes at his tone but dismissed his keyblade in a small flurry of dark petals, the scent of the signature flower always stuck to his blade when it dispersed but he had long since grown used to the scent and often welcomed it.
"Yea yea ever the fucking tome for master's sayings, anyway what are doing here, shouldn't you be hanging with Allen and the others or some shit like that?" Inquired Shade as he huffed and went to retrieve his sweat rag from one of a rock a ways away.
"Oh quite bitchin' about it, Allen kicked your ass man, it happens. Get better or get over it, but do something instead of sulking like a little brat." Fatalis retorted as he follows Shade. Shade turns on a dime with an annoyed look in his eye and a small vein bulging in his forehead before speaking...
"Ok is there a reason for you to be here or did you just come here to pick a fight with a man who's already injured" Shade spat out venomously before he turned back around, snatching the rag from the rock and wipes his forehead and his shoulders before he heard the familiar sound of Fatalis summoning his blade and them the scent of dirt and spring whispered to his nostrils and he huffed turning to see him smack the pale blue gem on his shoulder. The light blue metal of his armor clinked and aligned into place, connected and accented with golden lining, the helmets horns stretching back behind his head and the visor of it popping open to show his blue eyes shimmering with amusement and confidences.
"Ok dude, if you're not gonna listen to words then I know what will crack through that hard ass head of yours!" He speaks as Shade looks down to his right hand.
His keyblade had a small hilt and a golden brown, hand guard in the shape of a triangle with the blunted edges, each one imbedded with deep green gems. The shaft is longer than Shade's blade and looks to be made of sterling silver and the blade fashioned like a double edged blade, as it is adorned with Celtic runes. The most noticeable fact about the blade is that the wind seems to be swirling around the shaft up to the "teeth" and branching of to join the rest of the air, the teeth are three up raised blades on each side of the of the tip, at the very top is the largest as it gradually shortens as it gets to the last one. All and all it was impressive as hell to look at but when face to face with it, it scared the piss out of most.
Shade sighed and reached for the necklace that he wore, he was the one of few that didn't wear his armor's "trigger" on a type of body guard, it was always wrapped around his neck, he figured it was easier to access this way and thought it gave him a certain amount of style, he also figured that anything worth doing was worth doing in style. He closed his eyes and took a deep breath in and out as his hand moved to the black gem imbedded in the cross pendent of his necklace, taking it and kissing the gem.
The light that always surrounded him when he donned his armor always felt him with warmth and this time was no exception. The tight under-suit of the armor fit to his body like a glove, strangely almost like a loving embrace, the armor then forming on his shoulders and chest as well as his whole body except for his joints. After the lower half formed into place the helmet encased his head as the horns curved back and then down to flank the sides of his face, like ram horns. As the light dispersed Shade was left standing in an ebony suit of armor with golden outlines etched into the joints.
He relaxes and willed his keyblade into his right hand in a shimmer of black light and petals, clenching it tight as he took his stance with his blade in front and his body crouched low.
"Bring it! I need something that actually will hit me back to get a good workout." Shade says as a wicked smile crawls onto his face behind the helmet.