This is an entry into Literotica's
Valentine's Day Story Contest 2024
writing contest.
February is upon us, and we have a 29th this year. What does that remind us of? That's right, the belated Valentine's Day party saga of the Carlisles. Did you also forget their last name? For the ones tempted to roll their eyes and say, "Oh no, not another Febsux story!" good news: you're forewarned, and Literotica has several thousand other stories to read. Go, enjoy!
Once more, a tip of the hat to GeorgeAnderson for his February Sucks story (https://www.literotica.com/s/February-sucks) and blanket permission to add on to it. As most people know, this is arguably the most "added to" story on the entire site, probably because of the provocative trigger - the blatant disrespect by the wife. Oh, and the reconciliation ending, too.
Some commenters on several of these add-ons scoff that no wife would do that, which made me go back to the original, and the author's explanation of what triggered it. You can find my summary in a previous story (https://literotica.com/s/february-sucks-lindas-welcome). No sense repeating it, but read it if you think no woman would ever do that. GA documented some will. Why? Those hubris-filled ladies didn't say. But... expect to have any comment questioning that a woman would do that to bite the dust.
So, here's another way the provocative story could have played out. It inevitably will contain ideas from the myriad other endings, so no claim of originality. A tip of the hat to those authors, too. But hopefully the way they are combined here makes for something original, and enjoyable. And finally, a reminder: this is fiction, where anything can and does happen.
This story starts after Jim leaves the hotel.
Adrenaline, sparked by anger, kicked in. Valentine's Day? What Valentine's Day? On my way to the car I called my brother. "Dude, 911 emergency. Call mom and dad. Tell them to track down Marc LaValliere's address and rush there. The asshole kidnapped Linda and he's about to rape her. Have them call her parents. No questions. I've just called the police, and I have to call others."
I hung up and called Channel 6 News. "Marc LaValliere has gotten drunk at Morrison's, kidnapped a married woman and is raping her as we speak. Channel 8 is already on their way. Get your chopper up there if you can." I repeated that to the two other local TV channels, and the
Times-Observer.
OK, I embellished a little. They do that all the time, so they shouldn't mind.
When I reached Mrs. Porter, I carried the two kids to my car and called my dad. "Did you find the address?"
"Yes, and we're on our way. 2798 Maple. I also alerted Debbie Jameson." Debbie was their neighbor across the street, and an Assistant DA. Feisty little thing.
"Good. I just picked up the kids and I'm headed over there. You guys can take them home until the dust on this shitshow ends. Have Debbie get search warrants for the asshole's home and for Morrison's bar. They will find date rape drugs in both locations, and possibly other drugs as well. Apparently, this isn't the first time he's pulled this stunt, and every time it's been at Morrison's."
My phone rang, with a number I didn't recognize. "Jim speaking."
"This is Sheriff McCaulay. Did you say Marc LaValliere was raping your wife?"
"Yes, sir. He slipped her date rape drugs at Morrison's bar, forced her into his car and took off. I tried to stop him, but two of his team members, Barry McClure and Tim Jackson, stopped me, threatening physical violence. I asked Debbie Jameson, an Assistant DA, to get you search warrants for drugs at both his house and the bar. But my biggest concern is rescuing my wife before he physically assaults her."
Later I learned that the first police cruiser arrived at Asshole's castle in less than ten minutes. It was surrounded by a ten foot wall and protected by massive steel gates. Celebrities adore their privacy. They hit the buzzer at the entrance without letting up. After five long minutes a male voice answered. "Fuck off, don't you know what time it is?"
"Police! Open up immediately."
"Unless you have a warrant, go back to your favorite donut shop, and call my lawyer."
By then, one of the cops had scaled the wall with a rope. Holding up a megaphone, he shouted, "Open up! Police! Open up immediately!"