Hello everyone.
Something a bit different this time around---I've written a few furry stories before, and sometimes then convert them to humans to put on this site. However, I couldn't see any real way to transfer it to human characters, since their anthropomorphism is central to the plot. So I hope you give it a try, because I think it's a sweet lil' story ^-^
Love ya'll~
It was a strange choice, perhaps.
But it was the best thing for him.
After three weeks in hospital and two months couped up in a recovery centre, most might have wanted to go home. Not Quon. To him, all that was left of the place were memories--something different would be standing in its place now, something heartless, unknown.
So he'd begged Camilla to take him somewhere else, anywhere else, and she'd picked Elderwood. The same place they'd both spent their weekdays for the past twenty-five years.
"I don't believe you," he'd told her when they were in the car, coasting along what he assumed was a highway.
"Don't believe me about what?"
"I think you're taking me somewhere else. Let me guess... the park. No--the beach. I bet you've planned something romantic at the beach."
"We're nearly there. Roll down the window."
"What?"
"Go on."
He fumbled for the switch, pressed it. Felt his eyes squint shut against the sudden blast of wind. He had to shout over the roar. "Alright, what now?"
"Smell."
"What? Smell?" He drew in a deep breath, tried to pick out the scents. Rubber, fumes, fuel... behind that, the vague aroma of freshly cut grass. "I don't get it."
"What don't you smell?"
He thought. "Salt water. Sunshine. Happiness. Okay fine, not the beach then." He flicked the window back up and reduced the rushing wind to a rumble. They lapsed into a moment of silence.
"We can go to the beach if you want..." Camilla had piped up.
"No, it's fine. I wanna see what you had planned."
She'd sounded embarrassed when she said; "I think we should go to the beach."
But they hadn't. Instead they'd parked, carefully negotiated their way to the doors, and padded inside the Elderwood Complex food court entrance.
"I mean, it's... familiar, at least. I guess." Was it familiar? He supposed he could pick out the sounds of the arcade machines a few zones down, smell popcorn from the cinemaplex nearby. But if she hadn't told him it was Elderwood, he could have guessed any other mall.
Still, he tried to remain chipper. Didn't want her to worry. "Did you have anything specific planned? I'm getting pretty hungry."
Camilla had one paw on his shoulder, and she squeezed it lightly. "I... um... I just thought we could sorta wonder around. Sorry, this isn't what you wanted at all is it? I didn't have time to think of anything else, I just assumed we'd go back... home..." She trailed off.
He reached around, patted her hip. "This is nice. Let's eat and then you can take me around."
Before, they'd have split up to explore their favourite eateries and met with full trays at a table later on. But things were different now. Camilla took him to his favourite place, ordered something for herself there too. He wanted to tell her not to, tell her to go get a plate at "Hot Den" like she always did, but the thought of her leaving him alone stayed his words.
Carrying the trays was troublesome too. She was trying to guide Quon
and
carry her food while he held his own tray in front like a highschool newbie looking for a table in the canteen. When she tried getting him through the narrow aisles he bumped into one of the tables and nearly dropped everything. He hastily apologised to the general area but apparently the table's occupants weren't having it, telling him off until he felt Camilla make some kind of gesture and then the people in front of him were apologising themselves and their words dripped with pity. It made his jaw clench.
"Is there anywhere else we can go?" he begged when they'd extracted themselves.
"Um..." he felt Camilla briefly let go of his shoulder, before clamping her paw firmly back down a moment later "Yes. Actually, there is."
It was a bit of a walk, but they didn't bump into anyone else. He could hear the thrum of voices all around, so he wondered if Camilla was leading him expertly or if everyone else
knew,
were parting around him like some kind of biblical sea.
He had no idea where he was now. He'd been coming here for so long, yet he wasn't sure if they were passing the cinema or headed straight for the department stores. If it had been
him
leading
Camilla,
things would be different. She'd be pointing out scents and making jaunty and slightly insulting comments about other people, and her life would be the same, he thought. She was a terrier; sight was only part of her world.
In his first week at the clinic he'd learned newcomers were separated into three departments. It was supposed to help the staff make treatment plans, but to Quon it simply felt like dividing everyone up into how shitty their lives were going to be now.
Those animals over there, they've got brilliant hearing, they'll do just fine. Those, they've got perfect smell... they might be a little slower, but they'll get where they need to go with ease. And... well, see that bandicoot over there? He's screwed.
He hadn't been a particularly good patient the first month at the treatment centre. He'd said some dumb stuff; told one of the youth speakers that it was different for her, that she was blind at birth so she "wasn't missing out." He was better about it now, but he still couldn't help the overwhelming sense that there just wasn't... any
point
anymore. He'd been able to see in the dark better than others could in the day. Could pick out the tiniest of imperfections in clothes and see colour like no one else. He'd been a designer at the peak of his game, and now...
"We're here."
"Where."
She reached around, tapped his nose. "Smell."
He sighed, took in a deep breath. It was hard picking things out in this smΓΆrgΓ₯sbord of weekend activity. "New shoes. Sweat. Pizza? When did we get a pizza place?"
"Keep going."
"Uh... tiles. Cleaning products. Damp fur... no, not fur... it's kinda like moss or something?"
Camilla squeezed his shoulder. "Exactly. And..?"
"Wood. Water. How didn't I smell that before? It's everywhere."
"You can hear it too."
He could, now that he thought about it. Behind the voices, the clink and clack of shoes and hooves and the irritating drone of a spruiker somewhere behind them, there was a small water feature...
several
small water features. "We're at the fountain."