Authors Note:
"Gold Digger Wants It All" was published on June 2, 2021 and I appreciated the constructive criticisms of this story. The main theme of this criticism was that I needed a more fulfilling ending to the story. As one commentor said "You wrote what
might
happen to the main characters instead of what
did
happen to them." I did this on purpose so an engaged reader could continue the story in their own mind, coming to their own conclusion rather than mine.
I took this recommendation to heart and have added a more complete ending to
finish
the story. I hope this will bring you as much entertainment to read as it was for me to write.
This is Chapter 2 of the LW story "Gold Digger Wants It All". All characters mentioned are above the age of 18. All characters are fictitious and do not intentionally resemble anyone living or dead.
I highly recommend reading Chapter 1 of before reading this edition. You will discover the same characters attempting to find $10 million and one character playing hide and go seek with his money while reeking vengeance on his cheating wife.
TO A NEW READER
: At this point, please do not read any further or you will spoil the ending of Chapter 1 for yourself.
Chapter 1 of Gold Digger ended with one of the main characters, Bob Rogler ceasing to exist on the rolls of humanity.
Chapter 2
On April 1
st
my Marine buddies and I were watching on my computer as that slut wife Susan was shown the picture of my severed head on a table. They howled as their two Marine friends played the perfect role as they told her of my death with my lifeless head now being in a pile of other bloodied victims in the insurgent's compound.
When the laughter died down, they wanted to know what I could do for an encore for entertainment for the troops. I told them "This was the part of my plan to keep my wife from robbing me blind in divorce court. From now on it is revenge for my personal enjoyment. I will not be weeping for nights on end about the loss of my sluty wife."
They seemed to enjoy that remark and made me promise to record every episode so all of them could enjoy the action.
I was watching my hidden camera reveal that Susan was having a very difficult time dealing with the horrifying death of her cuckolded husband Bob. Her sleazy boyfriend kept hollering about the $10 million that I did not get sent to them in time to save the Cyless Koehn real estate empire.
After about on an hour of sobbing, cursing and screaming the two of them looked at each other and said "What the fuck are we going to do now? We have to get on top of this before it all comes apart."
Davis said "I suppose we should go tell Cyless that Bob is definitely dead."
Susan looked like she had swallowed a mouthful of vinegar. She nodded and said "Might as well bring the bad news as fast as possible." I saw the two of them walk solemnly out the front door to Davis's car.
I was glad I paid Mr. Pappas for three additional months of Koehn surveillance. It would be worth the price as I watched the three of them suffer then burn.
Mr. Pappas's camera displayed a snarling Cyless Koehn as Susan and Davis walked into his office. I could almost feel the heat from his forehead on my computer screen.
"What manner of bad news do you have for me today?" snapped the troll Koehn.
While looking at her shoes Susan said "Two Marines came to my house this morning and showed me a picture of Bob. His severed head was held up by a fucking terrorist." With this she statement lost it and started sobbing again.
After a moment she said "Sorry, we have been hunting for him for weeks now. No one knows who he is or will not even acknowledge that he ever existed. The bank statement he showed me earlier this Spring with $3 million in it, is gone, vanished. I called the bank in Switzerland and they just laughed at me for wanting information without the account number, let alone password."
"I took the day off from work today because I am having a hard time coming to grips with the confirmation of Bob's hideous death and the disappearance of the $10 million. This was not the way this deal was supposed to go down"
Slowly, Koehn said "I have just enough cash to make half of the loan payments. I'll beg for forbearance from the lenders for a two month extension. Maybe we can sell a property or two and use the proceeds to make the other payments."
"I have to remind you, all my multimillion dollar real estate loans have a nasty clause in the loan agreement stating that if I default on their loan or any other loan then all other lenders can claim that their loan is also in default. Then the interest rate increases by 3%, making it even harder to make all the loan payments. We are on the brink of disaster."
Susan pleaded "Cyless, can you please make the payments to my bank first so I don't find myself in hot water by the end of the month? I'll make it worth your while if you do that for me."