This is my first submission ever. Feedback will be greatly appreciated. There is no sex in this chapter. Maybe in the next one. Enjoy.
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The bar had an odd name.
Fang's Kiss.
The bar was at the end of the main road, away from the center of the city. It sat on a deserted stretch of land, with old warehouses and broken down apartments.
At first glance it had looked deserted, but then Sophia had noticed the movement inside. From the window, it looked like it was almost full.
She hesitated at the corner.
Fang's Kiss
was odd, that much she knew. It wasn't a scary odd, but just an odd that interested her and made her want to stay as far away from the place as she could.
Sophia walked to the bottom of the walkway and paused again. She almost turned and went to go find someplace else. Bust she shook it off and continued up the walkway and opened the door.
She felt a gust of warm air as she walked in, she heard the quiet hum of the patron's voices. Then silence. If felt as if everything had stopped when she walked in. Every eye was on her as she closed the door.
This isn't a regular bar,
she thought. There was no music playing and everyone was deathly quiet. No one moves, they just sat and stared at her. She smiled sheepishly at them and started to move to the bar.
As her eyes swept the room, she notices that everyone was in groups of two's or three's. All of them were pale and wore dark colored clothing. Their eyes seemed to reflect what little light was there.
Sophia slipped off her jacket and hung it over her arm as she moved to the bar. Still no one moved. Their eyes were locked on her, following her every movement. Sophia sat down in one of the bar stools, with her back to the room. Slowly the conversations started again. She knew they were talking about her, the new arrival.
She waited for the bartender to make his way down to where she sat. She resisted the urge to turn around and stare back into the curious eyes glued to her back. The bartender reached her and brought her out of her thoughts.
"What'll ye have?" he asked.
"Bloody Mary," she answered.
He stared at her for a moment with a strange look on his face, and then turned away. She watched as he mixed the drink and sat it in front of her, trying to figure out what the look was for. Giving up, she raised the glass to her lips, and realized he was still standing there, watching her.
"yer not from 'round here, are ye?" he asked.
"No, I just moved here to take care of my dad. How could you tell?" she asked.
He paused for a minute. "Because the locals stay away from here. We dunnot allow visitors."
"You don't
ALLOW
visitors? Why? Is this some private 'members only' bar?" she asked, confused.
"Ye could say tha."
Sophia sat surprised for a moment. "I'm very sorry, I didn't know," she smiled at him shyly. "I'll just leave then .How much is the drink?" she asked as she started to get up.
"Dunna worry about it. Drinks on tha house. When ye finish it, ye can leave."
"Thank you."
The bartender leaned forward suddenly. He caught the collar of her shirt before she could move away. "Make sure," he whispered, so low she could barely hear him. "When ye leave go straight home, dunnot stop for anythin."
He released her shirt and abruptly moved away. She stared at him for a moment. Once again she raised her drink to her lips. She gulped it down ready to leave.
These people are crazy; I have got to get out of here.
She stood quickly, smiled at the bartender and turned to leave. When she turned around, she noticed that everyone had gathered in one large group towards the back.
That's strange,
she thought.
I didn't even hear them move.
Once again everyone was staring at her. She put her jacked on and moved towards the door.
She could feel their eyes watching her as she went.
"Excuse me."
Sophia turned and looked towards the voice.
A tall black haired man had stood and started making his way over to where she stood. He was tall, much taller than her small 5'2" frame. His hair was long, and shaggy. He had beautiful green eyes. He wore a band t-shirt under a black blazer with silver buttons, and dark jeans. He moved smoothly over the floor, as if her were floating instead of walking. His movements reminded her of a jungle cat on the prowl.
Everyone had stopped again, and was staring at her. Even the bartender was looking at her with intense concentration. As she met his eyes, he seemed to be telling her to just leave. She shook it off again,
crazy old man,
she thought.
"Where are you off to so soon?" the man in front of her asked. "You haven't even introduced yourself."
The way he was staring so intently into her eyes made her nervous. She really wanted to leave now. "I just cam in for a minute," she replied.
"Nonsense," he said, grabbing her arm. "It isn't often we have visitors."
He pulled her over to the middle of the large group. "Liam!" he called. "Bring over another of whatever she was drinking!"
As he was ordering her a drink, he moved to a table and two chairs to the center of what was becoming a large circle. He then pushed her into one of the chairs. 'Liam' came over and sat another Bloody Mary in front of her. Sophia watched him as he went back behind the now empty bar.
She turned back as she heard the chair opposite her move, as the man sat down.
"So," he said. "What's your name?"
"Sophia, what's yours?" she replied.
He laughed loudly and the circle joined him. "My name isn't important," he said when he had controlled his laughter. "Everyone here knows who I am, it is you we need to get to know."
"Me? Why am I so important?"
"Because, my dear, you are the center of this conversation."
"I don't think I want to be part of this conversation if I don't even know who I'm talking to," she said as she stood up.
The man reached out and grabbed her wrist, pulling her towards him. He looked as if he were insulted and angry enough to strike her. He gave a small smile that made the hairs on the back of her neck stand up. "You don't need to worry about who I am. All you need to do is answer my questions."
"So, you're telling me that I shouldn't worry about who I am talking to?" she asked. "My daddy told me not to talk to strangers," she added sarcastically.
Then entire circle got still then, the phrase 'you could hear a pin drip' floated through her head. The man's face contorted into a mask of rage. Sophia recoiled. For the first time since she had walked into the bar, she was truly afraid.
The man across from her got control of himself, and smiled at her again. She felt cold dread in the pit of her stomach. His smile seemed like he was a dog baring his teeth at her, she imagined she could hear him growl.
"That's not very polite. You don't know who your messing with."
She looked back at him and tried to keep her fear under control. "It isn't nice to have a conversation with someone and refuse to introduce yourself. Not to mention your implied threat."
His smile seemed glued in place. He was making sure he kept his cool. Sophia could almost feel the circle close in on her from behind. She wanted to turn and see if the had actually moved, but she was too frightened to take her eyes off the man in front of her.