This is my first story, so any feedback is greatly appreciated
(Also sorry about the lack of indentations, I can't add them for some reason)
On a trail overlooking the Meramec River, two lovers walked hand-in-hand, as they often did when they took hikes together. The river's bold, gleaming waters ran parallel to the trail off to their left side, providing a picturesque scene against a backdrop of oaks and white ash trees. The trail was about a hundred feet away from the water's edge, separated by a wide, flat bank and elevated by a steep slope.
Everything was going great, except for the fact that it was a blazingly hot, humid summer day, especially for June, and they were starting to regret their decision to come all the way out here. They hadn't seen a single other hiker so far, and they had been walking along the trail for over three hours. Sweat dripped down his face and chest, sticking his shirt to his skin. She had tied her hair up in a bun to keep it off her neck and hopefully stay cooler, but it didn't do very much. She was sweating profusely as well, and sweat ran down her neck and pooled in the band of her sports bra.
They had walked for a few minutes in silence and were approaching a bend in the river when she finally said, "Man, it's getting really hot," and shielded her eyes against the brilliant sun as if to prove her point. "Do you want to stop here for a while and eat lunch?"
"I think we need a break," he agreed. "But where are we supposed to eat?" he asked, indicating the lack of flat spaces or benches around.
"What about down by the river? Wouldn't that be so romantic, Nick?"
He chuckled. She, ever the bold and adventurous one, never passed up an opportunity to do something fun and unique, and always took risks. She was very headstrong too, so if she suggested something, he always had to go along with it. That was okay though, because as long as she was with him, he'd do anything.
"Well, I suppose it would be romantic. Let's—"
"Great," she interjected, grinning at him. Then she scrambled down the slope, slipping and sliding on loose rocks and dirt and using tree roots as handholds to get down to the bank of the river. She had already reached the bottom by the time he even started climbing down, going much more slowly and carefully.
She thought that a picnic by the river would be romantic, but there was another reason she wanted to go down to the river: Mud. She had always had, well, something for mud, and she always wanted to mud wrestle, especially with Nick. While up on the trail, she had spied a large patch of glistening mud on the outside bend of the river, the color of raw sienna, and probably a thick, sticky clay at least a foot or more deep. The mud would also be a fantastic way to cool down in the intense heat. He finally hopped down to where she was, completely oblivious to both the mud and her intentions.
Excited at the prospect of getting muddy, she started walking toward the river.
"Claire?" he asked. "Why not just eat right here?" He pointed to a convenient wide slab of rock that jutted out of the ground several feet away to his left.
"Sorry," she grinned, and she walked back to him. "That sounds good." She vaulted onto the rock with ease and helped him climb up. He took off the backpack he was wearing and dug out their lunch: Turkey sandwiches, chips, some trail mix, and an orange for each of them.
As they ate, he couldn't help but cast his loving gaze upon Claire instead of the scenery around them. The high sun shone down on her body, the sheen of sweat coating her skin seeming to make her glow. She had the body of a ballerina, strong yet lightweight, with big, gorgeous eyes the color of pale jade and velvety soft skin that made all other girls jealous when she wouldn't reveal her secret skincare routine. He wasn't all too familiar with it either, she didn't seem to have any products she used, but he didn't bother to question her. Framing her attractive face was her long, wavy, luscious hair, the color and texture of melted dark chocolate—he loved it more than any other part of her body. But really he just considered her looks a nice bonus to her personality: She had a loud, fiery spirit that was impossible to extinguish and made doing anything with her so much fun. Although she was reckless, she was also extremely intelligent, often using her clever wit in combination with sexual innuendo against him. They had met each other in college and were each other's first relationship. Now, a year later, they still loved each other just as much and were completely loyal. They had an open, honest relationship; in fact, one of them had once or twice walked in on the other masturbating, but they both laughed it off and only loved each other all the more.
Lunch passed relatively uneventfully, and once they had finished eating, he started to clean up. "Ready to go, angel?"
She blushed. She loved it when he called her that.
"Actually, I had an idea. See that over there?" she asked, pointing at the river.
"See what?"
"On the bank, right next to the water?"
He saw the mud she was pointing at but didn't think anything of it. "I have no idea what you're talking about."
"The mud!" she cried.
Nick laughed nervously. Knowing her, this couldn't be good. "Uh, what about it?"
"Don't you think it would be fun? Plus, it's good for your skin, and it would really cool us off."
Before he could respond, she kicked off her boots and socks, jumped down from the rock, and went running towards the river. Closer to the river, the bank quickly became softer and wetter and clung to her feet, forcing her to slow down. She started to wade deeper until her feet were completely covered and mud splattered the hems of her leggings. Still confused by what she was doing, he followed her, but kept his boots on and stopped a safe distance away once the ground started to become soft. He expected the mud to smell absolutely revolting, but it actually didn't smell that bad: It had a very faint smell like earth and salt.
She squished her feet around and thick, cool mud squeezed between her toes. "Oh my god," she said with a huge smile. "That feels... amazing." She pulled a foot out with a soft sucking sound, and the clay-rich mud hung on in thick layers like stockings, dripping and falling off in soft clumps. "Look at this stuff. It's so heavy," she said. The cool mud on her feet felt great—they had been trapped in her boots for the past few hours, so it felt so much better for her bare feet to be surrounded by the wet earth. She squealed like a little girl and kicked and splashed her feet in the muck.
"You must really like mud," Nick said, amused.
"Well, yeah, it's really... refreshing."
"Maybe if you're a pig," he laughed.
"What? No! You should at least give it a try," she said and began to make her way towards him.
"Um, I'm perfectly fine right here."
"You need to try!" she encouraged again and reached for his hand. Too slowly he tried to back away, and she grabbed him and pulled him towards her.
"It feels great, trust me," she said.