For everyone who has followed this story so far you have my thanks, and I am extremely grateful for the feedback. There were some very valid complaints about chapter four. I wrote the first three chapters so that they could stand on their own if need be. I was not sure how my writing would be received and there's nothing I hate more than having a series left hanging. Because I left it where I felt it could be wrapped up and stand on its own I did not develop enough of the backstory for Ren and Erillia for me to jump straight ahead.
I rushed chapter four and I rehashed some things because I wasn't sure how to get the information needed into the story without doing a bit of rehash. On reading it several times I agree that the sex was rushed, and there is no excuse for that. The interactions that were shown do play a major role down the line and there was a reason for what happened to happen but I did not develop the story as well, and for that I apologize to my readers. I have done my best to take my time with this chapter and get the story back to the level that it was with the first submission.
That being said there is an undercurrent I am working to build that may not entirely make sense until the story reaches its conclusion. It is the common thread that runs through all of the stories, but it is not obvious. I intend for this story to be at least 10 chapters long so we are just now midway through the story. There will be some things that do not make sense for another chapter or two and at which the reader has to guess. As I've said I expect that there will be parts of this that are more acceptable to some people than to others. I ask that you bear with me as I firmly believe the end result will be worth it.
Anja I cannot thank you enough for your editing work. This story would not be what it is without you.
Sincerely ~ Dark Terra.
Nam mea iam leaena
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Erillia woke with a start. The bed beside her was still warm, but Ren wasn't there anymore. She lay for a moment luxuriating in a glow of satisfaction that still clung to her body and soul. For the first time she could remember since her father died she was actually looking forward to facing a new day. She shuddered as she contemplated the implications of that feeling. If Ren could make her feel this way after only a few days together she wasn't sure she wanted to think about what would happen after a full month together.
She'd depended on being keyed up and expecting the worst out of life since she started killing for hire. If she lost her dim outlook on life what would it do to her focus and her ability to get her target and get out safely? She'd lived the last five years of her life with the feeling that dying would almost be a relief. If she suddenly had something to live for beyond her base desire to keep breathing would she hesitate when she couldn't afford to?
She shivered as the cold set in. They'd gone to bed around eight last night if she was guessing correctly, and unless she'd lost her ability to judge time in the last couple days, it was just after four in the morning now. She stretched and was surprised to find she wasn't sore. After everything they'd done she'd expected to have a few aches and pains, but surprisingly she felt better than she normally did on waking. She hadn't really planned on getting up quite this early, but she had told him before dawn.
She rolled out of bed sniffing lightly and smiled to herself. Marines... They loved their coffee. Some of them on tour in Terra's sector would occasionally come to the outskirts for a cup. The shops in the upper class areas of town specialized in flavored coffee, cappuccinos, and all manner of unique twists, but for a good old fashioned cup of straight coffee it was tough to beat the shops in the outskirts. Some had even learned to grow coffee in controlled settings so their beans were fresh when ground, rather than vacuum packed and shipped across the stars. Usually that made them cheaper as well, which the Marines appreciated.
Other girls hung around the military men when they came to town, which wasn't often, but she'd always stayed away. She bent and retrieved her shirt from the floor where she'd dropped it the night before. She pulled it over her head, and picked up her pants. As she bent and pulled them on she felt the hair on the back of her neck stand up and smiled to herself.
"Staring is rude you know," she said as she straightened and pulled her pants up over her hips. She turned to find Ren leaning against the door way with a cup steaming in each hand. She raised an eyebrow in surprise. "I don't really do coffee," she murmured as he held a mug out to her.
"Today you do," he chuckled. She glanced quizzically at him but took the cup.
"I thought you were only going to boss me around in the bedroom." His laughed startled her, and she looked at him quizzically.
"I guess I did kind of say that didn't I... let me rephrase that. I'll only top you in the bedroom. Right now I'm something much much worse than your Dom. You said we needed to get an early start and you're right, but I'd wager we have an hour or so before we need to grab that bath and roll out. Just in case someone manages to come across us or they do decide to run thermal scans we're going to start your urban training. We'll work theory, memorization, and things like that in the morning and work combat at night before we go to bed. No little one, in the bedroom you never need to fear me as your Dom, but right now I'm your drill sergeant and you should be very afraid."
"Using combat as foreplay?" She chuckled as he did his best to hold a glare without cracking a smile. "I may like it rough Ren, but a full on sparing match with you isn't what I'd normally go for to get me warmed up." He shook his head though, and she frowned.