This began as a contest submission and due to the constraints of the contest went far off the rails. Anyone who has read my stories knows limiting me to 750 words is a failure waiting to happen. So 19407 words later, I give you this story. I've tried a few different things here, a new category for one, writing in the third person for another.
As always, constructive criticism is always welcome.
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She looked down at the outfit he'd laid out for her and smiled. Black leather pumps, lace edged silk stockings, black leather mini skirt, a black lace bra, and a low cut silk top. She smiled noting the lack of panties. "Okay, so that's how he wants to play it," she thought.
She was normally a bit more conservative. A school teacher by day, but when he wanted to play they tended toward the theatrical, and role play was something they both enjoyed. This time she was going to be the libertine. He liked to share, and she enjoyed how it made her feel to tempt and tease other men. She sometimes delivered, and made him watch. That was his kink. She walked to the bath of their swanky hotel suite and looked in the mirror. She was in terrific shape and the outfit was going to fit her like a glove. She slipped off her robe, her breasts were high and though not large, they were well shaped. She tweaked her nipples, turned slowly and looked down over her shoulder at her ass. "Not bad for an old lady," she said aloud. "I need to keep doing those squats at the gym." She slapped her ass, the crack was loud as it reverberated off the tile. She ran a bath. "If I'm going to play the part I might as well do myself up right."
She reclined in the scented bath, lifting a leg free of the water watching it purl into the tub. She thought the stockings an odd choice with the mini skirt since her legs were still holding a decent tan and the tops would show. She smiled realizing that was the intent. It was his fantasy, and she loved fulfilling them nearly as much as he enjoyed coming up with them. She was was horny and wanted nothing more than to relieve herself but she held off knowing it would be sweeter for the wait. She dried off and anointed herself with lotion and a few daubs of her favorite perfume before she did her makeup. She went for a dark lipstick and smoky eyes before teasing her hair into a dirty blonde drift past her shoulders. She walked into the bedroom and began to don her outfit for the evening.
The bedside phone rang.
"Hello?"
"Come down when you're ready," was all he said.
"I'll be down in a few minutes." She said trying and failing to hide the smile from her voice. She slipped her wedding bands off and put them into her purse as she looked over the room seeing nothing to give their identity away and headed for the elevator. She got on and a bellhop got on with her. She decided to warm up using him and gave him a little smile. She could see him visibly tense up and smiled even more broadly. She watched floors count down she turned to him and said, "Give me your phone quick." He fumbled it out of his pants and handed it to her. She found the camera app and held it down beneath her skirt aimed up between her legs and snapped a picture, the flash went off. She looked at the preview of the picture which didn't include her face and handed it back to him just as she stepped off the elevator and didn't look back. She walked slowly across the lobby, savoring the sharp click of her heels on the polished marble, well aware of several heads turning to watch her as she walked into the hotel lounge. She slid carefully onto one of the bar stools and crossed her legs. The bartender was quick and soon she had a drink in front of her. She wondered how long it would take before he hit on her.
"Hello."
She nodded. "Hello," and took a sip of her drink.
"Are you from around here?" He asked.
She looked at him for a long moment and rolled her eyes. "I've stunned you into going to the most basic of pick up lines have I?"
He had the sense to look chagrined. He had a nice smile, and everything about him set her off. He was handsome, maybe in his mid thirties, and had a handsome face, and a firm body. She tilted her head and he understood the unasked question.
"Tom."
She smiled. "Dawn." She tilted her head to beckon him in closer. "Let's cut to the chase Tom. Which pocket has your wedding band in it?" He looked slightly crestfallen as she laughed softly. "Don't worry, mine is in my purse." He immediately perked up at that. She leaned forward giving him a glimpse down the front of the top and whispered into his ear. "I don't usually fuck around Tom but when I do, I choose wisely." She let her hand slip off her lap and reached across the short distance to rub the front of his slacks. "I have a good feeling about you Tom. Since we both have things to lose, it makes you a safe bet. You do have to agree with some rules though. Nod if you want to hear them."
He nodded.
"Good boy." She rubbed the front of his slacks more firmly, enjoying the thickness that was forming there. "Safety first, if I were to entertain you for the evening," She gave him a lingering kiss beneath his ear, "he wears a raincoat at all times."
He nodded again.
"I like you Tom." She firmed her grip keeping Tom rooted to his spot. "The other is that my husband gets to watch." He couldn't back up without revealing her grip on his cock. She heard him swallow nervously. "Don't worry, he likes it. I'm all yours, he won't join in and I will drain you until you are a mere husk of a man, but he will be sitting in a chair watching everything." She leaned forward rubbing her cheek to his and flicked his ear lobe with her tongue, feeling his cock twitch in excitement. He didn't move and she was enjoying the feel of him growing beneath her fingertips. She uncrossed her legs. "Tom, as a little show of faith and my incredibly bad intentions, I'm going to unbutton your coat to help cover your tracks, set your hand on my thigh and slip your hand up my skirt and see how excited the prospect of riding you like a rodeo bronco has me." He took a long pull of his drink and set it down, drying the damp fingers on the napkin beneath. He turned and did as asked. She let out a little sigh, her eyes bright. "Your hand is cold. If you keep going it should get a lot warmer." Tom's hand stopped at the top of her stocking, her skin was hot to the touch.
"Is he upstairs now?" He asked, sotto voce.
She reached for her drink and took a sip to cover her reply. "No he's in here somewhere, watching us right now."
Tom's eyes went wide and his eyes started glancing around. He began to withdraw his hand and her thighs closed on it holding it in place.
"Look at me. You've got the jar open but you haven't found the honey yet." She licked her lower lip slowly. She nudged his hand with her thigh and his hand started moving upward again. A smile crossed her lips at that. His fingers found the source of the heat and rubbed her gently, his fingers getting slick. She let out a soft sound of approval and licked her lips again. "I'm glad you're a ballsy guy Tom. Now don't linger there, you have a decision to make." She leaned forward as his hand slid away slowly. She whispered in his ear. "What'll it be boy? Yes, or no."
He pretended to reach for his drink but drew back and tasted his fingers quickly running his tongue over them behind the veil of her hair. Her eyes flashed in astonished glee. He nodded again.
"We're going to get along just fine you and I. What I'm going to do is leave and go up to my room, 442. Keep an eye on the clock and don't leave the bar for ten minutes, then come upstairs and knock on my door." She turned and nuzzled his cheek and gave him a kiss leaving a dark lipstick print in her wake.