Preface: I am not an erotica writer. Hell, I've not even written a sex scene in my work. But I thought I'd give one random dude on Reddit a story he was asking for and this is the result. The kinks involved are kind of esoteric for me, but I've read and seen enough porn/smut to attempt to write this. Cuckoldery, degradation, sluttery, and a gangbang later, I'm not sure if I'm any good at this. The dude gave me permission to post this here but had nothing else to say. So, if any kind smut loving folk could tell me how I can improve or if I did something right, I'd appreciate it. Thanks! (This is quite literally the first draft too. So, please excuse if there's any grammatical errors. I wrote it in one shot in a few hours)
Description: Kay's girl's night out descends into debauchery as she shows John, her husband what she truly wants.
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Time seemed to fly as Kay schlepped all over town, happy to be out of the house. They'd visited some nice stores, looking for handbags and the like and they'd gotten to the dinner portion of the day. Standing outside the restaurant on the opposite side of the street, Kay looked at her phone. No text from John. She couldn't exactly place why it ticked her off, but it did when she movement in the corner of her eye caught her attention.
She looked up to see her cohorts waving at her from across the street. "Finally," she thought. It looked like they finally received confirmation about their reservation. As she crossed the street, shoving the phone back into her purse, she saw the dejected faces of her troupe and her momentary happiness faded. As she got closer, she said, "No bueno?"
"Nope," replied Mandy. "The people at the desk say they're fully booked and we're like in line for the tables. But the wait time might be a good hour."
"Just an hour? You sillies. I thought from your looks that it'd be ages."
"But it's your first day out since forever girl," chimed in Tracy.
Kay rolled her eyes. "Sure, but I'm with y'all. Let's go to the mall nearby and waste some time. It should be within walking distance."
As the group walked to the mall, they crossed a bar, The Twilight Exit. Val let out a low whistle as she walked on tiptoes to catch a glimpse of its insides. "That's one swanky fucking bar."
Kay took her phone out as they continued to walk and looked up the bar. It was swanky alright. A regular drink seemed to cost upwards of 20 bucks and the consensus was that the more you spend, the higher the quality of the cocktails. "Esoteric ingredients and amazing staff," she muttered, mostly to herself but it wasn't missed by the others.
"What's that?" asked Tracy.
Kay looked up from her phone. "Oh, the bar. It's the general consensus. Esoteric ingredients and amazing staff. We should go there."
"Gurl, that looks like it'll rip a hole in my fucking savings. Y'all can drink some fireball and get the same kinda fucked up," said Val, eliciting a couple of giggles from Tracy.
When Kay looked at her, stifling a smile herself, Tracy replied, "What? Don't tell me you don't want to?"
"Never mind that," Kay said, looked ahead at the pavement. "Let's see if we can't find something nice in the mall, you guys."
As the troupe entered and split themselves between the various stores, Kay couldn't focus. Her mind kept wandering back to the lack of communication today from John. As she wandered about the mall, she caught herself staring into one of the stores that had the Tom Ford logo emblazoned on the entrance. She wondered how Tom Ford of all things had a store in this mall when her thoughts were interrupted by a man.
"Is there something I could help you with, miss?"
Kay shook her head as if to clear it and looked at the man, an elderly gentleman who she could see as someone the store would have running it. "Oh no, I'm fine. I was lost in thought."
"I must say, ma'am, it looked like you were looking at some of our merchandise. Getting lost in thought could be a compliment for the brand, if that was on your mind."
Kay smiled, "Playing up your shop while at the same time making it seem like I'm good enough to give a compliment to a store like this? You're smooth."
The man paused and then smiled widely. "Well, it seems I've met a match in my wits. Would you like to come in and check out the store just to humour an older gentleman?"
Kay nodded, "Of course, Mr.?"
"Ashford. Colin Ashford, at your service."
"I'm Kay."
Ashford smiled and gestured her into the store, "The pleasure is mine, Ms. Kay."
"It's uh..." Kay said, before pausing and then continued, "It might be a bit out of my budget, Colin. I want to say that, right off the bat."
"The best things in the world always feel like that but I think a woman like you wouldn't let that stop you."
Kay blushed slightly, turning away under the pretense of looking at the dress she was looking at from outside. "This is what I was looking at, wasn't it?"
"Yes, it is Ms. Kay. It's a more recent idea that Mr. Ford seemed to have. A deep blue sheath dress. He was inspired by the night sky, apparently."
Kay looked at him, his choice of words, catching her attention. Colin grinned.
"I shouldn't be surprised that you caught that."
Kay replied, "You don't share the ideals of the store?"
"Ms. Kay, with the way that the world works, I'm sure this is a bit overpriced for what it has. And my opinion on this dress is that, and the occasional speck of white you see that represents stars just feels tacky."
Kay looked at him, curiously now, "What would you then recommend to me? Something not tacky. Something that's me?"
Colin paused, looking a bit surprised by a possible ulterior nature to the question, before he composed himself. "This way, Ms. Kay," he said, gesturing to the inside of the store.
"Um Kay is fine," she said as she followed him inside the store. The smell of fabric hit her stronger now, with the store's dim lights and moody atmosphere making it so that the place felt personal, in a way.
"Well, Kay, a woman like you, would look simply marvelous in anything but I believe that a peplum jacket like this," he said, gesturing to a blood red jacket with hints of black lines to accentuate it, "with a skirt would be just," he did a chef's kiss. "You are a stunning woman, Kay. And I think this would let people see how stunning you can be."
Kay was almost slack jawed. She felt a heat rising in her. Here she was standing in a store, in public, talking to a guy who was older than her and probably wasn't even trying to hit on her and she was feeling weak. Arousal sent a shock through her and she shook her head again, trying desperately to clear it. She looked at him and smiled weakly, "Flattery won't get you anywhere, Colin."
"I wasn't trying to flatter, Kay," he said.
Kay's phone buzzed. She looked at her purse and fished it out saying, "Sorry, I might need to take this." Colin nodded and she saw that the call was from Val and her disappointment helped her stave off her arousal. "What is it Val?"
Val replied, "Got bad news about the restaurant."
"They've not got our seats yet?"
"Nope. Says it's going to be a bit longer."
"Damn."
Colin looked at Kay curiously, moving back to allow her space. Kay looked up at him and smiled, and said, "Well, I don't mind waiting," as she hung up.
"What was that about, Ms., erm, Kay?" Colin asked.
Kay sighed, "It's a girl's day and night out and we were supposed to dinner at Catch 35 but we were late and it's a busy day."
Colin nodded, "That is understandably unfortunate Kay. Do you and your friends have a backup plan?"
"Well, we thought we'd spend some time here before we went back out but if it's taking this long, we might have to cut our losses because I'm sure it's probably as busy at an Applebee's. I asked them if they wanted to go to The Twilight Exit but they're afraid of the expense."
Colin perked up at this and grinned. "I might have good news that might salvage your night out Kay. Give me one moment." He turned and went to the front of the store, leaving Kay alone. She finally had space to think. "God, am I that hung up for attention that a random fucking man can turn me into jelly? Jesus Christ. I need to get a grip," she thought.
As she turned to look at the dress again, Colin returned, not taking too long. "Good news. Well, it might be good news. I own The Twilight Exit. With a friend but I basically have equal say in what happens there and guess who now has an all paid visit?"
Kay's jaw dropped. "No..." she said, unwilling to believe what she heard.
"Yes. People will meet you at the entrance. I said that you might be with a group of people. I said, 10 to be on the safe side."
"10? No no. It's only 5 including me. Are you sure this is okay?"
"Kay, even if everyone who ever visits The Twilight Exit drinks themselves silly, we don't care. I'm rich enough to not worry and besides, I can do what I want with my bar." Colin looked at her and smiled. "Now go. Have fun! I hope I have the fortune to meet you again."
Kay smiled and looked at Colin. "I actually would like to. And now that I know where I can get to meet you, I'll drop by for a nice chat."
"I'd appreciate that, Kay. It was a pleasure serving you here. Now you ladies go have fun."
It was about two hours that Kay and her friends spent at The Twilight Exit. Drinking. Chatting. Being merry. The others couldn't believe it when they heard Kay and when they were ushered in, they didn't have to anymore. It was a dream come true for everyone as a couple chose to drink esoteric cocktails and flirt with the bar staff while the others including Kay went for the regular drinks but wanted to get drunk.
Time flew once again and when they had to leave, Uber was their savior. Well, for everyone except Kay. As they had the bouncers looking after them, her friends thought nothing of leaving her to wait for her Uber. When it didn't show up and she had to keep trying to rebook her trip, a familiar voice rang out in the dark.