Author's notes
I have been contacted on many occasions by readers asking me to write about particular scenarios they've had in mind and add them into some of my multi-part stories. These I have so far resisted as their ideas usually take my characters into an area I don't envisage them in. I have also been contacted a few times with complete story ideas. Again I have resisted this as I have so many of my own tales to finish writing.
However last year a plot was sent to me by a reader (he wishes to remain anonymous but for the purpose of these notes I'll call him Matt), which I felt had some merit. I got an idea for my leading lady immediately and off I went. My problem was that as usual I got distracted onto other stories and it became yet another one that remained unfinished.
That was until December when
rnebular
submitted Temptation, Parts 1-4. I knew the characters instantly and read Parts 1-3 with great enjoyment.
Interested in how his version of Matt's outline differed to mine but happy that at least someone had written a story and submitted it, I checked back into my word documents. I was amazed to find that I had 5 versions on my computer (2 x first person and 3 x third person). Spread amongst them I found I had loads of background and character development along with huge chunks of dialogue. It was far more than I thought I'd written.
Being off work for a couple of weeks just before Christmas due to illness and somewhat inspired by what I had previously written I began to cobble together a complete story of my own together with an ending. (Just to let you know, at the time of posting this story I have still not read rnebular's final part).
So with the gracious permission of rnebular, here for better or worse is my version of Matt's story.
In closing I will tell you that it is fairly lengthy (around 12 pages I think) although there is quite a bit of dialogue. I did toy with the idea of dividing it into parts but in the end went with my initial thought of submitting it as a complete story. So you have been warned. However, if it helps I have split it into chapters so you can dip in and out of the story if you so desire.
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Chapter 1
"Okay Sophie, you be good for Daddy. Momma's got to go to work today but I'll see you later this afternoon." With her red jacket draped over her arm and clutching her favorite large blue handbag, Anna Hutchison leaned over and kissed the head of her little girl. "I love you!" she added.
"Bye momma," the nearly three year old replied innocently as she briefly looked up at her mother before returning her full attention back to the small bowl of breakfast cereal in front of her.
Anna glanced across at her husband David who was lolling against the worktop at the far side of the kitchen, a faint smile playing on his lips as he watched her fussing over their daughter.
"What?" she said, her eyes opening enquiringly wider.
"Nothing," he replied with a broad grin, shaking his head. "You realize that's the third time you've said goodbye to her!"
"Is it?" she replied brusquely. "Well it's important that she knows I love her and will miss her, that's all."
"I'm pretty sure she does," he said, still smiling at Anna as he walked over to her. "Now get off to work. You know you have to go, so quit stalling and get a move on."
He stood alongside her and gave her a light slap on the ass, followed immediately by a second and then a third. His hand lingered there as he ran it over her curvy ass cheeks before finishing off with a playful squeeze.
"By the way, did I tell you that you've got a great ass?" His hand was now resting on her hip but he was looking down at the inviting swell of her curvy ass cheeks
"Only about four or five times today," she replied with a devastating smile.
"Nice legs too," he added gazing down at her long shapely legs, which were displayed quite nicely beyond her shorter than knee length skirt. The skirt was flared but importantly it still clung to her delightful ass.
"But shame about the face!" Anna quickly retorted. "Nice legs; shame about the face. You know; the saying!"
He tilted his head to one side and gave her a wry smile. She was funny. She was drop dead gorgeous and she knew it although she never flaunted it.
"GO ... TO ... WORK," he said, firmly emphasizing each word as he ushered her towards the door; she reluctantly tottering forward in her high heels as he did. "If you don't leave now you're going to be late. You know the traffic's a bitch at this time in the morning."
"Okay, okay, I'm going. Bye Sophie, I love you." She leaned towards him and gave him a quick peck on the lips. She didn't want him to smudge her lipstick. "And I love you too," she added.
"Yeah, I know," he replied.
She made it to the door before turning around one last time. "Don't forget to take some money into the Day Care Center later for Sophie's outing. Okay?"
"JUST ... GO ..." he said, lovingly scowling back at his wife, "I can handle everything."
She took a deep breath and closed the door behind her. He smiled. He knew she was SO not looking forward to going to work today.
He walked over to the kitchen window and watched her leave. He meant everything he'd said to Anna. With a face that could easily adorn the front covers of the glossy magazines she also had a body that wouldn't look out of place as the centerfold spread of a Playboy or Penthouse magazine. He was pretty sure that other people thought that about her too!
And why not! At twenty five years of age she was now at the peak of her delicious femininity. Her oval shaped face was framed by long wavy, naturally blonde hair that came down in tresses to rest between her shoulder blades. Her large blue eyes were simply stunning and gave her a bewildered look that David found quite endearing. And when she smiled, which was often, her full lips would part to reveal sparkling white teeth.
It was true that fresh out of High School she'd turned down the chance of a modeling contract not wanting to leave their small town and had resisted further offers when she'd gone on to the nearby college. She'd told David that she declined all the requests as she didn't want to leave him. It was their little joke as they didn't actually date each other until just before she graduated, by which time David had been left college for over two years. She told him later that she knew after their first date that he was the one; that he was going to be her soul-mate for life; till death do us part.
Since their marriage, parenthood had blessed her with a slightly fuller figure than she'd had at High School and college but all it did was accentuate her womanly curves. At 5'5" tall her slender build gave her a 25" waist and 34" hips but her breasts since motherhood were now a nice firm 34C with nipples that when aroused became rock hard and extremely sensitive to the touch. But it was her legs that garnered the most attention. Toned by exercise her shapely calves gave way to sculpted and curvaceous thighs and her propensity to wear short skirts and high heels at all times only added to their allure. And all this was topped off by a delightfully pert curvy ass.