I find most cuckold stories tedious and repetitious. After all, how many different themes can there be on "I wanted my wife to cuckold me?" But, occasionally there's one that shows originality, depth of character development, and is well written. All of those traits were exhibited in "Circle of Cuckolds," written and posted here in January of 2006. The ending of the story was, in my opinion, incomplete, and could have gone well beyond where it was ended by the author,
Cucked_Hubby
. I had some ideas of how to end the story more effectively and attempted to contact the author for permission. I wasn't at all surprised to learn that all emails were barred by the site. "Loving Wives" stories often result in overly negative reactions, sometimes from readers who have never posted any story themselves. I'm guessing that's why
Cucked_Hubby
stopped all communications from reaching him. I also suspect that is why he never posted another story here on Literotica.
This story involves a woman—Linda—who tricks and coerces her husband—Bruce—into joining a club in which horny white wives cuckold and humiliate their husbands with extremely well-hung black studs. Of course, the cuckolded husbands rarely fuck their wives once the women have experienced the "superior" black cocks. In the original story the word Black is always capitalized as is the word Men, as if to demonstrate the "superiority" of the Black Club members. Of course, all of the Black Men have huge cocks—long and thick. I should tell you of an online conversation I had years ago with a black woman who was looking for a white man to fuck. "Why," I asked, "when you could have a big black cock?" Her answer surprised me. She said that in her experience black men's cocks were no bigger than white men's, but for this story all black men have huge cocks. Use your imagination. The term "Circle of Cuckolds" refers to where the cuckolds must sit while their wives are otherwise occupied with their Black lovers. As the cuckolding continues, Bruce becomes more and more submissive out of fear of being beaten—whipped by the studded belt of one of Linda's powerful young lovers-and Linda, resultantly more dominant. That continues in my sequel. I've tried to keep the style of the writing identical to the original. There are many themes in this story, but the primary one is cuckolding so I have placed it in Loving Wives, like the original story.
The following is how I would have ended the story. I'm sure that many will hate it, but that's okay. I'm an old man and I have a really thick skin. I wrote it and even I found the characters, especially Linda and her close friend, Marie, to be despicable, before Bruce manages to turn things around near the end. I intended to write Linda as a totally self-serving bitch and I think I was successful. I found myself despising her as the story progressed. Feel free to write whatever comments you want. I rarely read them anyway. However, I do encourage you to vote. If you don't like the subject, don't bother to read because it is long. I will tell you that I love a happy ending and this story surprisingly has one.
Circle of Cuckolds—Part 4-Conclusion
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On Saturday Linda met with her friend Marie at the country club for lunch and a few drinks, but mostly to share her important news. Their order had just been taken when she could hold back no longer. "I'm just bursting to tell you about our most recent progress," she whispered. Sensing the private nature of Linda's remarks, Marie leaned forward toward her friend.
"After Leroy's visit last night, I had Bruce eat me and clean me, sucking all of Leroy's goo out of my hot cunt then he continued until I had another massive orgasm. I think it was my seventh or eighth of the evening and I told him to keep it on his face all night while he slept. I was quite surprised when he instantly complied."
"You didn't! Way to go, girl! How did you get him to do it?"
"It was easier than I thought it would be. I just explained how important it was to demonstrate the proper level of respect to all of the Men of the Club and to me, and that disobedience or disrespect could result in a VERY serious punishment. I could see how upset and afraid he was of that."
"Well, if you have any problems in that regard, just have him talk with Jim. I told you that Jack punished him when he was reluctant to participate fully and serve me early on. Jack took his belt to Jim's ass. He hasn't even thought of disobeying me since."
"I do love Bruce, but after so many years of being his subordinate and putting up with his shitty sex, I'm really enjoying being on top and I'm planning to stay there. I've spent the entire time of our marriage working then coming home to cook, clean, and do laundry. Then three times a week I'd lie under him and put up with his feeble attempts to have sex. It not for my vibrator I could probably count my orgasms on one hand. It's time I relaxed and had him take care of me."
"That's the kind of thinking I like. Jim's doing all that shit for me now in the hope that I'll just let him jerk off before locking him back up again. He knows that refusal to wear his chastity belt will just get him another whipping. Any thoughts on belting Bruce?"
"Yes...oh, yes indeed! I'm going to let him fuck me tonight. Well, he'll try, but I'll claim that I can't even feel him after fucking the Men from the Circle Club. Then I'll jerk him off and have him clean my hands of his wimpy cum. 'Bruce,' I'll say, 'you need to condition yourself to the taste of semen so you'll be prepared for the next time you have to clean me.' I'll convince him and soon he'll suck up all of his cum eagerly. Then I'll have to play it by ear. Maybe I'll stop jerking him and I'll catch him doing it in the shower. When I go berserk about the lack of respect he's showing me, and threaten to tell one of the Men, he'll fold and accept the belt rather than a suffer a bad whipping."
"That would be a good time to suggest that he speak with Jim. Bruce will be putty in your hands by the time he gets back home. He'll do anything you tell him." Marie began to laugh and Linda quickly joined her. They spent the rest of their lunch comparing notes on how to control their spouses. Marie then made a few recommendations for Linda's next partner at the upcoming party. A few months ago, Linda would have never given a second's thought to the idea of female domination, but her eyes had been opened since joining the Club. Like Pandora's Box, once opened they would never close.
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Bruce had grilled burgers for a light Saturday evening meal that they had eaten on the patio. Now they were enjoying a delightful post-dinner glass of Merlot. Bruce started to say something, but swiftly stopped, showing his uncertainty. A few months ago, before joining the Circle Club he would have confidently suggested that they retire to bed for a great evening of fucking or even just a sloppy blowjob. Linda sensed his uneasiness. "Bruce, darling, why don't you crawl over here and give me a good licking? You really do that so well, especially since we've joined the Club."
