Ok, lets get one thing straight here, I know I am not that good of a writer. I tend to speed type sometimes and I know that's not very good. But I am learning to take my time, and reread my work, because I know I can do better. As for the story I know it's a slow start but it will pick up eventually just give me some time.
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Once that big man fell to the floor, my first reaction was horrified, but then quickly turn into bewilderment because I have to step back and ask myself 'what am I going to do now?' Thinking to myself what if this person really needs help or is this some kind of trap. I slowly bend down to investigate further. Checking his pulse, and it felt very faint. Now, I know what I need to do. And that spell book better come in handy.
Aw let's see what we got here while Babbumbdebumpbadabumplabumphmmmhmmhmmm, aw here it is, this should help. A recovery spell this should do it, ok now all I need is to some peace of mind, relax and concentrate. Taking deep shallow breathes and saying the spell over and over again in my head, making sure I got this right, and not fuck it up. After a few minutes of meditating I was still amaze at how the big man was still passed out. Ok, let's get this show on the road.
I walked over back to the big man, and chanted the spell out loud: oren kanena ra si eo tio de voneta kearshia outvonia clika betysia te unatas.
Once the incantation left my mouth I felt this overwhelming essence that smell of eucalyptus was in the air and a sense of warmness washed over me. I figured then that I had did something right. The next thing I heard was a groan coming from the man. Opening up my eyes, I see he had already rolled over and was staring at me dumbstruck. "Who the hell are you?" he asked with an awful sounding cough.
Still being caught up in his eyes I retorted with a slight stutter "I....I...I'm the girl who just saved your life, soooo who are you, and why are you in this type of weather banging on my door?" I retorted back
We started at each other in silence for what seemed like an eternity, but it only was just few seconds before he suddenly had this strange look on his face and said "Oh My God this can't be happening to me, oh fuck, why does shit like this always happen to me?" he yelled. I just stood there awe struck at everything that had just happened, and now at the man ranting raving. "Oh dear great god of fire I need to do something,...." he said panting "something very....important something that has to do with something very.....ohhhh damnit I can't remember what it was AAAAHHHHH." he shouted getting up.
He rises all too quickly which made me grip the fire poker in hands a little tighter. I could clearly see that, although I haven't practice or use my witchcraft in the few years, but I could see my spell defiantly worked. "I should do something, to stop something from happening... oh god I need to get in contact with my brothers, but how ahhhhhhhh."