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Critical Misclass Ch 22 24

Critical Misclass Ch 22 24

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CHAPTER 22 - Inn and Out

Even if Thia wasn't a treasured party member or an enticing romantic partner, I knew I would want to stay friends with her, because she was the best damn wingman I'd ever had.

It was hard to believe that this was the same day that Ves and I had first kissed and fooled around. To be fair, it was so early in the day that it may as well have been the previous day, but we never went back to sleep. We were so excited about this quest that we were pushing ourselves as much as possible. Only once I started thinking about that did I start to feel just how exhausted I was.

Of course, I wasn't too exhausted to go spend some more time alone with Ves.

What, exactly, did those two talk about when they went upstairs?

Despite Thia's suggestive tone, I honestly wasn't expecting anything more to happen than maybe comforting Ves after an especially... difficult day.

That's probably all it is. I was hoping for a chance to check in on her, and Thia just helped set that up.

When I reached room 3, I knocked lightly on the door. A few moments later, Ves unlocked and opened the door slightly, and when she recognized me, her eyes briefly widened and she let me in. The room was mostly dark, lit by only a single candle on a stand near the bed. While it was roughly the same size as Thia's room in Perrenbrook, the woodwork was significantly nicer, just like it had been in the dining area.

"Hey... how are you doing?"

She locked the door behind me, but didn't turn around. "...I don't know."

"Do you still hurt? Is it getting worse?"

"It's getting better."

Ves walked over to the bed and sat, looking towards the ground.

I didn't respond immediately, wondering if she was going to say anything else. Instead, she seemed to be waiting for me to say something. No words came to mind. No words for me to speak, at least; more than enough were swirling around my mind, as usual.

Seconds passed by, as I strained for the right thing to say. I finally just told her something that I had been thinking about almost nonstop all afternoon and evening.

"What happened to you... I've never been more scared in my life. It's almost hard to believe that I'm talking to you now. It-it's amazing, really."

She raised her head and I saw tears falling from her green eyes. "I... I thought I was dead. It hurt so much, and then everything went dark..." I quickly sat next to her and put my arm around her, and she put her head on my chest. "What the hell? Why would he do that? I-- This guy I don't know makes monsters attack us, and then just appears and almost kills me without breaking a sweat?"

I held her tight and stayed silent. Ves made a few shuddering breaths and sniffles. She wiped off her tears, then raised her head to look at me with a fierce expression.

"Jeremy... I want to get stronger. Whatever this power is, this-- this

thing

where we can use your class abilities, I want to figure it out and do shit that no one else has ever done before."

"Oh, I'm with you on that." I kissed the top of her head, between her ears.

"I don't care about that stupid rune anymore. All I want to do is focus on fuckin' destroying that guy. Red Gauze. Whatever."

"Right! He tried to kill you. And growing stronger to defeat some powerful evil being sounds pretty damn cool. Well, horrifying, but in a cool way."

Ves sat up straight, fire in her eyes. She took my hands in hers. "Right! That's not weird, is it? I want revenge, but it's also the kind of thing that every adventurer dreams of doing. Like in the old stories."

Some things are universal. Or multiversal.

"We've got stories like that, too. I know just what you mean. Underdogs facing impossible odds, saving the world... right?"

"Yes! Exactly!" Another tear ran down her face, and this time I wiped it off with my thumb. "Who knows what that guy is up to? He might not have an army, or... or some kind of artifact, but he's fucking

crazy

and too damn powerful."

I nodded. "The next people he attacks might not be as lucky as us."

Ves was getting worked up. This was the most excited and determined I had seen her in the admittedly short time I'd known her.

"And whatever his deal is with you... he could keep trying to kill us. How stupid would we be if we just waited for that to happen?"

A thought hit me. "Hey, maybe Thia's right? Is he the reason why I'm here? What if I'm meant to stop him?"

Ves gasped. "The Goddess! Whoa, maybe!"

"Actually, it doesn't matter. The Goddess could tell me to leave him alone, and I wouldn't listen. You and Thia are the only people that matter to me. Hell, I already care about you two more than anything back home."

"Jeremy..." She leaned in closer to me.

"If some wrinkled old dick wants to fuck around with us, then he's going to find out what happens."

The beautiful netharri pulled me into a deep kiss, her fierce energy being harnessed into passion of a different kind. Our arms wrapped around each other as our tongues danced.

Ves broke off the kiss, biting her lower lip. "I know it hasn't been long, but I-- Ugh... I like you a lot." She averted her gaze as she blushed, and it was one of the cutest and sexiest things I had ever seen.

I placed my hand on the side of her face to gently encourage her to look at me again. "It's okay! I feel the same way."

Her tail swooshed back and forth as she tensed up slightly, and she narrowed her eyes. Suddenly, Ves pounced on me - well, we were both sitting, so it was more of a lunge - and pushed me onto the bed.

She planted numerous kisses all over my face before returning to my lips. I held her tighter than before, passionately returning the kiss. One of my hands stroked her back, and Ves arched her back to push against my hand, moaning faintly.

Although I got the impression that I could continue doing that as long as I wanted, there was something else that I was craving to do again since early that morning. My hand continued down, past her back, until I could touch her sexy ass again. This was not the time to just slowly explore its shape and contours, so I grabbed it hard.

Ves gave me the reaction I was hoping for. She groaned while we kissed, and this time, she bit

my

lower lip.

By this point, my armor was feeling more restrictive than ever. I tried to remove my pants without interrupting our makeout session, but couldn't, while Ves was rubbing her body against me. Fortunately, she got what I was trying to do, and eagerly moved down to help me.

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I was pleasantly surprised when she took off my underwear at the same time, setting my cock free and allowing it to quickly reach full mast. Ves couldn't keep her eyes off of it as she sat up and pulled off her tight dress.

Her full breasts were lifted up by the dress, and then dropped down, jiggling. The enchantments on her outfit had to have included some kind of support for them, since she was definitely not wearing a bra.

Despite the low light provided by the candle, it was a big step up from the darkness of our previous encounter, and I could finally see her bare breasts. They were a bit more than a handful, capped with perky, pink, nipples. I sat up, and Ves anticipated my next move, as she pulled me into her bosom so I could enjoy the feeling of her warm skin around my face.

She took off her panties and moved onto my lap without releasing me, slowly rubbing herself against my cock. I grabbed her ass with both hands, helping her move in a way that was most comfortable for both of us.

"Oh my god," I panted, pulling my face back from her chest. "You're so sexy. Your tits, your ass... just... goddamn."

Ves moaned in response, gripping my back tighter. She moved in closer to me, her breasts pressing against my chest, and I could feel her breath on my ear. "Y-your penis... It feels... it feels so good like this..."

My voice dropped to a near-whisper. "Just do whatever makes you comfortable. There's no pressure." That was mostly true: there was quite a bit of pressure in me that was aching to be released, if she kept up her motions.

"No, no, I want this," she breathed.

"Are you sure? This morning--"

She cut me off with a kiss, pushing her tongue into my mouth. My heart was pounding. The only thing on my mind right then was that kiss.

...Until I felt her adjusting herself so she was rubbing directly against the head of my cock. Her breath caught in her throat. The wetness from her opening covered the head, and it was so warm it was practically burning.

With significant effort, I ended the kiss and looked into Ves's eyes. "Wait - this might be better for your first time." I had her lay down, and she opened her legs. Her pussy had a tuft of hair - calico-colored, of course - and her pink slit was moist with anticipation. Holding my cock, I positioned myself so that the tip was just touching her folds.

Ves looked me in the eyes. "I'm ready."

Lifting her legs, I slid the head into her wet pussy. She gasped, but didn't protest, so I continued to slowly push forward. Her virgin cunt was tight, which felt outrageously good to me, but she grimaced with some expected discomfort.

"Wait," she whimpered. "It-- something feels off."

I immediately paused.

Am I going too fast?

When I realized that this was different than the expected pain from her first time, I slowly withdrew my cock. "It might be the angle... let me..." I grabbed the nearest object - the blanket - and wadded it up. Lifting Ves's hips off the bed a few inches, I put the blanket underneath, to keep her held up at a slight angle.

"Okay, let me know how it feels." I cautiously slid into her pussy once more. Ves appeared to be doing better this time, and before I knew it, I had fully entered her.

She kissed me. "That's good..."

Grinning, I began to slowly move my cock out, and then in again, gradually increasing my speed. Each time, Ves looked to be enjoying it more and more. When she wrapped her arms against me again, moaning with pleasure, I leaned in closer and kissed her neck. "You feel incredible."

While her mouth was still open, Ves's lips curled up. "I've been missing out."

"I'll help you make up for lost time."

"Oh, you fuckin'

better

."

We laughed together, and I sped up my thrusts since she was having such a good time. Ves gasped, then put her legs around me. I was well and truly trapped, and couldn't have been happier about it.

Sweat dripped off my face. It hadn't been

too

long since the last time I had sex - or so I had been telling myself - but being with Ves was a completely different experience. She wasn't just the most beautiful woman I had ever made love to, but I felt such a strong connection with her.

I moved my hands down to grab her perfect ass again. As much as I wanted to touch her tail, there was no easy way to do that while she was on her back.

Can't wait to try doggy-- uh, kitty style...

Watching her fantastic tits jiggle with each of my thrusts was almost enough to make me finish. Reaching up with one hand, I grabbed a breast and leaned down to lick and tease the nipple. Ves dug her fingers into my back, moaning loudly. "I-I'm close..."

I made sure to maintain my thrusting speed, continuing to lick her erect nipple. Every so often, I added a quick bite, which drove her crazy. It wasn't long before her moans grew louder and more frequent, until her whole body tensed up and no sound made it past her soft lips.

Moments later, she exhaled, her tension fading. "Oh, oh

wow

," she panted, pressing her lips to mine. "Thank you... for being my first."

And

those

were the magic words that brought me to climax. Groaning, I fired again and again into Ves's tight snatch. "Ah-- holy shit, that was amazing."

I tried to pull out, but Ves wouldn't release me, squeezing her arms and legs tighter around my body. I rolled to the side, making her roll over with me. Our foreheads met as we both smiled ridiculous smiles of pure joy.

CHAPTER 22 - Always Greener

We held each other in silence for a while. Relative silence, anyway: Ves had started purring shortly after we rolled over. It felt great - emotionally and physically - at any time, but with the two of us fully naked, it was truly beyond compare.

I don't know how long we stayed like that... it was one of those experiences that felt like it lasted forever while also being over all too soon.

Just as I was thinking that we should at least clean up, I felt a warm sensation on my groin, which soon spread to my whole body. Before I could react, the feeling disappeared, along with a faint flash of light.

"Your cleaning spell?"

Ves looked pleasantly surprised. "Hah, I was barely even thinking about casting it."

"There's no smell, and it didn't burn. Funny how your spells work best when you aren't thinking about them."

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"Or maybe I'm just extra comfortable right now." She closed her eyes and kissed me.

"I'm glad to hear that. And feel it." I stroked her back, feeling her body vibrate as she purred. "I definitely didn't expect this so soon."

Resting her head against my chest, Ves took a deep breath. "Well, I... After I almost died, it felt stupid to be nervous about stuff like this." I held her close. It had really been one hell of a day, from start to finish. "And I care about you, too, you know. Who knows why you were brought here, or why the Goddess gave you that special message, or your power..." She looked up at me. "But since I've met you, I've felt like I finally have a future."

"What do you mean?"

She sighed. "My mom was a seamstress. She couldn't use magic, and didn't have a class like Tabur's, but she could fix and make simple clothing. I was going to follow in her footsteps, even if I thought the whole thing was boring."

This was the first time Ves had mentioned any family. "Did you want to become an adventurer, or just do anything other than become a seamstress?"

"I never thought I'd get a class, so I would have been happy with almost anything. But then my mom got sick.

Really

sick. And it didn't get better. She couldn't work, and I wasn't nearly as good of a seamstress as her, so I couldn't just take over. I started working as a laborer around the village, usually in the fields, whenever they needed an extra hand. But it wasn't often enough, and I could barely feed myself and my mom."

I kissed her forehead, not wanting to interrupt.

"Mom got worse, and by the end, I could barely leave the house. She needed so much care. Neighbors did what they could, and gave us some food, but that dwindled over time."

Ves was quiet for several seconds.

"Then, one day, Mom got hurt. It was in the middle of the night, and I had finally just fallen asleep. She wasn't thinking straight, and managed to get out of bed, but fell and hit her head on a table. There was a big wound and she... she was bleeding. The noise woke me up, and I didn't know what to do. I couldn't just watch her die. So I grabbed a needle and thread, and started stitching up the wound."

She lowered her head again, staring at the floor.

"I-- I couldn't see well, because of the tears. But after caring for her for so long, I couldn't just stop. That's when I heard the Goddess. The voice was so loud, and so sudden, it scared the hell out of me. It took me a second to realize she was granting me a class. Thought I might get whatever Tabur's class is."

"Do you think you got Vitality Mage because you were trying to heal your mom?"

"Maybe. I don't know what the Goddess was thinking. But at the time, I was so pissed. Not about the class - not yet - but I was thinking 'can I have a second to mourn?!'"

"Damn - I can't even imagine..."

"Anyway... once things had settled down, I started thinking that maybe having this class was a good thing. It wasn't anywhere near what I thought I'd get if it ever happened to me, but it was a chance to leave the village and start fresh. I didn't have any real skills, and was too old to be an apprentice. And

that's

when I found out how terrible I am as a Healer."

I wrapped my other arm around Ves, and hugged her tight. "I'm really sorry you had to go through all of that. Thank you for telling me, though."

We stayed like that for a few minutes, just enjoying being close to each other. Eventually, Ves pulled back a little so that we could talk face-to-face again.

"Thanks for listening. I've never told anyone about that. Well, the village all knows about my mom, but I've never been able to really

talk

about it. I want to know more about you, though. Where was your life headed, back home?"

"Actually... I can kind of relate to not having anything ahead of me. The day I left home, I got fired from my job."

"'Fired'?"

"Oh... uh, 'sacked'? 'Let go'? I wasn't allowed to work there any more. I had no career or plans."

"Go figure... What would you have had to do?"

"Probably get a worse job that I hated, just to survive. It's mostly my own fault. I never knew what I really wanted to do, and couldn't just be comfortable with what I had."

"Well, it's your world's loss." She kissed my cheek. "I think we'll be doing some pretty damn great stuff here."

"I think so, too. Still not sure how we're gonna get there, but it seems like we've got a lot of potential."

Ves was purring again. "No kidding! A party that can use each other's abilities? Never happened before, as far as I know."

"Not just our own abilities - I used Ullun's spell to make my daggers burn."

"Oh shit, that's right!" Her eyes widened as she considered the possibilities. "So we need to learn about how other classes work, too."

"One step at a time." I kissed her. "I bet we'd get overwhelmed trying to do everything right away."

Ves smiled. "Right. I'm just... so happy to look forward to something."

"Me too. And I think Thia feels the same way. She told me she was also feeling unsure about her future."

Ves looked away for a few seconds. "Speaking of Thia..." She looked back at me, noticing that I had taken the opportunity to stare appreciatively at her wonderful breasts, squished against me. "Hey," she giggled, and I met her eyes with a guilty smile. "Just wanted to say that I like her. She's a little... tightly-wound, but she's so nice, and I'm glad she's with us. And I like her for you, too."

It was so weird hearing a woman, shortly after we'd made love, telling me that she liked the other woman I was seeing. Not only that, but she thought we were a good match.

"Really? I'm glad to hear all that. I'm still trying to wrap my head around all this." My face felt warm, and I'm sure I was blushing. Ves noticed my awkwardness (how could she not?) and laughed before giving me a deep kiss.

"The modesty helps," Ves chuckled. "I could see myself being with a guy who was kinda overconfident, but not if he had other partners. Then it would just turn from endearing to obnoxious."

Talking about Thia reminded me of something from earlier. It felt a little weird to bring it up now, but I knew it would be better to do so sooner than later. "I... don't think we should drop this whole quest to learn about the rune. I know that we have much bigger things to worry about, and I want to stop that guy, more than anything--"

"It's okay," Ves interjected. "You're right. We're just starting out. It'd look bad if we abandoned the first quest we ever got."

"And I'd be worried about how that could affect Thia. Even though she wants to drop out of the Seekers, it's still all tied up with her family."

"Damn, good point." Ves considered this for a moment. "I just don't want to forget about that Gauze guy. Even if I could."

"Oh, don't worry. We're going to keep getting stronger, and he'll regret ever fucking with us."

Ves's lips were on mine again, kissing me passionately. My hands roamed all over her as we made out for a few minutes, although once they made it to her breasts, they didn't leave.

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