I will say that this is a name change and reedit of a previous story. If you read it before, I am sorry.
However the English has been improved, as has the smoothness of the plot.
Feedback is always appreciated.
Bazzle
Colliding Worlds
Sharon Andrews strode her long slim legs confidently down the carpeted central corridor. With her head held high, and her blonde shoulder length hair gently swaying, as she wore her power dressed formal weekday attire. Her firmly fitted black jacket, that hid the fact the white blouse hadn't yet been washed, having been dug out of her work bag half an hour ago, along with a below the knee black skirt. Her still rather crumpled black lace slip gently swished against her equally black stocking covered thighs as she purposefully moved forward. She had to keep focused on the mission that was in front of her, and not get distracted.
Sharon had just got out of the lift. She hated getting in on a Monday morning. Firstly it was scary looking at herself in the large mirror on the wall. Secondly she hated the jolts. It was, though, a hundred percent easier than taking the stairs. Now she had to get all the way across the office to her desk. It meant going between half a dozen waist high plain grey dividers with plastic screens that split the large bright and airy fourth floor office space out into several open plan pods. Her pod was the last one on the far right. With her stomach still churning from the lift it was still quite a distance away. Effort was required to get there. She had already walked a few blocks to get to the office building.
The advantage some could say was that her desk was in the most important corner, she had the ability that she could see out over everyone. It was also the closest to the kitchen for the all-important and the often necessary coffee run. By two pm she would predictably start yawning. The corner also gave her oversight, that she could hear all the gossip amongst the managers and subsequently laugh at them, when in the most sexist way possible called them all their 'clucking hens'. It was also in the corner, where she could slide down in her seat and technically hide from everyone. As more often than not she found that with her eternal throbbing headache she really needed too.
As it was eight fifty-eight and thirty seconds on Monday morning, her path was now clear. Sharon was almost always the last in, but no one seemed to care, as long as she was sitting at her desk bang on time. Sharon almost always got everything anyone needed done and as she was willing to stay on later than others, they respected her. It was even better if it coincided with a Friday night. It was easier to stay out if she worked later. She was the best at what she did, and management knew it.
Sharon took deep, regular breaths. She had been sucking on mints since getting in the lift the menthol was tickling her and clashing with the caffeine. Then focusing on her destination as she carried her takeaway cup of double espresso shot in her right hand, it was her third coffee of the morning. It was still not enough, she was contemplating having a fourth. Her black pleather handbag was on her left shoulder. She was polite and said morning to everyone by nodding or raising her mug. All whilst keeping one eye on the management offices and forcing a grin. Hoping to get to her seat as quickly as possible.
With a deep breath of preparation she sighed and quickly settled down in her black office chair as the clocks around the room clicked nine. Feeling safe and now hiding from everyone a wave of relief flowed across as she kicked her black 2" heeled shoes off under the desk. Instantly annoyed with herself as it was obvious that her chipped painted big toe was poking through the 40 Denier fabric. She was sure it was fine when she put them on. With her painted toe poking out she noticed that she really needed to find time to cut and paint them again. The carrier bag of last week's clothes was under the desk. She would carry them home later.
Sharon then stretched her neck hoping to remove the crick in her back from sleeping awkwardly again. Yet again falling asleep on the sofa was never a good idea. Then opened her drawer and amongst the stash of chocolate bars and emergency sweets, and two "if desperate" cigarettes she pulled out her pack of paracetamol popped two tablets through the silver foil into the palm of her hand. Then shoved them in her mouth and then swallowed them down with the remaining drips of her strong caffeine wincing in the process. She really hoped both the caffeine and the tablets would kick in sooner rather than later.
Her almost eternal weekday headache was loudly banging its large bass drum. What didn't help was it was assisted at certain moments by an untuned untimed warming up orchestra missing every note inside her still tired, very weary and rather delicate skull. She dug into her purse, pushed the black cotton fabric further down and then poking around found her lipstick and compact mirror focused on her face. She should have done It in the lift, but forgot. Her skin was scrubbed clean again this morning in a desperate attempt to feel alive, she had failed at that and also she hadn't time to put any makeup on. The large, tired bags under her eyes showed exactly how she was feeling. Shattered. Nothing could hide it now. Normally she would have covered it all up with foundation, but this morning, as with normal for a Monday morning she had been inevitably running slightly late. She had hit the snooze button on her phone three times too many. Sharon pouted her lips and applied the glossy red lip covering. She did this believing that alone it would help her appearance and by magic remove her headache and of course make her day go better. Then put everything away and through her thick rimmed glasses briefly focused on her computer screen attempting to start Monday for real and deal with the over the weekend emails.
"Ah Sharon, great you're in!" A loud voice coming from her manager soon disrupted her brief focus on the screen. His voice clanged around in her head coming out from his doorway. It travelled out over the top of the clattering of fingers on keyboards. Then in the style of a meerkat she quickly raised her head above the parapet of the divider and peered back over and nervously smiled in acknowledgement. Smiling hello. "Great, sorry to bother you, could you help me with something, nothing major I promise?" He practically shouted down the length of the room.
Everyone now knew that she was required. A double edged sword. With a deep breath she enthusiastically nodded and then instantly regretted doing so, as her brain sloshed within her skull as if it had disconnected itself from its anchors and was surrounded by wine. She politely smiled whilst looking at him and forced a big grin as a smile back at him in agreement.
"On my way." Her voice hoarsely crackled and croaked, the air from her lungs flowing up over what could have been sandpaper. In reality it was the effects of twenty or more Marlboro Lights Shazza had smoked yesterday. Sharon's lungs had done nothing but help her slowly walk this morning. Sharon quickly regretted talking as she then screwed her face up and brought her hand to her mouth as she shook as she hacked a cough. Having not spoken to anyone properly between saying good night to the taxi driver and waking up. Sharon needed to clear the Shazza sized frog that she had deposited in her throat.