The story has been updated to make it easier to read and hopefully that I managed to get things right in here. I couldn't find a way to re-edit the other story since I'm doing it on my phone.
This story is clearly based off of the dream ghost from Ghostbusters. I feel like there's not enough stories that involve the Fort Detmerring ghost. So I decided to make one up and hopefully I will be able to do a great job. Enjoy it~!
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"Tell me why I have to spend the night at the fortress? Are there any other places?" Max honestly felt so stupid for losing a bet from his two only friends and now he has to pay the price.
"You lost that bet. You have to spend the night there and see if you're not a pussy." Joey is not going to let Max out of this situation because he did that too many times already and now this is the last straw and he's not going to bail Max out of it.
"Max. Why are you so scared of that place?" Amanda is another one of his friends and did try to get him out of the bet but unfortunately Max did not listen to her.
"Did you forget there's a bunch of ghosts around New York City and Ghostbusters are trying to get rid of them? I heard this place has a ghost but every time somebody walks in, they walk out with a surprised expression and don't talk about what happened there." Max is not going to go in there but he knows that there's no point in trying to bail out or make up an excuse.
"Maxi boy. You can't get out of the situation this time. Just stay here for the night and everything will be fine. Besides, you can call Ghostbusters on a phone from this place. It's still got electricity." Joey is trying to calm Max down a little bit and making sure that they all walk together towards the building where they can easily tell Max that everything's okay and he'll just sleep in the bedroom.
Max is taking deep breaths and soon he decides. Time to nut up or shut up. "Fine. But you are going to buy me lunch tomorrow."
Amanda didn't mind at all and Joey shrugged it off and decided to buy his friend lunch if he stays there for the night.
All three of them walked towards the entrance of the place and luckily, no park ranger was nearby for them to stop them. Joey starts lockpicking the door and once they hear the click sound, the door is unlocked and Max was still nervous to enter but there's no other option.
"Good luck. You better sneak out the building and go back to your home. Otherwise everyone thinks you're going to be a serious little bitch for that." Joey laughed a little bit and Amanda looked at him with a serious face to show that she'll hit him in the face if he does another joke like that again.