Here's my entry for the
Summer Lovin'
contest. I hope it gives some enjoyment.
An aging bachelor is smitten by a much younger woman after a chance encounter in the local park. Gina is a language student from Russia: gorgeous, nineteen years old and already has a local boyfriend.
It seems Andrew, at close to fifty-nine, has no hope of experiencing the girl's lithe attentions.
Anyway, here's the piece. Feedback is good. I'd like to hear your comments -- the good and the not-so if you're that way inclined.
Thanks for reading.
GA -- Chester, England -- 4th of September 2014.
One
June
The nation held its collective breath. Everyone wanted good weather. Not necessarily a Mediterranean heatwave, just some sunshine, enough to get our knees brown, perhaps enjoy a few weekend barbecues.
It hadn't happened the first day I saw her. That morning had seen rain, a typical start to a British summer. But the afternoon was a brighter prospect.
We were in the park, with Buster making his usual forays into the undergrowth. The lazy drizzle had ceased, and the sun was making a valiant effort to break up the cloud. The dog sniffed and snuffled amongst the bushes while I stayed on the path and strolled along. There was no rush, I had nowhere to be, no meetings or appointments ruling my days. Workaday stress was a thing of the past. I'd made my money and retired early at fifty-five. I own the house outright and have money put away. I'm going to travel sometime, but, at the moment, the Border Terrier keeps me anchored to England.
Buster was behind me that afternoon, just a dog doing his thing as we made the gentle ascent towards the deserted play-park.
And that's when I noticed her coming towards me. The moment marking a significant change in my life.
****
The girl moved along at a fair clip, Cuban heels pocking against the pavement in a quick, metronomic beat. I had time to notice blue jeans, a red hooded top and long, straight, fair hair before she drew level with me. As she went past I glanced out of the corner of my eye and was immediately struck by how pretty she was, a very cute girl who ignored everything around her, her eyes set on the pavement.
It crossed my mind to say something, to greet her with a cheery "good afternoon" or some-such, but her eye-line remained fixed on the ground a couple of feet in front of her. Then she was beyond me, those heels marking her departure while I considered her disinclination towards eye contact.
My face warmed when it occurred to me that her complete avoidance might be a defence mechanism against pervy old men in parks, but I still turned to look, compelled to do so, drawn by the brisk peck-peck-peck of her boot heels and the lingering image of her face imprinted on my mind.
The time from me spotting the girl to her passing might only have been ten seconds or so, but she had affected me on a level I couldn't articulate.
My natural inclination was to turn and watch her walk -- a young woman with somewhere to be.
She was slim and agile, her gait purposeful, round buttocks packed into tight denim making a very pleasing sight as she hip-swayed away. The way she moved was almost hypnotic, and I could have stared at her taut posterior all day had propriety and distance not curtailed my lecherous inclinations.
Buster finished his exploration and trotted up to me, his return bringing my focus away from the girl. We walked on, homeward bound, with tight jeans and flowing hair lingering in my mind.
She remained in my thoughts for the rest of that afternoon, just a vague impression, oddly disturbing, dangerous, like a hint of smoke in the air with no visible fire.
****
The weather picked up over the next few days, turning warmer, with assurances from the chirpy presenter on television that it was set to get even better. We were in the park again, just approaching the playground, Buster running free around the bushes when I saw the girl for the second time.
I swear my heart fluttered, although there were other physiological effects too, carnal urges that I tried to supress because decency demanded it. Regardless of the effect she had on me, it seemed to me there was something slightly off about a man in his fifties lusting after a girl who could be no older than twenty.
I tried, I really did, but I couldn't get away from the fact she really was something special: a petite little thing, very slender, her long legs and willowy arms bare, scant clothing chosen perhaps in deference to the kinder weather. As she came on I saw she was wearing a skimpy top in pale yellow with bootlace straps, brief denim shorts and a pair of pink Skechers.
She looked wholesome and full of vitality. The way she moved gave me the immediate impression she was very agile, her slim body putting me in mind of an athlete, her slight frame perfectly formed for gymnastics or dancing. As before, when I'd first seen her, she wore her long hair loose, the fringe cut high in a style that put me in mind of Central and Eastern Europe.
Could she be foreign? The idea wasn't beyond the bounds of possibility.
My quick appraisal continued as she came towards me, my eyes flicking to her legs, the sight of such lean thighs and smooth, shapely calves tugging at me on a visceral level. It was no use, despite my attempts to quell my desires the attraction was immediate, near breath-taking. I was drawn to the girl by some primeval instinct, a dark urge stirring inside me. Yearning flared suddenly, a flash of heat in the pit of my stomach that spread outwards and left a void inside me; a hollow ache of impossible ambition, the need to possess her physically an infinite vacuum in some deep and indefinable place.
Then she was past me, her going turning my head.
"Oh, God," I moaned quietly, the sight of her swaying rump. The brisk flick of her hair only exacerbated my longing.
I stood and stared until the girl was out of sight, my slack-jawed appraisal of a young woman probably three decades or more younger than me earning a couple of disapproving looks from the mothers at the play-park.
Their pursed lips and mutterings between themselves set me walking again, with Buster following in his own good time as I fled from the coven's venomous verdict.
The next day, at the same time, in almost the same spot -- thankfully with a different set of mothers and their noisy offspring in the playground -- I saw the girl again.
****
Another warm day saw her in a sleeveless blouse with a tiny red and white check pattern. The blouse was unbuttoned and tied in front to reveal the girl's navel, her modesty intact because of some cropped white vest she had on underneath.