Hello, readers!
I've taken on board your comments about various things and tried to address them in some way. I've also tried to begin to provide a sense of closure on the Alice/Cara sexual experience, which I accept was somewhat unpleasant in nature.
This chapter is completely different to the first, I think you all knew that the story in general wasn't going to focus on Alice and Cara – the name sort of gives it away. Now that I've moved into beginning to develop the actual story between Cara and Ryan, I ask that you please give this a chance after the brutal scene between Cara and Alice.
Additionally, please could we try and make any comments constructive rather than abusive and about the actual story and not about an almost irrelevant factor?
Thanks, B
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Cara sighed and cleared the table before moping back to the kitchen. Dan was inside, his tables had all already left and he had made himself a drink whilst he was waiting for the last two tables, which belonged to Alice that evening, to leave. 'Aren't you driving?' Cara frowned at the drink in his hand.
'I am... What's gotten into you?' Their boss, Marco, allowed them one alcoholic drink on their shift after their tables had left. A kind of reward for a night of dealing with all manner of customer demands.
'I got groped, leered at and whatever else for a $22 tip on a $178 bill. That's what? A 12% tip?' She rolled her eyes and continued piling dishes into the dishwasher. 'Oh, but he did leave his number...
Yay
.'
Dan laughed lightly, 'It's shit, Cars, but that's how it goes sometimes. At least you got a tip: one of my tables paid with exact money, can you believe it? Did the rest of your tables tip well?'
Cara smiled; he always made her feel better somehow. 'Much better than Mr-Inflated-Ego and his merry band of assholes. Oh well, you win some, you lose some.'
Alice's tables paid and left and the three began the process of close down. It was gone midnight before the trio left the restaurant, each saying their goodbyes until the following evening. Cara and Alice walked the few steps to Alice's car and drove back to their apartment, where both soon departed for their rooms and slept until late morning – it was a Sunday after all.
***
The rest of the week was largely uneventful. Cara only worked Fridays through Monday due to her hectic class schedule but soon it was Friday and she was headed to work once more. It was a lovely afternoon, warm with a light breeze, and Cara decided upon walking into work – Alice was already there having worked the lunchtime shift too.
'You didn't call...'
He
was there. Leaning against the wall, fixated upon a cigarette between his fingers; he wasn't even looking at her.
'Oh, that's what that was for? I thought you'd left your number so I could pick up the rest of my tip.' She tried to walk past him.
'Whoa, there. That was a bit cheeky wasn't it?' He was smiling, teasing her. 'What was wrong with the tip?'
'$22 on an $178 bill? That's 12%, which doesn't really cover my rent. I honestly don't mean to be rude, Ryan, but I put up with being groped when I walked past your table and lurid comments from your friends...'
'12.36% if we're splitting hairs, and they're my colleagues, not my friends...' Ryan cut in.
'Colleagues. And after I tolerate what could only be construed as sexual harassment, your table tips me a measly $22. Frankly, it's insulting.'
'It's insulting when you don't call.' He still wasn't looking at her, instead opting for a strained facial expression as he took a drag of his cigarette.
'Maybe if you want a girl to call you, you shouldn't insult her when you tip her.' Cara tried to barge past him and again he stopped her.
'Isn't there another word for a woman who takes money in return for favours?' He was teasing her again.
'Get out of my way, I need to go into work before I am late.'
'You know we paid individually right?' Finally, he looked at her.
'What does that have to do with anything?'
'We all paid for what we ordered – individually. My individual bill came to $32.50, I put down a $50 and told you to keep the change. Now, I'll take the liberty of doing the math and pointing out that is actually almost a 54% tip. I'm a generous guy, and you didn't even call.' He smiled
that
smile as he shrugged and stood upright.
Cara noticed he was tall, very tall. She guessed he had a good eight or nine inches on her, which had to make him 6'3 at the very least. She also took in how incredibly good-looking he was: his hair was styled effortlessly, parted at the side and folded over to make a lazy quiff, its colour matched the emerald green of his eyes perfectly – a smooth chocolate brown with natural lighter and darker streaks running through it. He was exactly her type, apart from the fact that he was incredibly self-indulgent and clearly battling with his ego. 'I'm sure you have plenty of other girls lined up.' He let her walk past him this time.
Just before she disappeared inside the door, Ryan shouted after her, 'Does that mean you think I'm good-looking?' His accent melted her, but she flipped him her middle finger anyway for good measure. Another customer lost, no doubt.
***
'What are you doing here?' Cara was speaking with gritted teeth, angry with him for pursuing her after their earlier conversation.