This is a fantasy I've had for quite some time, and that has been growing in my mind more and more. This is my first attempt at a story, please give me criticism. I can handle anything you throw at me, but I would appreciate as much feedback as possible.
John is a military man, with a type a personality. He was 5'9", 180lbs, athletic build, short military hair cut, blue eyes, with a thick 7in cut cock. He didn't like to be told what to do, and didn't stand for bullshit. The surprising thing was, he wanted to wear panties. Not just wear them, but he wanted his wife Jill to make him wear them. Jill was smaller than him, standing 5'6" with fiery red hair (and a personality to match), small but perky 34B, with a slim little body. He wanted her to dominate him, to take control of him. He had brought it up to her on occasion, and they would role play, but it wasn't really her thing and it only really happened if she got really drunk. When it did happen it was more of her telling him to fuck her harder, and saying things like "Is that all you've got?!". He wanted more, but didn't know how to make it happen. So he resigned himself to looking at porn on the computer. He looked at sites like tsseduction.com where women would seduce men back home, get them all horned up and willing to do anything, and then pull out their giant cocks. Making the men suck them and get fucked, all the time the men ended up loving it. He always planned to eat his cum after he came, but could never actually bring himself to do it. He also enjoyed looking at cuckold sites, watching guys fluff other guys to fuck their wife and then cleaning up their creampie afterwords.
One day after he came home from work his wife was waiting for him...
"We need to talk."
Jill was sitting on the couch looking at their computer.
At first John had no idea what was going on, but as he came around he saw what she was looking at. He was horrified, was she going to divorce him? Oh man, oh man, this can not be good.
"Sit down John"
And John did, looking quite pale.
"So, this is the kind of thing you're into?"
"Well...I mean...it's just something to lookout. I mean, it's nothing really, just some harmless websites"
What happened next surprised the shit out of John.
"I'm in. But if we do this we do it my way. This is your chance to back out now."
"Okay...I...We don't have to do this if you don't want", but John desperately wanted this to happen. In fact, his cock was already getting hard.
"Go to the bedroom and wait for me there. And get naked"
John did just that, unsure of exactly what was happening. He went to their room, removed his shirt, shoes, pants and underwear and layed down, face up, on the bed. His heart beat was pounding in his throat unsure of how long he would be waiting. As it turned out he only had to wait a moment. Jill came in and started removing her clothes. She removed her pants, and underwear, started to take off her top and then stopped. John unsure of why she stopped started to speak.
"You know-"
She cut him off "Shut up, I didn't tell you to talk did I?"
"No" he replied rather meekly.
She climbed up on the bed, mounted her pussy on his face, facing away from him and said "Eat me"
He figured this was probably going to be like all the other times, where he would eat her to orgasm and then they would have sex until he came on her, then clean up and back to normal. What a surprise was he in for.
He slowly began to lick her pussy, stick his tongue inside, wiggling it around, but mainly focusing on her clit as that is what she really preferred to get off. She was rocking back and forth on top him getting wetter and wetter.