Letters To Leo Ch 01 Introductions

I'm not sure if this will work but, after an interesting email conversation with someone on here who had read my stories, I had an idea to try a self-referential series of emails based on exploring the potential development of those emails further. All names are obviously changed and only some of the content is true...

Would love to hear your feedback on whether this works or not.

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From: Feedback

Subject: Literotica: Feedback for LeoDaVinci

This message contains feedback for: LeoDaVinci

This feedback was sent by: RavenclawDarkholme

Comments:

Hey Leo,

I can't believe I am messaging you, but I just wanted you to know that I just read your story about Ellie and loved it. I especially loved the bit where Ellie took control of Laura and humiliated her. You have a real way with words that make me feel like I can see the whole scenario while I'm reading it.

It might help a little that I'm currently at university (Not telling you which one! :p) studying computing myself and have a roommate that is just like Laura called Hattie. She never seems to have any work to do and all the boys in our Dorm rooms just fawn over her all the time. They all think I'm a bit of a nerd and I don't really know what to do around them. Not that I'd want them to anyway, they are such dicks. Is it too much to ask for an intelligent guy who can have a conversation with me? (and then have his way with me afterwards...)

Anyway, enough of me rambling. Sorry, I do that sometimes. What I'm trying to say is that you really turned me on and I discovered some things about myself I didn't know and, I don't know how to say this, your words may have made me very wet... I may have cum when you described Laura peeing. I didn't even consider that was even a thing. I can't believe you wrote about it. Imagine actually doing that to another girl...

Can't wait for your next story,

Felicity

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From: Leo Da Vinci

To: RavenclawDarkholme

Thanks for your message Felicity, I appreciate your feedback. I'm glad you enjoyed yourself while reading!

I considered writing stories for a while and have been reading stories here anonymously for years but never quite had the guts to put anything online.

I'm intrigued what direction you are hoping the story will go next. Will Laura or Ellie end up in control? Who ends up getting together? What other new characters are there?

Thanks again for the feedback. It means a lot coming from a university educated fellow geek, especially a Ravenclaw, not sure I can compete with that level of intellect. Do most people understand the cross-reference to Mystique in your email? It's pretty clever. How like mystique are you? Are you blue and naked like a cold smurf?

Enjoy Ellie Chapter 2 in the next few days,

Leo

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From: RavenclawDarkholme

To: Leo Da Vinci

Leo,

I can't believe you got the Darkholme reference!! No one gets that. I love Mystique, from way back in the comics. I used to imagine when I was about 13 or 14 that I could transform myself into other people to get into parties and get people to do things I wanted them to do.

I loved the second chapter of Ellie, it had me so wet (I can't believe I'm telling you that). I want to admit something to you that I could never tell anyone, I am a bit of a secret nympho! (Promise you won't tell). I have probably orgasmed to your stories about 12 times in the past three days. I even did something else... I can't believe I'm about to tell you this...

So, I was lying in bed my fingers exploring between my legs while I went over the Laura and Ellie fight and I started to imagine they were your fingers and you were next to me and I was holding your hand inside my panties while you were on the phone to your wife. I got so turned on at the idea of forcing you to finger me while your wife was on the other end of the phone that I came twice in quick succession.

I then realised that I needed the loo, but (I can't believe you made me think of this) decided that instead of putting clothes on and walking down the corridor to the shared bathroom I was going to be incredibly naughty and just pee, right there in my bed. I got so wet thinking about it. At first, I couldn't do it, like my body was programmed to think it was wrong. I closed my eyes and pictured myself sat on the toilet though and suddenly I felt the warmth radiating through my knickers as I pissed through them. It felt so delicious and naughty lying in bed, a 20-year-old student, and deliberately pissing myself while playing with my clit. The best bit is, as I continued to masturbate I laid my head backwards and opened my mouth, picturing you above me (I have no idea what you look like but in my head you are tall, dark and muscular) and imagined taking your cock in my mouth while my left hand held your wife's hair forcing her mouth over my pissing pussy and imagining that I was forcing her to drink it while I sucked your cock. Leo, I came so hard that I had multiple orgasms, something I have never experienced in my life.

I can't believe you filled my head with such dirty ideas and fantasies. In my head, you will read this email and masturbate, imagining cheating with me, your secret geeky nympho on a dirty weekend away while your wife doesn't know anything.

Look forward to Chapter 3 eagerly... your wet princess Felicity