Here is my current comments at the random start of entries. If you aren't interested, the story is below. Bog water and all.
This series has gone long, and I don't mind as long as I am doing somewhat justice to a fetish I do not participate in. I research and read and find what I can and then have my own spin on it. If there is something I am missing, please email and tell me. I want to write well, but I don't want to do an injustice to my current content. I am a writer, not just a erotica writer. I want a good story and sex when needed (for erotica= lots, my normal writing= very little and mostly fade to black. Just what is needed for story)
In case it wasn't clear, nearly all of my series are intertwined. As was evident when one of the ponies became a cow. There may be more overlap in the future, I haven't decided where the stories are taking me.
If you have something that might make my stories more interesting or be more accurate, please let me know. I am looking for proper representation, at least without actively going to events. It's the act of dominance that I find exciting, and there are many ways I can focus that, with the right information.
Again, Not your Bog Water? Move on. Find something that is.
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Tori woke, stretching her hooves down to shaking her tail out. Across the hallway was Ka, her handler's other heifer and now next to her was the newest edition to the herd Po.
The newest heifer was now the property of John, the handler who lost Mena in calf-birth. It had been long enough since he had a ward. The owners had decided it was time for him to move on.
The heifer had given the proper response when confronted after being bred, showing submission to the Alpha heifer and earning herself a place in the herd. Tori would see how she felt after the pleasure from her cunt wore off.
Tori paced in her stall. There was talk about renovating the stalls, making them easier for the handlers to get product from their heifers and as a secondary benefit, it would make the space easier for the cows to get around in. But until then, Tori's udders ached from needing milked. Calling out to her handler, she was echoed by the others in support.
"I'm coming Tori!" Isiah assured her, hurrying to her stall and unlatching the door. "Come on, girl. Let's get you to the milker!"
Tori moved without a lead out of her stall, happily walking at her handler's side. Her tail wagged with every four-legged step. Her udders swung low, contained in a sling that simply kept the flesh from dragging the ground as they walked. There was a spring in her step as she followed the most important person in her life.
Once in the milking room Tori moved without direction to the milker, moving her udders to the proper position to be milked.
"That's my girl." Isiah crooned at his heifer, rubbing her ass as he hooked up the suction cups to her nipples. "They are going to be renovating the heifer barn so you will have to move stalls until your new one is done."
Tori mooed happily at her handler's words and then the suction of the milking machine started and the heifer's eyes rolled back and she started panting.
"I'm going to check on Ka, I'll be back soon." Isiah told the heifer who barely heard him, lost in the bliss of being milked.
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Po sat in her stall, laying on the mattress and thinking. Never as a pony had she been given such a soft mattress, or the mind-shattering sex she hadn't quite completely gotten over yet.
With the promise of a repeat, Po closed her eyes and replayed the encounter in her head. The face smashing thrusts sent tingles to her cunt. She would do it again...she would beg for it again.
Beside her there was noise as footsteps echoed down her hall. The heifer across the hall mooed at the man coming closer. It was a happy moo, the heifer was happy to see the man.
This was also new for Po. As a pony, she didn't mind her trainer, but he had never fucked her, just let her do it herself with the tack. Here, the bull had dominated her, and she had loved it. While in tack her releases could be in the double digits during a run, here it had been two, but two of the most intense she had ever experienced. Was she content trading one for the other?
Not that her choices were expansive. She was here because they wanted her to be here, for as long as she wanted to be here...and whatever else they wanted.
"Look Ka, here is our newest heifer." the male gestured at Po and she saw the other heifer size her up. "She's off breeding currently, but will be watching this evening. And Mika returned last night. He is so excited to see his herd again, and breed them. Let's get you ready before breakfast, and then get you milked."
Po watched as the other heifer leaned into her handler's touch, desperate for approval. The male comforted the female with a soft touch. She wanted to feel the soft touch of her handler, differently than her trainer.
"Good Morning Po, let's get your some breakfast. Being the newest heifer, you are in the last slot for bathing and milking, since you aren't making your own milk yet. But, on the bright side, you are the first to eat." John opened the door to the stall and stepped inside carrying a depositor for the paste they sustained themselves on. Po went to her handler, trying to touch him, to be affectionate so he would return the favor. "Aww, look at you. Already bonding with me, eh? I know you had someone to look out for you before hand."
Po nodded as the male paused and reached his hand down to caress his animal. As soon as his hand made contact, she pushed up to feel more. As she moved, he moved away.
"Aww, I understand. However, before there is any friendly petting, girl, there has to be some given from you. I know you understand that only sounds of the animal you are is accepted. Let me hear it." John instructed. Po almost made the familiar sound of a whinny, but stopped short. She was a pony no longer. Clearing her throat to formulate how to make the proper sound her handler wanted to hear.
"Mooooo!" Po spoke to her handler, trying to move closer to him.
"That's my girl. I knew I made the right choice coming back for you." John's hand caressed the female on the head, cheek and the back of the neck as he walked past her and let the machine deposit a set amount of paste into her trough. "Tonight we will see if you can be a good girl, since you will only be watching the breeding. I think it will be eye opening for you."