Author's Notes:
Thank you all so much for coming back (or for continuing along, if you weren't reading this series before the Great Plague of 2020). I know that I haven't posted a new chapter in quite some time, but most of you have been very patient and supportive. My thanks to those of you who took the time to comment or send messages of encouragement. In particular, I wanted to thank author acup (one of my personal favorites) for commenting a couple of times about my chapter length and need to tie off loose threads. Having such a prominent author on this site provide that feedback was very encouraging, so I thank you.
As I mentioned in my bio update a while back, I've been collating and editing the first 13 chapters of this series. Whew! It seemed like a good idea when I started, but then I realized that I had more than 200K words to read, digest, and revise. I have a newfound respect for professional editors. What I did was more in fixing some errors of timeline and a few conflicting story points than anything else. I did go through and try to streamline the text by cutting down on wordiness and fix some spelling errors/missing words.
It was helpful to me in picking up some ideas that I introduced and then never revisited, so I'll be working in coming chapters to address some of the more interesting ones that could have a bearing on how the story unfolds down the road. The other thing that I found is that the story has changed significantly from the early chapters, moving in ways that I didn't consider when I set out. And I'm okay with that. I like having the freedom to expand on the original idea when something pops into my head. But it does highlight that I need to bring some closure to story arcs before I move forward too quickly.
I expect this series to change a little bit as a result. When I started out, I expected to have eight chapters, each detailing the circumstances surrounding Carson's relationship with a particular woman. Obviously, I blew through that artificial stop sign long ago, and there's so much room for more. So, while I will continue to call the installments "chapters," I think they should really be viewed more as installments in a serial. I don't know that I see—or even want—and end anytime soon, so long-term planning is pretty vague. Instead, my intention is to create mini-arcs within the overall story and setting. Maybe that seems patently obvious to everyone else, but it's a novel concept to me (no pun intended).
Now that I've written a chapter before the chapter begins, on with the story.
Standard disclaimer: All sexual activity takes place between adults. This is fiction. Any resemblance to reality is purely coincidental, I assure you. And if you like the story—heck, even if you don't like the story—please, take a moment to comment. It's especially helpful if you have something constructive to add. It helps me quite a bit to see the story through others' eyes.
—MB
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Carson looked around the table at the seemingly disparate personalities all gathered together, tied only by the common belief that
Eisenfaust
had to be stopped before the future of humanity was permanently destroyed. It was an eclectic group to put it mildly. There was Edwards, the erudite giant with the philosopher's soul. Next to him in one of the more jarring physical contrasts you'd ever see was Starfyre, a technical genius more at ease with software than people and equally at home on either side of the legal line. By Carson's side was his Valkyrie, Tilda. A fierce warrior both away from home and within, she was his pipeline to the considerable intelligence resources of the SSH.
He understood Patterson, Jordan, and Sonja less well. Still, without Jordan's access they wouldn't have been able to scalp his father quite so easily.
We need more if this is going to work
. Ever since his conversation with Director Sinclair, Carson had been contemplating how his life was going to change. It was heady stuff, the thought that a man of his relative youth would soon be heading a large underground organization with designs on changing the world. And yet, there was something quite satisfying about the idea at the same time. What kept him from getting a swelled head were Ramsey's words, the ones that had tormented him ever since: "
Orriri is sick, Carson. It's decaying from the inside...When the pieces begin to fall, when the heads begin to roll, it will be time for the project to take its medicine and cut out the cancer. But Orriri will also need a doctor to bring them back to health. That doctor is you."
As he considered that conversation, he remembered a similar conversation he'd had with Helena months ago. Her opinion from back then lined up with the Director's, that the organization had grown so large that it was susceptible to coercion towards ends that didn't align with
Orriri's
.
With these thoughts in mind, Carson had been considering what kind of "surgery" that the Project might require to restore its health. The one thought he kept returning to was that there was too little emphasis on utilizing the human talent for the betterment of society, and too much on breeding better human talent. Essentially,
Orriri
had lost its direction, its unifying purpose. He meant to fix that.
The concept he had in mind had two components. First,
Orriri
needed to trim some fat. Removing the Lund and Clemonte lines from the council was a start, but if Carson got his way, the van Heuval line would soon follow the others. That would reduce the council to nine seats, easier to coordinate actions, and as an odd number, naturally amenable to majority voting.
The Golden lines were just the beginning, though. While he agreed that there
was
value in promoting certain people's genetic contributions, the fertility clinics provided a means of spreading selected genetics across a wider swath than any hundred donors combined. Thus, treating non-Golden lines similarly to the Golden was non-sensical. Instead, Carson proposed to declare that the "initial phase" of the Project had proven successful and was being drawn to a close. Since the direction of the Project was left to the council members and the genetic "directors" who evaluated matches, it was a plausible excuse.
Under this storyline, the second component of the plan would be conducted. The resources of the Golden lines would be marshalled and reorganized to focus on exerting strategic political and financial pressure on civilian governments and organizations to promote the values that
Orriri
promoted through breeding. No sense in pursuing a single line of attack when a two- or three-pronged one would be more effective. In so doing, he hoped that the Golden lines would begin to focus on specific areas, and the organization as a whole would begin to function more like a conglomerate of corporations, all working towards common goals.
All that aside, there was still room in society for a group that had the ability to intercede when traditional or accepted means failed. The police couldn't seize private assets without probable cause, but
Exercitus Vindictae
could. There were bad people in the world that the legal system simply couldn't eliminate or control, like the arms dealer in Somalia. It was a dangerous, very slippery slope that he was stepping out on, but Carson was firmly convinced that the pace of change was always going to be too slow unless