Karen's Revenge
After reading a story by StangStaro6:
A Ticket to Ride - Loving Wives - Literotica.com
which I encourage you to read before going any further, I thought Karen needed a little revenge for the way that she had been disrespected.
I reached out to StangStaro6 and asked for permission to rewrite the ending, but never heard back. I'm not sure if he is still active as his last story was in 2017.
Now, if you like a good BTB story read A Ticket to Ride, and don't bother reading my ending, you won't be happy.
I liked the StangStaro6's story, but Karen's ex-husband took BTB a little too far.
My story takes over while Debbie, Karen's daughter, is driving her home from Karen's ex-husband Danny's lake house.
I also shared a little background.
Enjoy
Here's a little recap.
Karen cheated on her husband Danny. She loved him but was feeling old and wanted to know that men found her attractive. Bradley Martin gave Karen the attention she wanted, and she rewarded him with sex. Just sex no love.
How did Karen get caught, you ask? It was a traffic ticket. A speed camera took a picture of Karen's head in Bradley's lap. While he was driving her Danny's Mustang, Karen was sucking his dick. Danny received the ticket, saw the picture and that was it for their marriage.
At first Debbie, my daughter, was forthcoming with information.
"Mom, he's depressed."
Karen cried when she told me that he never left the house except to go to work.
After a while, Debbie stopped telling her mother about her father.
"You guys are no longer married,"
she told me
. "He doesn't ask me about you, so I shouldn't violate his privacy by telling you about him. Mom, you gave up your chance to be in his life when you did what you did."
Karen would ask how Danny was doing. She hoped Danny would give her another chance. Wishful thinking on her part.
Karen received encouraging news from my daughter one day.
"Mom, I wish ALL of us could get together sometimes. I'm so tired of my kids having to visit only certain grandparents at a time. It would make choosing whom to visit and when so much simpler, if we could all act like adults."
Karen started to realize that Debbie and her family were spending more time with Danny than her. Karen hardly saw Debbie, her husband, or her grandchildren. But it sounded like Danny does.
Karen finally got what she'd been hoping for during the entire three years that we'd been apart.
"Mom, do you want to spend a weekend at Dad's lake house?"
Karen always loved that place. "Do you think he'd mind if we went up there?" Karen asked my daughter.
"Uh, Mom, he's going to be there, and he knows we asked you to come with us,"
Karen dropped to her knees and started crying.
"He did want to see me."
"Mom, calm down, Selena and I thought it was time for us to put the whole family back together,"
she'd said.
'
Who the fuck is Selena?' I Karen felt like saying put but only
"Selena who?"
came out of my mouth.
"Dad's Selena,"
Karen's daughter said.
"You'll like her."
'Like fuck I will' Karen thought to herself.
Karen's Revenge.
As Debbie and I drove home from the debacle of a visit with Danny's "new family" I couldn't believe the way she was speaking to me.
"This was all my fault Mom; you have no right to be upset. You cheated on Dad remember."
"So, you think it's okay to take me to his place, and "BAM!" just spring on me that Danny's married and has two adopted children, and my grandchildren call her "Grandma,"
"Well Mom, what did you expect them to call her."
"Well not grandma, I'm grandma. And you think it's okay for them to call me "Old Grandma" For God's sake?"
They looked so comfortable, my daughter, her husband, and my grandchildren around Danny's new family, which I had known nothing about, and they thought I should just be fine with it.
And the LAKE HOUSE! It was just a lake house when we bought it. We used it once or twice a year and it had minimal furniture at best. I loved that little lake house. But now it's been renovated and it's huge and beautiful. Danny never thought to do anything like this when we were married.
I've wasted three years of my life thinking I had a chance at getting back together with my Ex-husband. And my daughter? She blindsided me when she took me out to see Danny. SURPRISE!!! That is just disrespectful. I did not do anything to be treated like this. My daughter and my grandchildren have been spending holidays with Danny's new family over me.
And why didn't my daughter tell me that Danny was married so that I too could move on with my life?
Not that I had much of a life. Due to the divorce, and the minimal alimony I received from Danny, I hardly made enough money to pay my rent. You would think my daughter would have been there for me when I needed her.
No, and the only reason she took me to Danny's lake house was because she was tired of the inconvenience. "
It would make choosing whom to visit and when so much simpler, if we could all act like adults."
Fuck her, her husband, Danny, and his wife Selena.
We sat quietly for most of the ride home. Debbie talked but I didn't give a shit about what she had to say. None of it was nice anyway, it was all my fault.
She tried to say goodbye, but I just slammed the car door and walked away.
I slept better that night than I expected. Yes, I cried myself to sleep but it will be the last time I cry over my failed marriage. No more feeling sorry for myself. I made myself a nice breakfast, and a cup of coffee. Once I had finished my breakfast I showered, dressed, and went out and joined a gym. It was time to firm up my tits and ass and get myself back on the market.
I worked out with a trainer who went over all the equipment with me. I told him what I wanted to accomplish, and we put together a workout plan for me. The rest of Sunday I walked around my apartment throwing junk food in the garbage.
But not my Peanut M&Ms. A girl needs her chocolate. Next, I went out shopping for healthy food, yogurt, salad, fish, and other healthy shit.
Once I was done putting everything away, I made myself something to eat. I cursed myself got throwing out all the unhealthy food but knew in the end it would be worth it.
I then sat down with a bunch of files that I had saved. Good thing I never throw anything out.
Did my daughter call me to see how I was doing? No, but I wasn't expecting her to, and I wouldn't have picked up the phone anyway.
Monday morning came quickly. I went straight into Brad's office.
"Brad"
"Hi, Karen, how did things go with Danny?"
"Not good, he's married and had 2 adopted children."
"Married and children, what?" Brad said just as confused as I was.
"Yes, I'm done with Danny, my daughter, and her husband. Fuck them all. And Brad, I want to screw over Danny and sue John."
"Karen, relax. What's going on?"
"Brad, sex with you was a mistake, no offense. But I never thought I would lose Danny. I never thought I'd get caught. If I had got caught, I thought Danny's love for me would be enough for him to forgive me.
I was so in love with Danny and wanted him to take me back. Brad, I just agreed to everything in the divorce settlement. I never listened to my attorney or answered half his questions!"
"Karen, please calm down and tell me what you mean. Once the settlement agreements are signed it's a done deal."
"Brad, "Danny, and I bought a little lake house when we were married. We only went there once or twice a year. When Danny left me, that's where he was staying while I was at our house pending its sale.
We sold the house once the divorce was final, and it was split 50/50. But Danny was living at the lake house. It was never listed as a property to be sold. Again, I never brought it up because I just wanted Danny back. Well, now that little lake house is beautiful and worth a fortune."
"Karen, you're sure it wasn't on the list of assets, and you didn't sign it over to Danny?"
"Nope. Here are all the documents. Danny wanted me to suffer, I'm sure of it. And it wasn't just Danny. I got screwed at work, in more ways than one. Once the divorce was final, I was sent to the steno pool. That was my punishment, but John that prick he fuck me over."
"Karen, we both know John was a prick and all he thought about was himself and his firm. Slow down and tell me what you're talking about."
"My alimony Brad. My alimony was pennies since John, that prick, demoted me to the steno pool after the court had determined my alimony based on my higher salary as a legal assistant.
I could barely afford rent. Thank God, you got me a job here and hired me away from John."
"I always wondered why Danny never sued John. He violated our non-fraternization clause, and everyone knew about us." Now Brad was getting it.
"Or at least John failed to enforce it?" Brad said, "I guess John may have persuaded Danny that he would take care of us instead. I got my ass kicked by Danny and John fired me. You got demoted, your pay was cut, your retirement income cut, and alimony to pennies."
Brad buzzed for his up-and-coming hot-shot perverted lawyer to join us in Brad's office.
"Scott (he didn't have a name in the StangStaro6 version so now it's Scott) I need you to work with Karen......" I cut him off.
"And stop looking down my shirt, you little pervert."
"As I was saying," Brad continued, "I need you to listen to Karen's story and come back to me with your ideas of how we can......" I cut Brad off,
"Screw my ex-husband and sue that prick, John."
That little pervert Scott ended up being a surprisingly good lawyer. We spent time together and he encouraged me to stick with the gym. Of course, he did, the little pervert loved my tits and ass. I guess this MILF still has it.