February Sucks - Karma Becomes a Demon
well people, i had to do it. like so many others i was enthralled by George Anderson's tale and after reading nearly every sequel, the idea of my sequel came to mind.
i hope you enjoy it!
i had fun writing it. Comments are welcome, even the stupid, anonymous ones which are just designed to be personally insulting. i get a laugh out of them as well.
Read on McDuff......
Jim Ferguson was seething with rage. How dare that entitled bastard just take Linda, his wife, out to the dance floor and claim her as his own! He had obviously done this before. It was all too slick. Did Linda know about this beforehand? He knew that no matter what happened, his marriage to Linda WAS IN DEEP TROUBLE.
Having enough of the indecent spectacle of Marc with his hands all over Linda and Linda's obvious enthralment with the whole situation, he decided to do something about it. He put his drink down and started to make his way to the back of the dance floor where the two had tried to hide. He had not gone three steps when Dee intervened. She actually pleaded with him to let Linda 'have this one night' as if it was her right to be able to step out of their marriage just to experience what it would be like with a famous football star.
"Jim, let her have this. She has given you many years of loyalty and two wonderful children. Give her some space to experience something different. Something she has dreamed about, fantasied about. You know she loves you and will come back to you tomorrow. Give her this, please!"
He looked at her as if she was a leper and roughly shoved her hands off him. Dave, Dee's husband saw the interchange and quickly came over.
"Jim, that's my wife buddy. Don't manhandle her, or you'll have me to answer to!"
"Dave, I would advise you to let it be. You should be having this discussion with your wife. If you're on board with what she is proposing, she won't be your wife much longer, if I know you. Now get out of the way, or I won't be responsible for what might happen."
Jim left the two ex-friends and continued towards his wife, now pressed tightly against Marc's body and her head resting just under his shoulders. The look on her face was one he had seen many times before. It was her look of ecstasy. That's when he noticed one of Marc's arms was in between their bodies and it was obvious that his hand was on her breast, even though they tried to hide it.
Jim went straight to the band leader who had a huge smirk on his face. Were Marc and he in cahoots? It was strange how the music went to all slow numbers when Marc had his woman. He pleaded with the band leader to stop the music, but he was simply ignored. The band leader looked at Jim as if he were a piece of dog dropping on his shoe. Throughout all of this, Marc and Linda were oblivious to what was going on. They only had eyes and time for each other. Did Linda's face just get that tell-tale flush? Did she just have an orgasm? Right there on the dance floor!
Jim made a beeline again for the two. As he approached, two large men grabbed him from behind and frog marched him to the bar. They pressed him hard against the bar and said quite clearly,
"Listen buddy. You have a choice to make here. Either you let our friend Marc have his way with that woman, or you and us will continue this conversation outside. Your choice!"
Jim realised that he could not win this battle. He knew that there were some situations that you had to walk away from, at least seem to walk away from. The anger that was building inside him had not fully surfaced yet, so he was able to assume the role of a whimp. He cowered down and replied, "Sure guys. I get it. Let me go and get a drink or two from this wonderful lady here."
The two goons looked at each other and smiled. They let him go.
"Hey cuck, if you are in the mood to buy drinks, get us some too."
They laughed and went back to their table to sit down and enjoy the Linda and asshole show.
When they walked away, Jim was stunned. This was obviously a set up. His so-called friends had set Linda up with that prick Marc. She knew what was going to happen and assumed that their 'friends' would pacify me enough to let it happen.
"Bullshit!"
Jim was never a man who relished physical conflict. He rather let his good nature and common sense enable him to avoid the macho crap. But this was different. He knew however, that any confrontation with these two football goons would only end with him in serious pain. He needed to do something else.
As he was already at the bar, he asked the young attendant, who was looking at him rather sheepishly at this point, for three triple shots of the strongest alcohol in the bar. She thought for a moment and said, "Polmos Spirytus Rektyfikowany!"
"What the hell is that?" Jim asked.
"It's a Polish vodka. 192 proof. That's 92% alcohol."
"Perfect!" Jim said grimly. "I will visit my two friends first. Leave one here please and I will be back shortly."
When Jim tried to pay for them, she told him they were on the house, as he was tonight's victim of that asshole LeValiere.
This time Jim made it obvious that he was making for the two goons that apprehended him before. They stood as soon as he got near their table. Jim raised one of the drinks in salute to the two bullies. "Here's to the mighty Reds!" They smiled as Jim drank a small amount. He then took the two drinks and walked towards the two players. They smiled. They actually thought that he had capitulated and was now offering them a drink, like all good cucks should do. They again approached him, arms outstretched and huge smirks on their faces.
However, when Jim was just the right distance away, he threw the contents of each glass straight into the eyes of the idiots. He didn't wait to see the result. He immediately turned around, went back to the bar, grabbed his third drink and made his way to Linda and Marc. If he had stayed and watched the two players, he would have seen a picture of absolute chaos. They fell to their seats frantically rubbing their eyes. High proof alcohol was not designed to be applied straight to anyone's eyes. In fact early eye surgeons used a similar concoction to physically dissolve the outer layer of the eye. These two would need to go to a medical facility, and very soon, to flush the offending liquid from their eyes. Even with prompt treatment, it would be weeks before the outer layer of their eyes would recover. Oh well, Karma's a bitch, but she is a downright demon from hell when she gets some help!
Marc and Linda were still ensconced in a quiet area of the floor. Linda seemed in a trance. Jim knew that look. It was post-orgasmic bliss. His anger now knew no bounds. He boldly approached the pair and tapped big Marc on his shoulder.
"I think I'll take over from here."
Marc looked as if he was confused for a second. He quickly turned towards his table, obviously looking for his intervention buddies. Not seeing them, he turned back to Jim and tried to push him away.
Big mistake for him! He got the same treatment as his two goons. The look on his face was priceless. Jim knew he could move quickly on the football field, but this was magic in motion. He staggered back, pushing Linda away so roughly, that she fell to the floor.
"What the FUCK!" he screamed. He then raced about, crashing into tables as he careened from one area to another all the while frantically scratching his eyes and trying to dislodge the offending substance. He ended up running, almost at full speed, into the band podium. The stage was exactly the height of his knees. Jim thought everyone in the venue heard the horrific crack as his knees buckled under him. He lay on the floor, attempting to get up. However, every move he made to get up only moved his smashed knees further and he screamed, yelled and cried in pain.
"Someone dial emergency quickly! Someone PLEASE!"
Strangely no one moved. They all had seen his antics before.
It was Dee who finally did the deed.
While all this was going on, Jim had moved to where Linda was still lying in a daze on the dance floor, her pretty blue dress dishevelled and not very modest in that position. Some patrons could be seen taking pictures with their cameras. Jim only noticed then that she wasn't wearing any panties,and, to add insult to injury, one of her breasts was exposed due to Marc's frantic fondling.
Jim had seen and felt enough. He shouted in the loudest voice he could muster given the closeness he was to tears.
"Everyone! Attention please!"
They all quietened down. "This should be good," many people thought.
"I would like to introduce you to this slut, Linda. I know many of you who come here often would only have recognised her as Marc Dickhead's conquest for this Friday night. Well she was more than that. Up until fifteen minutes ago, she was my wife. She was the woman of my life. The only woman in my life. The woman I shared the joy of raising two wonderful children with. The woman, the woman I trusted with my heart!" He paused here. The emotional turmoil was taking its toll.