Again again, new characters, because I can't commit to a story. Any critique welcome! Don't hurt my feelings though...
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The *clack* of my keys hitting the floor next to her didn't register over the booming music of the club, and so I made a conspicuous show of reaching down to the floor a foot or so from her ankles. "Excuse me," I said, "Are these yours?"
She looked at me quizzically, then turning to her friends as she responded. "No? Girls? Yeah, I don't think so, sorry..."
Urgh. Now the hard part - so much worse when making eye contact. Especially with a girl so wildly attractive, dressed in (promiscuous) (hot) clubbing attire, with the smell of people and alcohol permeating the air.
"Are you sure?" I tilted my head slightly to the side, mouth slightly open to indicate confusion. "I'm pretty sure they're yours...since they're the keys to my heart." I grinned, embarrassed, but proud I had gone through with this particular sequence.
She let out an exaggerated sigh, pinching the bridge of her nose and massaging her eyelids. "Horrible!" she exclaimed, smiling through it.
Damn. She was really pretty. I'd really never gotten this far before.
I reached a hand out, less as a handshake, but open-palmed, in a gentlemanly request to dance, as if my intentions were anything but rough. Yet she grabbed my hand, not using it to close the already-small distance between us, but placing it on her waist. Exposed skin was plentiful, and it had the warmth of both exertion and a BAC that meant if we got out of here, I was driving.
At this distance, I could better notice the little and large details of her appearance: mildly flushed cheeks and slight shortness of breath for the aforementioned reasons, and more than satisfactory curves exactly where I like them - but who's looking? I, for one, was far more anxious regarding the state of my fingers on her skin. She slowly turned around, lifting my hands over her head and back onto her waist but more towards the front, as she grinded in sync with the music. Certainly a tent was being pitched, but my denim was stiffer than my biology.
This did not escape her notice in the least, though, and she increased her intensity, arching her back to whisper to me, most unfortunately affording an enticingly erotic view of perfectly round breasts slightly swaying as sweat made them gently cling to the fabric of her tube top. I leaned forwards to catch what she was saying.
'How big are you?"