A warning to my readers
This little tale is an experiment; an experiment in trying to write speech in a form of dialect, which I hope will be recognised as our own by fellow Geordies. Please forgive the spelling in the dialect passages. I have had to torture English in an attempt to convey the sounds. I would appreciate any feedback you care to make on my success - or otherwise - in this attempt. I would also appreciate comment on the use of dialect in a written work generally. I have chosen to write the narrative in a conventional form as I felt that trying to use dialect for that too would be overkill. In conclusion I offer my grateful thanks to Wildsweetone for her comments.
The story is set a few years ago. Read on, and enjoy...
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"Where d'ye wanna gan the neet? Pictures, or doon the
Bull
?" Tommy Carr looked expectantly at his girlfriend, Jenny Porter, as they waited for the bus home from work.
"D' ye fancy stoppin' in?" Jenny asked, a curious smile on her pretty face.
Tommy shrugged. "W' could, I suppose. What aboot yer mam?"
"She's gannin' to the
Maj
, to the Bingo, wi' Doris." Jenny grinned. "
And
," she declared triumphantly, "they're gannin' t' the
Dolce
, after the Bingo."
Tommy grinned and shook his head. "Right pair o' loonies. Watch oot, Newcastle, the Wicked Widows is comin'." He looked at Jenny. "Y' mean there'll just be ye and me in th' hoose?"
Jenny nodded and arched her eyebrows suggestively.
Tommy smiled slowly. "What time?"
"Me mam said they're catchin' the seven o'clock bus."
"I'll come roond aboot half-past. I'll bring a couple of bottles of Broon."
"Just the two, mind. I divvent want y' incapable." Realising what she had just implied Jenny flushed, but there was a tingle in her pussy and she knew that she intended to go 'all the way' with Tommy that evening.
"Just the two," Tommy agreed. "Here's the bus comin'."
At seven-thirty, washed, shaved and wearing clean jeans and shirt, Tommy rang the doorbell of the second-floor flat Jenny shared with her mother, Anne, who had been widowed now for four years. Jenny must have been watching for him, because the door was opened immediately and she stood back to let him in.
Tommy flourished his bag. "Two bottles of Broon, hen."
"I'll put them on the kitchen table while y' hang yer coat up."
The living-room was cosy that autumn evening. The curtains were closed against the gathering night and a low wattage lamp glowed warmly on a side table. The gas fire glowed cheerily and Jenny had pulled the couch round so that it faced toward the fire. A selection of record albums was already loaded on the auto-change turntable and Jenny started the first one playing as Tommy hung his coat.
He came into the living-room where she stood before the couch. Despite her plan, she was nervous, but Tommy came straight to her and put his arms around her. Relaxing she moved into his embrace. There was no reserve in her kiss and he grinned delightedly when she broke it, tugging him towards the couch.
They sat down and she turned towards him, her arms going around his neck as he bent towards her for their second kiss. They leaned against the back of the couch as she concentrated on the kiss. Losing herself in it, her tongue moving against his, Jenny smiled to herself as she felt his right hand come up to cup her breast, feeling her nipple hardening against his clumsy caress.
Jenny reached up and took Tommy's hand from her shoulder, moving it so that it was within the loose neck of her dress. No second hint was necessary and his hand moved down inside her dress, inside her bra, his fingertips cupping her naked breast, her nipple warm and hard against his fingers.
Jenny moaned deep in her throat and pulled him tight against her, then gently pushed him back.
"What's the marra, pet?" he asked, surprised. "I thowt y' were enjoyin' it."
"I am." She grinned. "I wanna enjoy it more. Help us wi' me zip." She turned her back to him. Tommy sat for a moment, trembling, then reached out gingerly and unhooked the neck of Jenny's dress, moving the zipper down to her shapely bottom.
Jenny stood and moved away, turning to face him, then let the dress slide down and off her body, stepping neatly out of it and bending to fold it over the back of a nearby chair. She struck a pose and grinned at him.
"D' ye like me new undies?"
Tommy nodded, speechless at the sight of his girlfriend in her underwear. A low-cut pink satin bra with matching panties, pink garter-belt and tan stockings were all she now wore, her lovely breasts barely contained.
Jenny held out her hand to him and he stood and moved closer. She reached up and kissed him lightly on the lips. "Unhook me bra, pet," she whispered, turning her back.
With trembling hands Tommy obliged and Jenny let the bra slide down her arms and off, before turning to him, head held high and proud.
"Wha' d' ye think o' me tits?"
"They're gorgeous," Tommy croaked, his mouth dry. He bent and took a nipple into his mouth, sucking gently, nipping it with pursed lips, the sight of Jenny's lovely breasts vivid in his mind. She pressed his head against herself, moaning gently as he suckled, feeling her nipples getting harder, feeling too the moisture in her pussy. Tommy ceased his suckling and stood straight, pulling her against him, his arms around her, holding her close.
Jenny contented herself with being held for a moment, aware of Tommy's erection pressing against her. She broke the embrace and stepped back, grinning at him.
"I think y'd better get yer jeans off, pet, or y'll dee yersel' a mischief. Come on, we'll use me mam's bed." She reached out and took his hand, leading him out of the living-room, across the tiny hallway and into her mother's bedroom where a bedside lamp already glowed.
Tommy realised now that Jenny intended to let him bed her, realised too that he had no protection with him and despite his raging hormones spoke his fears.
"Jenny?"
"Aye, pet?"
"Are you... I mean, are we, y' knaa, gannin' t'..." His voice trailed off.
Jenny looked at him. "Fuck?"
Tommy nodded.
"Aye, pet, aal the way," said Jenny. "'Cos if we're not, I think I should have kep' me claes on."