This is in tribute to Vandemonium1, "Gone in Mere Minutes- 3", the third part of some truly good stories. I loved this story. It was simple, and the main character (I like to think of him as the hero) was an average guy: not a former Seal, secret agent, or a martial arts expert. A good guy who got screwed by life and was looking at the deep dark chasm of his life ending with no hope or help. He has an epiphany and takes matters into his own hands, using only his brains, and a cell phone.
It's great. Read it for context. He gives you an open ended lease to 'flesh it out' and make an ending. I tried. Only the readers can tell if I did him justice or not.
To Vandy, thank you, sir, for the opportunity. NOW, enjoy.
I came home with my two kids, son Mike, age 10, and daughter Rachel, age 8. The house was silent, deserted. I called out, "Honey, we're home."
Quiet.
I was a little worried what I'd find, and wasn't sure if I should bring the kids home. But I wanted to cover my back as far as my involvement, in case it came back to me.
But there was nothing.
Backpacks landed on the kitchen table and the kids went looking for drinks. On school days, the first order of business was homework, then supper. Then maybe some t.v. But on Fridays, it was their decision. They could goof off and do homework tomorrow, or hit the books right away, if they had something planned for the weekend.
They got juice boxes and Rachel made a b-line for the television. But Mike had Little League tomorrow and he knew the rules, so he plopped down at the table and started. Math, History, and English.
The kid was sharp, but he hated English. So after knocking out the other two, he called me and asked if I could help with diagramming sentences. (My High school English teacher would laugh her head off if she saw me.)
All the while I was on the phone, calling her parents, her best friend Jo-Anne, my folks, then the police. Nothing. No one had seen or heard from her. Our neighbors either, except an older lady across the street who said she saw a big black car leaving a few hours ago. The cops were no help and told me I had to wait a minimum of twenty-four hours to file a missing person's report.
Mike and I finished his English homework (I'm glad he wants to be an engineer like me.) I told him to go into the television room with his sister.
We sat and I asked if their mother said anything about going anywhere. They didn't know anything, but Mike wouldn't hold my eyes. I told my daughter to go get ready for bed. She got up and left and Mike started to fidget.
"O.K., Champ, let's have it," I said, in my best Leroy Jethro Gibbs manner. He looked at me.
"I'm sorry, dad, but I think Mom was messing around on you."
"What do ya mean, son?"
He sighed and he teared up a little. I reached out and took him to me, hugging him to comfort him.
He sniffled, and said, "I came home one Wednesday from practice a little early, we got rained out, and there was a guy here. He was buttoning his suit coat and getting ready to leave. I came in through the side door, after leaving my bike under the overhang, and mom was in her robe, the short one. She kissed him and told him to hurry because I might be home soon. She didn't see me, and I watched as she hugged him close and kissed him again.
"He told her he would see her again on Friday. ....."
"I should have told you dad, but I was so scared. I didn't want you two to break up." By now he was crying. I hugged him and told him it wasn't his fault.
Then I asked him, "Does your sister know about any of this, or does she suspect anything?"
He looked at me and said, "No, she doesn't know any of this. She was at Girl Scouts that afternoon. I never told her." He thought for a minute, and then said, "I don't think she thinks anything about Mom or her behavior." He was blinking back the tears and trying to look brave.
"O.K., son, here's what we're going to do. I need you to keep this to yourself. Nobody but you and I can know, not Grandpa or Grandma, or Pop-pop or Mamaw. Understand? We need to see what your mother is going to do. I need your help to protect your sister. Copy, bud?"
"I copy, pop." He liked it when we got military.
We got through the weekend.
Sunday, after church, the grandparents showed up. I got the third degree, but they appeared satisfied that I was as in the dark as they were. They said they didn't realize that we were having problems.
'Neither did I', I thought.
About an hour after our parents left, her best friend, Jo-Anne rang the bell. I opened the door and she blew in.
"WHERE IS SHE?" she bellowed. "WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO HER?"
"Hello, Jo, how are you?" I said. Bad feeling here.
She fixed me with a withering stare and calmed a little bit.
"What's going on, Mike?"
"You got me by the shorts", I said. "I came home Friday and my wife, and my life were gone. I haven't seen or heard from her since, nor has anyone else. The cops can't help me till it's been twenty-four hours at least, so I will be swearing out a missing persons report Monday. Then I will be consulting an attorney."
She staggered.
"The cops? AN ATTORNEY?? Why is that? Don't you think you should give her some time??"
"TIME FOR WHAT, JO-ANNE? WHAT DO YOU KNOW?? SPILL IT!!"
She hesitated and stuttered, "I .... uh .....I don't know what you mean. Just don't do anything stupid, or rash."
And as fast as she came in, she was gone, even though I attempted to restrain her. The kids boiled into the living room and Rachel said she thought she heard Aunt Jo-Anne.
"You did, but she had to go. Real quick. I don't know why," and I winked at Mike. He nodded back at me.
The rest of Sunday passed and we watched Sunday Night Football. Giants and the Jets, at the Meadowlands. (I'm sorry, old habits die hard.) The Giants creamed the Jets, 23-22. Hey, if you're a Giants fan, that's a massacre.
The kids and I had ordered pizza, and we celebrated. But without their mother here, they were subdued. Me, not so much. The anger was building and festering. They cleaned up, and changed and got to bed. I read my daughter a story, and kissed her good night. I went in to my son's room and sat on his bed.
"How you holding up, dad?"
WOW, my son the psychiatrist.
"I'll make it, bud."
"I know. WE will, dad. We all will"
I hugged him again and tickled him.
"Alright, enough mushy stuff. Go to sleep. "
"Good night, pop."
"Good night, son." I turned off the light and closed the door to a crack. After all, he was still only ten years old.
The next morning, I rousted everyone from bed and started them to get ready for school. They both attended St. Edward's Catholic School. We had breakfast and then I took them to school. (A job their mother usually did.) I had called in and taken two days off to take care of some 'personal business.'
I rolled up to the police station, and talked to a cute little African-American detective sergeant, Jane Woodall and gave her everything I had. She filled in the paperwork and gave me a file number. I thanked her, and asked if my attorney could call for a copy. She raised her eyebrows and asked if there was a problem with our marriage she should know about.
"Not that I know about, but obviously my wife has different ideas. Her cell phone is off, and no one knows where she is." I hesitated, and then I dropped the tactical nuke.
"But come to think of it, her best friend, Jo-Anne Wilson came over and she thought I had done something to Rachel. She became very nervous when I asked her if she knew anything, and she lied and bolted out. You might want to talk to her."
"Thank you. We will also want to come and do a walk through to see if here is anything you missed."