Please note this is Part B of a 3 part "Chapter One" (Part C is still to come). You should have Read Part A first, otherwise what's happening here has no context. .... There's also a Prologue (Hayley's Party Chapter 00) and I've posted some follow on chapters (02 thru 05) with more coming.
Why's Chapter One now split into three parts? Well, during the rewrite of my original version, it just got too long (it grew from 10k words to around 55k words). It's rather different from the original Chapter One but hopefully you'll enjoy it just as much. And yes, I need to tighten it up and change a few things and do things with the grammar but hey, if you're into the technicalities, consider it a rough first draft that's going to be improved a lot....
Feedback, good, bad or indifferent, online or offline is really appreciated. Would love to know what works for you and what doesn't, and especially any bits that grab you or that totally bug you. The plot has kind-of been evolving in my head since the earlier cut at Chapter One so the "back story" may change a bit as the story progresses, something that's already caused a few inconsistencies β just overlook those if you can.....
If you feel like commenting in more depth, I'd really appreciate that β this is my first full length story (multi-part story really) posted anywhere and as well as writing to entertain, I'm writing to learn how to do it better for you as readers, so fire away .... I'm not an overly sensitive soul β if I was, I wouldn't be posting here would I - and anything that helps me get better at this is truly appreciated, however brief..... Chloe"
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"Tonight's the night....Part B".
"Don't say a word my virgin child
Just let your inhibitions run wild
The secret is about to unfold
Upstairs before the night's too old...
Tonight's the night
It's gonna be alright..."
Tonight's the Night β Rod Stewart
Joe led me by the hand out of the rec room and up the stairs. With every step, we drew closer to the attic bedroom that I'd prepared so carefully earlier in the evening. With every step, my heart thumped. With every step, my mind seethed with anticipation, my body roiled with excitement. With every step, my braless breasts rubbed against the confining knitted cotton of my tank top, my nipples pushing the thin cotton outwards. With every step, my labial lips slid deliciously against each other! Every nerve ending in my body tingled; even the air moving over my skin was a caress.
With every step, I was acutely conscious that I no longer wore any panties.
I'd spent hours selecting those lacey little black panties. I'd worn those panties for the first time tonight. I'd worn those tiny little panties especially to arouse Steve when he eventually laid eyes on them. Panties that I'd intended for Steve to remove from me. Those little black panties now lay somewhere on the rec room floor where Joe had let them fall. So carefully selected, slid into with such passionate anticipation, they'd been removed with perfunctory ease, torn from me unseen and casually discarded. I wondered if Joe would discard me with the same casual ease as he'd discarded my panties after he'd taken me. I thought about that some more and realized it made no difference to me, to what I intended.
Joe's hand dwarfed mine, yet he held my hand delicately, as carefully as if I were made of fragile bone china. His breathing, his body next to mine on the stairs, the knowledge in my mind of where we were going, what he wanted to do to me, all added a piquant edge to my roiling anticipation. With every step, I was guiltily aware that I was betraying Steve but still I wanted to do what I was doing. That slight edge of guilt simply added to the rich mΓ©lange of sensations and emotions I felt as we reached the main floor. I glanced sideways at Joe, wondering if he was feeling the same tangled complexity of thoughts and emotions as I was experiencing. Probably not, he was a guy. He probably just wanted to fuck me. I knew that. I didn't care. Joe was Joe and in this moment, he was what I wanted. He was all I wanted.
We reached the main floor foyer, we looked at each other. I half turned towards him, my mouth opening. I had no idea what I intended to say or even if I intended to say anything.
It really didn't matter.
As I turned, Joe folded me in his arms and kissed me. A gentle kiss, a gentle brush of his lips as his mouth closed on mine, demanding a response. I responded, my mouth his, my tongue his, my body folding against his, shuddering as I felt his hardness pressing firmly against my body, reminding me of why I was here in his arms. Reminding me of what had led me to the top of the stairs with him, reminding me that soon I was going to be entirely his, reminding me again that I wore nothing beneath my short skirt. Joe felt my shudder, felt my body meld softly against his. In that moment of contact, any last hesitation on my part evaporated, if there had ever been any uncertainty, it had vanished. I was here with Joe willingly. I wanted Joe's assurance, I wanted Joe's certainty. I wanted Joe to make love to me.
Our kiss went on and on and on, no longer gentle on his part, now passionate, forceful, possessing my mouth as I knew he wanted to possess me, as I wanted him to possess me. Demanding kisses from him, complete surrender from me. Those kisses had a language and a message all of their own, a simple message, easy to decipher. Joe wanted me and he had the knowledge and the experience to take me. For my part, I knew what I was willing to surrender but I lacked the experience. I knew Joe could show me, he could lead me, he could teach me what I didn't know but which I wanted so much to learn. His hands made no demands of me, we did nothing beyond kiss, yet that kiss permeated my soul, conveying a meaning far beyond words. When his mouth eventually lifted from mine, we both knew what was going to happen.
We were going to go upstairs and then Joe was going to fuck me.
I felt alive beyond mere words, my body a mass of sensation, feeling Joe wherever we touched. My conscious mind was focused on the sheer physical pleasure of being held in his arms, of feeling his body pressed against mine, all combined with an anticipation slightly tinged with fear at what was to come. I looked up at Joe, searching his face, looking into his eyes, wanting to know what he was thinking, what he thought of me, wanting to know if he really wanted me for being me, or if I was just another easy conquest. I wanted to be taken, but at the same time I wanted romance, I wanted love, I wanted to be cherished and cared for.
I couldn't tell what Joe wanted beyond my body but it dawned on me that really, it didn't matter. Regardless of what was going on in his head, regardless of romance and my desire to make love, Joe was going to fuck me and I was going to let him. He lowered his head, interrupting my thoughts by kissing my neck. I loved that. I loved it so much that tingling little shivers ran up and down my spine. His hands slid to my butt, pulled me hard against him, grinding himself against me at the same time. There was no mistaking what Joe wanted from me when he did that to me. None at all! The hard bulge inside his shorts pressing firmly against me, grinding against me, was evidence enough of that.
"Jesus Hayley." His voice was urgent in my ear. "I've been wanting to fuck you from the moment you walked into the basement in that hot little skirt."
"You were?" I might have wanted romance and love. It was obvious from his words that Joe wanted to fuck me. My stomach tightened, a black hole seemed to open up inside me, a black hole of fear and excitement. God, he was still kissing my neck. I wanted to moan and move myself against him but I couldn't. Instead his hands held me and moved me against him as he wanted me moved. Oh god oh god oh god! I could feel his hard cock rubbing against me, making my sex pulse wetly. I wanted to see it, I wanted to touch it so much. I shied away from the thought that I wanted it in me but whether I shied away from that thought or not, the thought was there, forcing itself on me. I knew I did. I did! I wanted it inside me so much!
"Oh yeah, and now I really really REALLY want to fuck you Hayley." He smiled. "You were so wet when I touched you downstairs."
"I was?" My voice was a weird gasp. It didn't sound like me at all.
I still couldn't believe I'd let him do that to me. Not in the middle of the floor, surrounded by everyone dancing. But he had. He had and I'd loved it. My missing panties were evidence of that, if any more evidence than me being here with him was needed. I clung to him, feeling myself melting all over again, so wet, craving his finger inside me, craving his touch there again the way he had when we were dancing.
"I did." His voice was a purr in my ear. A purr that sent ripples through me, a purr that made me want to lie on my back and spread my legs wide and let him do whatever he wanted to me.
"Did you like my finger in your cunt on the dance floor Hayley?" he rolled "cunt" of his tongue, giving it a deliciously obscene flavor that sent shivers up and down my spine, shivers that made my sex pulse and my nipples ache. Steve had never used that word with me. I'd never said that word myself either. The sound of it as Joe said it made me want to.
"Yes." I squirmed against him, squirmed under his hands as he continued to move me against him. I didn't even have to think about that. "Yes I did." My answer was muffled by his shirt. I had, I'd liked it a lot. I'd loved it. I wanted him to do that to me now! I wanted more than his hands moving me against him. I wanted him. I wanted his cock. I wanted his cock in me. I wanted that very badly now and this time I didn't shy away from the thought. I hadn't exactly forgotten about my boyfriend down in the basement, but I just didn't care. It was Joe here with me now. It was Joe that I wanted.