I haven't submitted anything to LIterotica since I was published, but people have been asking for more, so here is a story just for Literotica. Enjoy.
The Eye
Chapter 1
Darla pulled her coat tighter around her, trying not to notice the Eye. She knew that it couldn't be focused on her—she hadn't done anything and wasn't anyone important. Yet from the edge of her vision she saw it turned towards her, watching. Other people moved past and around her, most of them glancing furtively at the floating orb that was how those in power watched the rest of the world. It was inevitably bad to be noticed by the Eye, and although Darla had never had it focus on her before, she'd known people who knew other people who had disappeared after the Eye had become interested in them. People who just disappeared from the city—never to return.
Although Darla had been planning on walking to work, she suddenly changed her mind and went down the steep steps to the subway. She was moving more quickly now, even though she felt as if the Eye was a bit like a cat that would follow a fleeing target with more interest than it would a sedate, boring one. Even knowing this she couldn't help herself from looking back over her shoulder one more time to see if the orb was still following her.
It was.
A train pulled up into the station and in a rush Darla pushed her way in as people streamed out. No matter that this wasn't the right train and was going the opposite direction. The itch of fear that had started between her shoulder blades and had now spread down her entire body was nearly taking her over. Once in the train she sank into a seat and drew her knees up, hugging them to her and resting her head on them. She was being ridiculous, of course she was, but what the hell. She'd tell her boss at work that she'd overslept or something, and then she'd laugh at herself for freaking out over a passing Eye.
The train doors closed and the orb was left behind.
Relief hit her so hard she laughed a little, making people edge away from her. She had imagined the whole thing. Now she turned her attention to what she'd say when she finally got to work. She didn't realize that several other passengers were looking at her, seeing a tall, slim brunette with pleasing features sitting in obvious distress.
She got off at the next stop and boarded the train heading the other direction. She was only minutes late for work but her boss chewed her out anyway. She supposed she deserved it and nodded at all the right places. She hated getting in trouble, liked going along without notice. In her world, getting noticed was rarely a good thing. Like the Eye, getting noticed at work didn't lead to a better job or more pay, it usually led to punishment or even demotion or termination.
Darla went to her desk and sat, immersing herself into her work. Hours later she took a very short break, using the restroom and getting a drink of water. She saw her boss looking at his watch and moved quickly back to her desk. Work waited. Work always waited.
At the end of the day—twleve hours of routine, monotonous work—Darla stood and rubbed her aching back. One of the men who worked with her smiled at her. She looked away, hoping he wouldn't talk to her. She didn't want any attention, didn't want a relationship or even a date. Although it was against code, people did date. Maybe because it wasn't supposed to be happening people seemed to want it all the more. Sometimes people were like that. Darla figured she'd do as the code stated and wait until her mate was chosen, then do the kid thing. Once the children were five or older she was allowed to dissolve the mating. If she was honest with herself it didn't sound all that good. Relationships were often contentious, and she hoped she was one of the lucky ones who seemed to be overlooked when it came to mating. That would be easier all around.
She was halfway home when she noticed another Eye. Had it been there before? Was it the same one? She walked faster now, ready to break into a run. No, don't give it anything to watch. Don't look guilty. Just ignore it. She knew all the right things to tell herself but it wasn't working because she was growing sure that it wasn't coincidence, not her imagination, it was watching her and was following her.
Once she reached her small apartment with its uneven floors and lively bug population she stood against the wall wishing she had coverings on the window. It was forbidden, of course, to block the Eye from seeing, and every apartment had big windows that were to remain unblocked at all times. The only place she could be completely alone was the bathroom, and it looked dodgy if she spent too much time in there.
She made a quick meal for herself, carefully not looking out the window. If the Eye was there, she was marked for sure. It would just be a matter of time before they came for her.
She made it until she was sitting down to eat. Then she raised her head, unable to wait any longer, and there it was. The Eye was hovering outside her apartment window, looking in. Game over.
Her heart pounding, she forgot her dinner and walked over to the window finally allowing herself to look right at the Eye. Why pretend not to? She wondered how long it would be before people arrived at her door and took her away. And then what? The list of possible offenses for removal was long, but Darla really thought that she'd been living a clean life. No dates, work history was clear, no disallowed books, magazines, toys. Nothing. She'd spent her whole life trying not to be noticed. And yet there was obviously something she'd overlooked. Something important enough to have marked her.
She lay awake that night. The blue glow cast by the staring Eye was keeping her edgily awake. She waited for that knock at the door minute by agonizing minute. She'd thought about running—thought about it seriously—but she couldn't do it. No one made it once they were marked. The city was walled in in any case. And maybe, she thought, this was all a mistake and when they came to the door they'd tell her it was fine, no problem, she could continue with her life. But the part of her that even hoped for that was small—frighteningly small. As the sun rose, the expected knock arrived. Darla rose as if she were dreaming and went to the door. As she'd expected two extractors stood, their faces shadowed with visors, and said, "Darla MacKenzie, AHR196316, you are to come with us."
Darla turned to take a small backpack that she'd packed the night before once she'd given up on escaping the eye. She slung the pack over her shoulder and turned to the extractors. "I'm ready."
No one came out of their apartment to watch her extraction. No one wanted to catch the attention of the people in charge, sometimes called the officials.