Resubmitted first flash story. Cleaned up some of the possible offensive bits, straightened out the language, and hopefully this will fly without issue and be a better tale.
More flash stories will follow in the days to come.
This is a story, no one actually was hurt in it's telling. Also, for those that thought otherwise, this is not snuff porn. Everyone has different likes and dislikes - if you don't like the subject matter, just don't read it. Take what you will from them and leave your votes comments behind.
-V
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Linda leaned forward and allowed a little spit to dribble out of her mouth. It clung like a fat wavering drop on her bottom lip before falling where it landed on Keith's throbbing shaft with an almost silent 'splat'. She shifted her grip along the base of his cock and then slid it up towards the pink and red mushroom shaped crown. Her earlier salivatic efforts along with her new foamy deposit sluiced under the crevices between her palm and Keith's prick, further coating his manhood along its entire length.
"Fuck," he moaned, leaning his head back slightly and arching his pelvis forward. "That's great, Linda."
She smiled at the compliment, pumping her slowly pistoning hand with languid ease. Her lips pursed together as she placed it against the tip of his penis and gave the head a pillowy kiss. Her tongue peeked between her teeth and danced along the crinkled hole of his piss-slit, making his leg shake and dragging another groan from his soul.
God damn
, Linda thought as she let his cock slide ever so slowly between her lips
, I've gotten fucking good at this.
Keith's shaft continued to work its way into the steamy interior of her mouth, her tongue acting like a welcome mat for his stiffened muscle. She could feel the vibrant head deep inside of her, resting at long last against the entrance of her throat. With an ease borne from weeks of daily practice with this particular organ, she relaxed her neck and allowed Keith's cock to drive further past the base of her tongue. She leaned forward, the angle of her throat lessening in relation to her quivering mouth...and swallowed.
"Holy crap," Keith swore as the last inch of his prick disappeared between Linda's lips while the head of it was caressed by the rippling muscles of her epiglottis. His eyes were wide as he caught the corners of her lips turn up in pleasure. "I'm a lucky fucking man, Linda."
She purred in pleasure, the low hum and vibrations along the back of her tongue caused Keith to gasp anew as she pulled her head back and allowed his cock to ease back across her lips. The cool air of the A/C drew fresh shivers from Keith's shaking form as she let the moist skin of his prick slide free. When she felt the ridge of his glans against the edge of her teeth and lips, Linda reversed her movement and rocked forward, taking his dick back inside with a satisfied grunt.
Darting her gaze past Keith's midsection to the clock on the dresser, Linda increased the tempo of her bobbing head. Her left hand slithered up his thigh until she could wrap her fingers around his cock-stem and control the frenetic movement of his straining organ.
4:16,
she mused, her lips distending around Keith's penis as she worked it vigorously in and out of her mouth
, have to finish this up and get ready for dinner.
She could feel the minute uncontrollable contractions of her partner's prick as she sped up her sucking; the sweet taste of his pre-cum tantalizing her taste buds as she professed her oral adoration at the shrine of his manhood.
Damn it, Linda,
she thought with a grin,
'The shrine of his manhood'? Where do you think up this shit?
Her stomach was rumbling with combined hunger as well as the expectation she was going to get when he finally came.
I've gotten quite the taste for his cum.
"Careful, Linda," Keith said with a hiss. "I'm getting close and you're pulling hairs out, baby." She crossed her eyes and noted that a few of his pubic hairs had gotten caught in the between the diamonds of her ring. Not stopping her slurping or sucking, she switched hands and then redoubled her efforts; no longer looking to let this encounter stretch any further. With practiced ease she rubbed her left hand along the carpet away from her, wiping it clean of the frothy mixture as well as dislodging anything that might have gotten caught there.
She could feel the underside of his cock pulse against her tongue as he came closer to ejaculation. A look up showed the deep concentration on his face as he was trying to either hold his flow back or crest over the rise and let it burst free. It didn't matter either way to her as she was determined to suck everything she could from his prick and there was nothing he could do to stop it. He gasped and groaned, eyes squeezed closed as his hips thrust back and forth in time with her lips and grasp.
The cold unyielding metallic pressure against the back of her skull caused her to stop, Keith's cock half out of her mouth; her tongue that had been lapping along the left side of his prick inspired to stillness.
What the hell?
She thought, making an effort to move her head off the end of his penis but whatever was behind her shoved forward against the tender softness above her spine, causing her to fall hard upon Keith's crotch.
"Mmm, yeah," Keith moaned above her, eyes closed and unaware that her inadvertent deep throating just now was not planned. Linda placed one hand firmly on her lover's thigh in order to push herself off, when the pressure against her skull grew insistent and a cold voice close to her ear whispered, "Don't you fucking move, bitch."
Keith's eyes snapped open, staring past Linda's kneeling form to the figure behind her. "Oh...god."
The cold unseen metal on her skin was warming slightly from the contact, but she felt chills run down her spine and settle deep in her churning guts. "Wrong, Keith," the voice uttered with precise tonality. "I'm not God." The pressure she felt grew suddenly stronger as her assailant pressed her slowly retreating mouth once more deep upon Keith's wilting cock. "But I do have the power of life and death."
With chilling realization, Linda guessed at the third figure's identity.
Albert.
Fuck.