Please note this is Part B of a 3 part "Chapter One" (Part C is still to come). You should have Read Part A first, otherwise what's happening here has no context. .... There's also a Prologue (Hayley's Party Chapter 00) and I've posted some follow on chapters (02 thru 05) with more coming.
Why's Chapter One now split into three parts? Well, during the rewrite of my original version, it just got too long (it grew from 10k words to around 55k words). It's rather different from the original Chapter One but hopefully you'll enjoy it just as much. And yes, I need to tighten it up and change a few things and do things with the grammar but hey, if you're into the technicalities, consider it a rough first draft that's going to be improved a lot....
Feedback, good, bad or indifferent, online or offline is really appreciated. Would love to know what works for you and what doesn't, and especially any bits that grab you or that totally bug you. The plot has kind-of been evolving in my head since the earlier cut at Chapter One so the "back story" may change a bit as the story progresses, something that's already caused a few inconsistencies β just overlook those if you can.....
If you feel like commenting in more depth, I'd really appreciate that β this is my first full length story (multi-part story really) posted anywhere and as well as writing to entertain, I'm writing to learn how to do it better for you as readers, so fire away .... I'm not an overly sensitive soul β if I was, I wouldn't be posting here would I - and anything that helps me get better at this is truly appreciated, however brief..... Chloe"
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"Tonight's the night....Part B".
"Don't say a word my virgin child
Just let your inhibitions run wild
The secret is about to unfold
Upstairs before the night's too old...
Tonight's the night
It's gonna be alright..."
Tonight's the Night β Rod Stewart
Joe led me by the hand out of the rec room and up the stairs. With every step, we drew closer to the attic bedroom that I'd prepared so carefully earlier in the evening. With every step, my heart thumped. With every step, my mind seethed with anticipation, my body roiled with excitement. With every step, my braless breasts rubbed against the confining knitted cotton of my tank top, my nipples pushing the thin cotton outwards. With every step, my labial lips slid deliciously against each other! Every nerve ending in my body tingled; even the air moving over my skin was a caress.
With every step, I was acutely conscious that I no longer wore any panties.
I'd spent hours selecting those lacey little black panties. I'd worn those panties for the first time tonight. I'd worn those tiny little panties especially to arouse Steve when he eventually laid eyes on them. Panties that I'd intended for Steve to remove from me. Those little black panties now lay somewhere on the rec room floor where Joe had let them fall. So carefully selected, slid into with such passionate anticipation, they'd been removed with perfunctory ease, torn from me unseen and casually discarded. I wondered if Joe would discard me with the same casual ease as he'd discarded my panties after he'd taken me. I thought about that some more and realized it made no difference to me, to what I intended.
Joe's hand dwarfed mine, yet he held my hand delicately, as carefully as if I were made of fragile bone china. His breathing, his body next to mine on the stairs, the knowledge in my mind of where we were going, what he wanted to do to me, all added a piquant edge to my roiling anticipation. With every step, I was guiltily aware that I was betraying Steve but still I wanted to do what I was doing. That slight edge of guilt simply added to the rich mΓ©lange of sensations and emotions I felt as we reached the main floor. I glanced sideways at Joe, wondering if he was feeling the same tangled complexity of thoughts and emotions as I was experiencing. Probably not, he was a guy. He probably just wanted to fuck me. I knew that. I didn't care. Joe was Joe and in this moment, he was what I wanted. He was all I wanted.
We reached the main floor foyer, we looked at each other. I half turned towards him, my mouth opening. I had no idea what I intended to say or even if I intended to say anything.
It really didn't matter.
As I turned, Joe folded me in his arms and kissed me. A gentle kiss, a gentle brush of his lips as his mouth closed on mine, demanding a response. I responded, my mouth his, my tongue his, my body folding against his, shuddering as I felt his hardness pressing firmly against my body, reminding me of why I was here in his arms. Reminding me of what had led me to the top of the stairs with him, reminding me that soon I was going to be entirely his, reminding me again that I wore nothing beneath my short skirt. Joe felt my shudder, felt my body meld softly against his. In that moment of contact, any last hesitation on my part evaporated, if there had ever been any uncertainty, it had vanished. I was here with Joe willingly. I wanted Joe's assurance, I wanted Joe's certainty. I wanted Joe to make love to me.
Our kiss went on and on and on, no longer gentle on his part, now passionate, forceful, possessing my mouth as I knew he wanted to possess me, as I wanted him to possess me. Demanding kisses from him, complete surrender from me. Those kisses had a language and a message all of their own, a simple message, easy to decipher. Joe wanted me and he had the knowledge and the experience to take me. For my part, I knew what I was willing to surrender but I lacked the experience. I knew Joe could show me, he could lead me, he could teach me what I didn't know but which I wanted so much to learn. His hands made no demands of me, we did nothing beyond kiss, yet that kiss permeated my soul, conveying a meaning far beyond words. When his mouth eventually lifted from mine, we both knew what was going to happen.