Author's Note(s):
I started writing 'Slither' at the beginning of the summer; it's quite long! As I edit a part, I'll release it until it's finished. Please enjoy Slither, part 1.
Thanks for reading—I appreciate you all!
--Ameranthus
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"Sura! Come here, will you?"
"Coming, Dathan!"
Sura finished with the tonic she was mixing and headed up front to where the plump old man with python-brown markings and a shock of black and gray thinning hair on his head, waited for her.
Next to Dathan was a younger Ophidian who stood two heads taller than her. His torso was lean and lithe with ashen skin and an iridescent, black tail with two pewter stripes running down its length. There was a dusting of iridescent, black scales on the back of his hands, shoulders and the sides of his neck. His hair was the same pewter color and his eyes caught her for a moment, entrancing her. The sclera was onyx black while the irises were a vivid scarlet red. They seemed to have a piercing but not unkind gaze.
"Sura, I'd like you to meet Valko," Dathan said. "He's the captain of the guard and Lyla's sibling."
"I didn't know Lyla had a sibling." Sura said, surprised. "A pleasure to meet you, Valko."
"Likewise," the Captain said, taking up both of her hands in his large ones and gently pressing them to his forehead in greeting. Her hands were small and soft and smelled vaguely of green herbs and clean soap.
A soft blush lit Sura's cheeks as Valko released her hands and she gave him a slight, shy smile.
"What can we do for you?" Sura asked, trying to move beyond the somewhat awkward moment.
"I was grazed by an arrow while out on patrol," Valko explained. "Normally it would be healed by now but, it's rather painful and hasn't really closed."
Sura and Dathan looked at each other for a moment, with concern and then back to Valko.
"We better have a look then..." Dathan said and motioned for Valko and Sura to follow.
The first thing Sura thought was poison. Goshen slavers had been skulking around, too close to Aponia lately. The guard had doubled patrols and extended its range, lest they come too close to Aponia and Ophidian territory. Even a nick from their foul brew would cause complications with the slightest of wounds.
Sura pulled the curtain to the back room for some privacy as Valko settled onto the mat, arranging his onyx coils comfortably beneath him. She saw that his right shoulder was bandaged and he moved more stiffly on his right side.
"Why don't you take a look at his wound, Sura and tell me what you see." Dathan suggested, making himself comfortable. "My old eyes aren't what they used to be."
Liar
, Sura mouthed at Dathan as she took out the step stool she kept for attending to very tall Ophidians. The elder Ophidian chuckled softly and gave her an impish grin as she washed up and prepared to take a look at Valko's wound. He was always playing matchmaker and now was no exception.
"Okay," Sura mused as she carefully unwound the dressing from his shoulder. "Let's see what we got here..."
Sura surveyed the wound for a moment. It was graze about two inches long and it was precisely as Valko had described. It wasn't closing and healing properly; there was infection present and fine, black lines radiating around it, indicating poisoning. Valko hissed in pain when she very lightly touched the inflamed, purplish tissue that was present around the wound.
"It's definitely infected," she started, recounting her observations for both Dathan and Valko. "That's largely from the wound not closing and healing properly. There's indication of poisoning in the tissue; specifically Goshen poison—the ring of black lines radiating out. It would be easy to miss; it looks like a bruise which can happen with a deep graze like this."
"We were ambushed by Goshen." Valko said. "One other was also grazed, but recovered after a day or so."
"It looks like you got a larger dose of poison. Just enough to make this wound difficult for you."
"What do you suggest, then, Sura?" Dathan asked, as she stepped down to wash and dry her hands again.
"It doesn't look like it needs debrided," Sura said, thoughtfully. "Which is good, because that hurts like hell."
"Sura..." Dathan chided lightly.
"What? It's true."
Valko chuckled at that, her directness welcomed and refreshing, as he adjusted his coils to favor more of his left side.
"Anyway, it still needs to be properly cleaned, which will also hurt, but less. Poultice of charcoal, russuale, and pinion to draw out the infection and remaining poison in the tissue. Tea internally for the next week, two times a day to help the body heal, resist further infection and help with the pain and swelling."
"That's a fair assessment." Dathan nodded, as he got up from his spot. "Well done. I'll leave you to see to the Captain's care."
"The bandage needs to be changed everyday, but that might be hard for you to do, at first, with your shoulder as tender as it is right now."
"Will you see to it, then?" Valko asked, his voice deep, yet quiet.
"I...," she started and looked back at Dathan. He smiled slightly and nodded his approval. "Of course. I can come in the morning, if you like."
"That would be agreeable." Valko said. "I'll be off duty until this starts to heal better."
Sura nodded, a bit flustered and excused herself to make the poultice, gather bandages and make the brew for cleaning out the Captain's wound. When she returned, she set everything out on the table, and prepared to begin.
"I apologize if this stings," Sura said quietly. "the wash is antiseptic; you might feel it tingle a bit."
Valko flinched slightly under her hand and hissed, his fangs reflexively bared, as she carefully dabbed at his wound.
"I know, I know," she soothed gently. "It hurts. It'll be over soon, I promise..."
Sura and Valko were nearly chest to chest now, as she continued to patiently clean wound. Every time he inhaled, Valko caught the scent of her. It was like sweet, earthen vetiver with a hint of warm spice, underscored with something delightfully sweet. Valko let it wash over him and with each breath, he relaxed, the pain becoming more bearable.
"Okay, that part's over." she said, stepping down for a moment, and Valko monetarily regretted the absence of Sura being so close to him.
Sura took up the bowl with the poultice and started to carefully spread a thick coat over the wound with a small, wide spatula.
"You're the only apprentice here with Dathan, now?" Valko asked, trying to take his mind off the sting of his shoulder so he could enjoy Sura's closeness to him and her scent more.
"Yes. Elil works in the temple apothecary and dispensary," Sura replied as she washed her hands again and grabbed a long, wide muslin strip, "and I attend more patients on my own now, do house calls, that sort of thing."
"Will you work in the temple as well, when you're done?" he winced as she wrapped his wound. It was an awkward angle that Sura had to contend with, but she made it work.
"Dathan would like to see me work in the infirmary," Sura said, gently tying off Valko's bandage. "but I think I'm a bit too ... course for that. I'm better suited to soldiers and common folk."
"You're not course." Valko said with a throaty chuckle. "You're honest. I knew exactly what to expect and that made it easier to bare. I appreciate that—I'm sure others do too."
"Thanks," Sura said, the faint blush coming back to her cheeks again. "You're all done. I just need to get your tea."
She drew back the curtain for Valko and he followed her out where Dathan awaited, a small bag of tea already on the counter in front of him.
"And here is the tea." Sura said, handing it to Valko. "Directions are on the bag, but ... I can show you how to make it when I come in the morning."
"I'd like that," Valko smiled slightly and then to Dathan: "Your apprentice has a fine and gentle hand. I appreciate her being straightforward about how she was treating the wound and what kind of discomfort I might expect."
Valko paused for a moment, thoughtful, his deep crimson eyes settling on Sura before addressing Dathan again.
"Would you consider allowing Sura to split her apprenticeship between here and the barracks infirmary? Rylin is overwhelmed as it is, and I think Sura could help. More patrols means more injuries and if one of us comes back poisoned again, she'll know what to do..."
Sura looked at Dathan, shocked at Valko's offer. She was speechless as the elder Ophidian stroked his scruffy, gray beard, his tail flipping and curling thoughtfully.
"Under one condition," Dathan said finally. "You write up all your case studies and meet with me twice a week. Rylin is a fair healer—you could learn a lot from him. War medicine is far different than what we do here, but if you get in over your head, you send for me immediately."
"I ... yes, of course." Sura smiled brightly. "Thank you -- both of you!"
"I suppose the Captain would like Sura to stay in or near the barracks?" Dathan asked.
"If it pleases you, Sura." Valko said. "I'm sure I can find you something suitable there."
"That would be fine—It would make it easier for me to tend to your wound also."
"Then it's settled." Valko said. "You can start as soon as you're made yourself at home in the barracks."
"You'd better get a feel for where you're going to be," Dathan smiled wistfully, "You go on --I'll clean up here."
"But--"
Dathan made a shooing motion for her to get going and she hurriedly took off her apron and hung it behind the counter. Sura hugged Dathan tight and kissed him on the cheek.
"Thank you." she said. I'll let you know how it is later."
"It's a barracks-- how else would it be?" Dathan snorted lightly in her ear, and smiled. "Now get out of here. The Captain's waiting..."
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"Dathan cares about your happiness," Valko observed as they approached part of the great wall that was between the Ophidian city of Aponia and the mountain pass that lead into the forest-encrusted foot hills.