Author's Notes:
Once again, welcome back to my story, my faithful readers! Thanks for hanging with me, and especially to all of you who have taken the time to comment or send me feedback messages
Like always, if you haven't read the previous chapters, you're going to get lost. I don't typically make much of an effort to explain references to earlier events and characters (of which, there are a lot). However, after the last chapter, there was a request for some brief character introductions. I posted a kind of character sheet/recap for chapters 1-12 as chapter 12a.
As the old axiom says, you can't please all the people all the time. I got criticism for calling 12a instead of 13 because it wasn't related to chapter 12 directly, and somehow appending the 'a' makes it a subpart of 12. It that's the common naming convention, then I'm not aware of it. I simply wanted to make sure people didn't read the character sheet too early in the series and ruin the experience. But I think it's pretty clear that it's just an insertion between chapters. No malice intended, folks.
Reader jackspeed2u brought up the Stargate connection. I'll be honest. It's been so long since I watched the movie or any of the series, that I forgot about it. After looking it up, the Ancients were technically called "Ori," not "Orriri." The reason for the name is probably similar though. I wanted some that conveyed a sense of beginning or origin.
An anonymous commenter about a week ago posted a very valid criticism to chapter 11, that I have a tendency to start plotlines and not finish them completely. That's absolutely correct, and I am aware of it. It's not all intentional, I won't lie. Some of it is, though. The overall plot vis a vis Orriri was intentionally a very long-term goal. There are much shorter means of genetic manipulation that could possibly yield faster results, for example. So, there's not a lot of discussion about the results because the story's timeline is much shorter than the project's.
A lot of what happens, I think, is that the way I envision a character changes, or their role changes, as the story evolves. I originally thought Jordan van Heuval would be matched up head-to-head against Carson as they vie for women to bear their children. But I made Jordan pretty shallow early on, and definitely not likeable. I couldn't reconcile in my mind that he would be a true threat to Carson, so I needed to develop a way to allow him to evolve as a secondary character instead. Thus, when he's reintroduced to the story, he's an ally. Edwards starts out as this sage bodyguard character that would serve as a kind of surrogate father/mentor for Carson, but when Tilda's team takes over for Carson's security, his role diminishes. I never meant to imply that he would be a constant physical presence (a la secret service), but I can see where that would have been assumed. Having him there all the time creates a lot of problems in social interaction, if you think about it.
Having said all that, it's absolutely true that my stories tend to meander a bit. I had a plan before I started this series, I swear. But it's been a lot of fun writing it, and the response has been so positive (asking for more), that I've probably once again gotten ahead of myself and expanded without closing down earlier plots. I will take a closer look at that moving forward and see if I can't create some smaller arcs that will fit into the overall story a bit. There will, however, be things that will probably be abandoned as we go. Fair warning.
Standard disclaimer: Please, if you like the story, or if you don't like the story, take a moment to comment. It's especially helpful if you have something constructive to add. It helps me quite a bit to see the story through others' eyes.
Finally, as always, all sexual activity takes place between adults.
—MB
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From Chapter 12:
Reaching their table, Carson slid in next to Siubahn. She surprised him by leaning over to kiss his cheek. "I'm glad you could make it, maighstir Jayne. I'm pleased to introduce you to..."
Whatever she said next was completely lost to Carson. He sat frozen in place, his hand half-extended in greeting, his mouth open in shock. He was looking at a ghost, a face he hadn't seen in the roughly 13 years since he'd put it in the ground.
"Dad?" he managed to squeak out before blackness descended over his eyes.
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Carson heard his name as if from a distance. His eyes slowly cracked open, then he blinked a few times to clear his vision. Through the crowd of concerned faces that ringed his field of view, Carson could see the glimmer of lights reflected in the hammered copper ceiling tiles. Which meant he was laying on the floor, he realized.
He started to sit up, but was quickly pushed back to the floor by several hands. The corresponding voices insisted he lie down. Through the clamoring, he discerned that he'd hit his head on the table when he collapsed.
That explains the throbbing on the side of my head
, he thought.
Yeah, you should be more careful.
Carson's eyes widened and he scanned the faces of the crowd, finding the one that had started the scene in the first place.
Yes, it's me, Son. I know you have many questions, and I promise to answer them all in time. Right now, I need you to act like we're old friends meeting after a prolonged time apart. Okay?
Alright
, he replied.
One of the other patrons happened to be a doctor. He gave Carson a quick look-see and pronounced him fit enough to move on his own. He advised avoiding alcohol for the rest of the evening and prescribed rest and over-the-counter pain killers.
Slightly wobbly, Carson made it to his feet and thanked the man. He offered to buy the man a drink, but his offer was waived. "Nothing I wouldn't do for anyone," the man replied.
Now that the excitement had passed, the crowd dispersed and went back to whatever they'd been doing before. Carson followed Siubahn into the booth, once again taking the seat across from his once-dead father, who it appeared, was now very much alive. Carson looked the man over, still not trusting what his eyes were telling him. He
looked
like Thomas Jayne. He didn't even look like he'd aged in the intervening 13 years since his 'death.' He
sounded
like his father. But how could it
be
his father?
Please, be patient Carson. It's not safe for either of us to talk in the open.
Aloud, his father said, "You have no idea how happy I am to see you again after all this time, Mr. Jayne."
Carson was dumb-struck. Fortunately, he was saved from having to make a reply when the waitress came by to collect drink orders. Numbly, Carson mumbled a request for a tall glass of the house stout, in spite of the doctor's prohibition against alcohol; the occasion seemed to call for
something
. His father's eyes pricked up in amusement, before he too ordered the stout. Siubahn smirked at them and ordered a Rusty Nail.
The waitress left and an awkward silence descended over the table. Siubahn studied the two men at the table. It was like looking at time-lapse photography of the same man, only taken some twenty years apart.
How could I have missed the similarity before?
she pondered. She could hardly believe she'd managed to find not only a teacher for Carson, but apparently, the man was his